The Princesses find themselves at war with their neighouring countries. Celestia seeks help from the only human on Equs, so her kingdom wont crumble under the influences of her foes. At first quite silly, but quickly turns into a more serious plot.
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Theres a few grammar typos.
10284655
More like an Oerlikon AA gun. But it could also be a Gau8 ;). Whatever your heart desires
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Gonna reread it later. If you would kindly show me where the worst errors are?
10284708
Well its mostly just " in places they shouldnt be, and one of the characters doesnt have a capital letter
take this
Luna got off on that. I know she did. Good job. Also we need these normal ponies with fully kitted out guns.....and Fluttershy to scream RIP AND TEAR UNTILL ITS DONE!
I really love this story.
Random space in some
“ in front of Luna
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trying to get my lazy shit together and write another chapter. Storys not dead dont worry. I'll update soon :=)
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thanks! im gonna fix those :)
glad you like the story
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Damn! Wanted to comment on that!
Well, I get the second best line in then: Rainbow Dash got off on that as well and that just from watching Luna fire it!