An abnormal shapeshifter from the Special Anomaly Squad somehow ended up in Equestria where the males are nothing but a bunch of pussy (RGRE of course)
Can't remember how this ended up in my "read it later" folder, but I'm glad it did. If not for your Author's Notes, I genuinely want to find out what will happen next... and how he will restock his metal supply. I look forward to seeing the next chapter.
The last thing I remember is I was in the middle of war zone with the rest of my squad, practically mowing down the enemy. Me, as a shield, shredding the bastards with a pair of minigun on each of my hand, suddenly I heard someone shouted ‘ION CANNON!’ and got blown off my feet or rather blowing my feet.
Is this a foreign language story translated into english or are you bad at singular / plurals.
Regardless, ask around for a proof reader, there are plenty of people here willing to help if you ask.
8917550 There are a lot of groups here on FIM. Many of these groups have a forums tab on their page. Several Forums have a "Looking for Proofreader / or Editor" section. I suggest hitting the "Human in Equestria" group. It may or may not have that subforum, but it is a good place to start.
Who knows, you may make another friend. Friendship is magic, after all.
Nope, I still have my personal things, thank god it was only my material that somehow disappears from my storage. But still, it doesn’t answer how the hell I lost so much stuff.
ha ha ha ha ha ha ha well he dun fucked
well now, the loss of so much metal is going to be inconvenient.
ahhahahahaha
This is good
I'm glad I read this
For some reason I was thinking of the theme song of one punch all I see is a hoof raised in the air as the doctor is screaming Because of that ending
Ha ha ha!
Can't remember how this ended up in my "read it later" folder, but I'm glad it did. If not for your Author's Notes, I genuinely want to find out what will happen next... and how he will restock his metal supply. I look forward to seeing the next chapter.
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1. I agree.
2. Nice profile avatar.
3. ONE PUUUUNCH!
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Thanks
Interesting idea, thats for sure.
Ill be keeping an eye on this. Its got great potential.
When is the next chapter?
Is this a foreign language story translated into english or are you bad at singular / plurals.
Regardless, ask around for a proof reader, there are plenty of people here willing to help if you ask.
The Monk
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Yeah I might need a proof reader or editor sometimes in the future, or now.
I don't know much people that are willingly edit my story, I only know one guy but he is already signed up on my other story.
At the meantime I'll try my best to correct it in my free time.
thanks for pointing that out for me.
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There are a lot of groups here on FIM. Many of these groups have a forums tab on their page. Several Forums have a "Looking for Proofreader / or Editor" section. I suggest hitting the "Human in Equestria" group. It may or may not have that subforum, but it is a good place to start.
Who knows, you may make another friend. Friendship is magic, after all.
The Monk
This is quite the natural reaction.
and that's when I die of laughter right there
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Yeah. I would say so.
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BEST LINE EVER! *DIES OF LAUGHTER FIVE DAYS LATER IS DISCOVERED BY NEIGHBORS*.
Está historia es muy interesante en cierto sentido
"Killing Machine" does not suit our character at all, he's more like a Cyborg juvenile child who acts tough
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To be fair, he has been deaged, so age regression is probably in play as well as switching species.
Disappeared
uh wtf