Coco's Lunch Break

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Gundamdragon

Gundamdragon #1 · Apr 2nd, 2018 · · 2 ·

This was good

DeadAccount101

DeadAccount101 #2 · Apr 2nd, 2018 · 3 · 1 ·

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Why....

randomguy9

randomguy9 #3 · Apr 2nd, 2018 · 1 · 2 ·

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Well, why'd you read something tagged "fetish" if you didn't want to see fetish stuff?

DeadAccount101

DeadAccount101 #4 · Apr 2nd, 2018 · · ·

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Fetish can mean anything, I also did not read what the story “contained”, so that’s my fault.

randomguy9

randomguy9 #5 · Apr 2nd, 2018 · 2 · 1 ·

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Maybe it was my fault for spoilering those, but yeah, that's there for a reason. I didn't want to spoil the events of the story, but at the same time I wanted to make it clear up front that this is going to weird out a lot of people.

It's fine if it's not your thing, but I wrote this for a very specific audience in mind.

Reykan

Reykan #6 · Apr 2nd, 2018 · 1 · ·

Not one for graphic digestion but really, this wasn’t. It came close and you know what happened, but it didn’t actually show any gore.

I tend to prefer vore as an extension of body exploration and thus enjoy non-lethal full tour stuff(death is the end of the fun so why would I want that?), but I can still appreciate this for the bits up to just before the perspective shift. And don’t worry too much about the down-votes. I wouldn’t be surprised if a lot were down-vote bombers due to the topic. I mean, no spelling or tense errors stuck out, and you described things pretty well. For what it is, it was pretty well done and I wouldn’t mind seeing you do other stories.

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