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Love the new chapter and I like how you brought our RP characters into this chapter too, I can't wait to see how we work that part into our RP too, it would be cool if we do more detail stuff of what happened later on in it. Though I think that with some Rune Magic on the RP Equestria we could punch open a portal from there to this fanfic world again, maybe even make a portal like the one to Human Equestria too where Sunset it at, speaking of which do you think you will have Leopard go through the portal to that world sometime soon?
Nice chapter to close the doors on questions. Although i can FEEL the forshadow.
Wow
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Hey Dusk,
And I'm glad that not only did you like the chapter, but you also enjoyed my bit where I overlapped it with our RP story. And I think that it could be soon. I was thinking after the Triple Coronation and Leopard's public wedding to Luna, but just before the trip to the Dragon-Lands.
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Hello Sanguine Blade,
And yes, the foreshadow is indeed VERY strong with this story! Makes you wonder what's gonna happen next, am I right?
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Hello marcus112,
And is that a good wow, or a not good wow?
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It's good can't wait for the next chapter
And the seeds of realization start to settle in. What will happen to our Bat-Pony Hybrid hero? Will Jeff Coleson reveal the location of New Vegas? AND WHEN WILL WE GET TO SEE THE FUTA EMPIRE AGAIN?! Find out next time, on Beyond the Express!
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Sweet, I can't wait to see what you write up, also do you think you can add more parts from our RP to this story in the future as small sneak peeks of the RP we are doing so people will get interested into it.
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Well, heads up, it’s an EXPLICIT clop-chapter, but yet at the same time, it contains EXTREMELY valuable information for the future, so please do not skip it!
(It also contains the very first titjob that I’ve EVER put into one of my stories, plus the very first facial.)
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Sadly, this was Jeff Coleson’s first, and final appearance in “Beyond the Express”. HOWEVER, he WILL be back in the sequel, so stay tuned!
And Chapter 28. The Futas WILL return in Chapter 28! I just have to finish 27.5, and THEN I’ll write Chapter 28!
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I’ll see what I can do Dusk. It’s going to be difficult, as this story only has 3 Chapters left, but don’t worry, I WILL slip in a few hidden Easter eggs from our RP story, so keep your eyes open for them!
(Comment made for the sole purpose of having an even number of comments. I'm VERY OCD about this!)
I would berate you one last time for your crimes...but I would be a hypocrite saying I have a clean slate. Hell, I've probably done far worse things than you.
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Hello KriegsTruppen,
And this time, in this chapter, I finally revealed the final details surrounding the final demise of the BWO, and the immense guilt, and seeking penance for the crime. Yes, the debt will never be fully repaid, but after that night, we finally came to terms with the whole affair and how wrong we were, and how evil our actions were.
However, I haven't revealed WHY some things happened the way that they did yet, and while I have hinted at something much bigger than just simple racism in the past in "Battleship Express", there was another force at play in this event, as well as the rest of the world wars, and this same force was what caused everything to happen the way that it did. This force has revealed itself in both "Battleship Express", and "Beyond the Express", but it has yet to reach its full power. Who, or what is this force? Well, I'll leave it up to you to guess until I reveal it later on down the line.