The Princesses find themselves at war with their neighouring countries. Celestia seeks help from the only human on Equs, so her kingdom wont crumble under the influences of her foes. At first quite silly, but quickly turns into a more serious plot.
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What I smell is jealousy?
Let the evil claws of jealousy slowly consume you. Let it flow through you.
Don't you mean radiochemistry rather than chemistry physics?
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Yes indeed. But usually people who study such things also studied a lot of chemistry, biology and physics as well. At least where I am from.
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Alrighty then. Carry on with the story, and nice detailing. Others would not put in the effort and detail you have.
Hopefully they can resolve this little triangle quickly. Love triangles are okay as long as they are not a major conflict in the story, otherwise I hate them.
Alright new chapter
Okay since you asked so nicely for a comment on what I liked about this fic of yours I'll answer. The Main things I like about this is Joseph's personality, the "Am smart, just do dumb shit for the Lols" characters are fun, and he actually makes calculated moves, and he has a bit more reason to do this than explosions are awesome to have nukes, he is using it as a tool to cope with depression. Now I will admit this isn't the most well put together fic, but like most of those that I enjoy it has at least a main focus. Which for this one it is helping, through nuclear warfare. What you focused on, the nukes. Are very well detailed. so yeah. Will say pacing chapter to chapter shifts a bit wildly from 0-60 but the pacing in each chapter stays consistent, which just that is difficult, at least for me it is. So things you could improve on are the details out side of the nukes and the pacing flow from chapter to chapter. hope you keep up the good work.
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Thank you for your comment!
I'll try my best to keep a steady pace in the story. The last thing i want it to make the pacing to fast or too boringly slow. At least im trying to xD
And yea, a bit more detail here and there couldn't hurt.
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FINALLY SOMEONE GET'S MY REFERENCE! XD