The Princesses find themselves at war with their neighouring countries. Celestia seeks help from the only human on Equs, so her kingdom wont crumble under the influences of her foes. At first quite silly, but quickly turns into a more serious plot.
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Burn burn burn!!!!
Hahahaha get fucked nerds!!!!!!
He did tell them was a big bomb
Love your Story :)
It should be "avenge us" not "revenge us"
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Will edit it later. Thanks!
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Thank you so much ❤️
"Don't fuck with humanity."
Hoo, boy, I've been waiting for this chapter — and you didn't disappoint!
I'm really loving this story. Good amount of humor — but serious when it needs to be — fairly original plot considering how ridiculously standardized and mass-produced HiE stories have become, and you're building the relationship between Joseph and Celestia well. Not too quick, but not too slow; right in the Goldilocks Zone! Errors are few and far from crippling.
Favorited and following!
Keep it up!
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Thank you so much. Its good to hear criticism. Like that, I can actually know whether im doing a good job with the story or not.
I just wish a few of the dislikers would share why they didn't like it, so I could improve my writing skills.
Anyways, I am so glad you like the story so much. I hope I can continue it in an interesting way. The first 30k words were arch 1 (the war). Now starts arch 2 (aftermath and dealing with the magic sucking anomalies and potential romancy shenanigans). Let's see how it goes...
Hello there.
Sorry to say, but I am forced to remove your story from the Equestria at War group, since it does not take place in the actual Equestria at War universe. I advise you to read our rules and read up on the lore surrounding this universe, since it isn't as simple as "War in Equestria". Please take this into consideration next time.
Pony on!
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Sorry for the inconvenience!
Won't happen again ^.^
Anime
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Nani?!
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