An abnormal shapeshifter from the Special Anomaly Squad somehow ended up in Equestria where the males are nothing but a bunch of pussy (RGRE of course)
Yes change the rating to M. Gives you more freedom to go into the murder sex and torture filled past of our little robo boy here.
And make the roles a full 180 cause I haven't seen any stories pull that off but I think you can. With having the stallions be all girly and needy for mares. But not big Mac. He still needs aj around but he still cool. Cause big Mac is cool no matter what.
Also you do get off topic a lot. Normally that's how the mind works with its train of thought but you pointed it out twice. It does great for showing off the characters past but not much for progress in the story. I'm not saying it's a bad thing at all but for me it felt like %55 of the chapter was about the past and demi-humans with mating habits. And really that's a story on its own. Cause that's sounds cool as fuck.
All in all I did enjoy the chapter and will be waiting for the next one
Yes change the rating to M. Gives you more freedom to go into the murder sex and torture filled past of our little robo boy here.
And make the roles a full 180 cause I haven't seen any stories pull that off but I think you can. With having the stallions be all girly and needy for mares. But not big Mac. He still needs aj around but he still cool. Cause big Mac is cool no matter what.
Also you do get off topic a lot. Normally that's how the mind works with its train of thought but you pointed it out twice. It does great for showing off the characters past but not much for progress in the story. I'm not saying it's a bad thing at all but for me it felt like %55 of the chapter was about the past and demi-humans with mating habits. And really that's a story on its own. Cause that's sounds cool as fuck.
All in all I did enjoy the chapter and will be waiting for the next one
I recommend upping the rating to M for more room to maneuver. As for reverse roles, don't make it a full on 180 turn. Maybe make it like 110° reverse
give this shit an M rating so you can go all out with what this dude can do
It should be moved to M
Nut cracking season already?
Nut cracking!? Call the Quinx Squad! (Bread to who gets the reference)
Guys in skirts Go for it!
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That's called a kilt
Stop at clothes, or have both ware the same thing. But it's your story do what you think.
What is this crossed over with?
Snu Snu.
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Bio shock series.
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MAKE IT M!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY! Also, make the males pathetic. It amuses me~
8841001 A totally legit method of handling any kind of situation!!!
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UTLIAKILT!
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