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Okay now that last bit was just PERFECT, let me guess, you are a Jurassic Park fan too, now all you need to use in the story is 'Clever Girl' at some point.
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Hey Dusk,
And actually, this quote has double-meaning. Yes, it IS a Jurassic Park reference, But secondly, it was this quote that rejogged Daring’s memory about what REALLY happened inside the Shrine that Life, Aka Breana, made her and Leopard forget about until a pregnancy was confirmed. Now that she remembers, she’s heading home to throttle Life!
Also, I’ll see where I can sneak in “Clever Girl” at some point as well.
BTW, I've always wondered if the USS Cyclops should make it's apperance. What do you think?
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Hello SirAlcatraz,
And sadly, the USS Cyclops won't be appearing in this story. However, she DOES appear in a somewhat major role in another one of my stories. To hear all about her, just read my story called "Bermuda Beginnings."
I IMMEDIATELY thought of Cave Johnson when i saw that line! Good on u if it was intentional! Otherwise, still a good reference.
I feel you did "gunny" some honor with that full metal jacket segment.. may he rest in peace
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Hello Shadowshooter45,
And I’m glad that SOMEBODY finally mentioned this scene in their comment! I’m glad that you enjoyed it, and it took me a while to figure out what to say in it!
Word of advice: spell out numbers less five letters. Follow this: one, two, three, four, five, six, seven, eight, nine, ten. Anything above that you can do its numbered form, like 11 or 12. I usually tend to keep numbers to a minimum though, kind of messes me up, but that's just me. (I knew Journalism would teach me something)
Correction: Life's boss is Bob Ross. He beat the devil out of the competition.
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Yeah, I was wondering about that too. I'll take that into account for when I work through the goofs, and other errors in the story once I finish it.
And Bob Ross is Life's manager because he beat the devil out of competition, got it!
Bruh really the fucking full metal jacket reference
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Hello Killerkongers,
And yes, there IS a Full Metal Jacket scene here. And so far, everyone’s enjoyed it except for you.
Ah yes The “Gunnery Sargent Hartman” experience I still chuckle every time someone uses those lines
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Hello Wapish,
And yes, this has been a really popular chapter because of those scenes where Leopard becomes "The Gunny" to scare those cadets.