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Damn, I didn't think the curse on that temple was still active and a sphinx would be cruel like that to them, also how long will she keep them in the temple?
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Hey Dusk,
And I pretty much flat-out said it in the chapter, but just in case you missed it, that's NOT a Sphinx! That "Sphinx" is a physical incarnation of Life! Throughout this story, I've keep implying that soon, Life would FINALLY get her revenge on me for keeping her from Finding a Way, and now, (maybe!) she did! Life was the "Goddess Breana" all along! She enjoys taking the form of a Sphinx, because as the answer to the riddle was, Sphinx's are representations of riddles, what greater riddle is there than Life itself? Now, Life's perhaps FINALLY Found a Way, and She no longer hates Leopard, at least for now.
Make sense now? Read back through that part of the chapter after reading this bit, and hopefully is will.
Well. If it werent for the fact you may have children. I would say there wasn't a downside to this scenario. Get an ancient book, have sex, get money...aside from the chance of having SEVEral children thats a no lose scenario
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Hello Sanguine Blade,
And at the beginning of the next chapter, the aftermath of this situation will be explained, as well as how Daring and Leopard, as well as "Breana the Sphinx" aka Life, get back home. The chapter will then be about the Wonderbolts, however, at the very end, it will cut back to Daring, and be about her again. I won't spoil anything, but yet, I'll leave you with this until the chapter is done. ALL actions have consequences!
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Alright bro. Just letting you know about it.
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Thanks. Also, just in case it wasn't clear in the chapter, Todd and Fluttershy were together for almost 5 months before Todd proposed, even though it doesn't seem like it. He met Fluttershy in June of 2029, he proposed to her in December of 2029, and they were married the following April. A somewhat long span of time compressed into a handful of scenes.
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I don't ding you on the marrage bits as i can see months are passing quickly in tgem. It's more the beginning that i have issue with, as well as how some of the mane 6 act. All your custom characters (the Battleship Express and battalion 4009 and missy and whoever else you bring in not of the cannon) I can't really comment on how they act as long as it's believable. Some of the beginnings feel rushed and are only there as plot points. Others aren't as bad. (Missey for example i can believe.)
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Yeah, I know, and like I said, I'll try and do better for the future.
And Misty (Todd's cat) is one of many pets that belong to the crewmen of the Battleship Express. Aside from Aurora though, (Leopard's wolf) they really don't receive too much mention. They will at some point, but I'm still working out how to do that. Unless we're not talking about the same thing. You said "Missy". Did you mean Todd's cat Misty? Or another character? (It can be hard to keep minor characters straight sometimes.
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I ment the caribu cow.
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That's what I figured, but I wasn't certain. Thanks for clarifying.
...I take it back...the Sphinx is the worst thing in the undiscovered west! Jesus...my (late) brother would have had a great time taking its pelt and head as a trophy (In case you could not tell in our private chat, I, my brother, and most of my men, are trophy hunters. It's not a moral thing to do, but dammit does it get you some respect)
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Whoa. Well, I can sympathize with you there, as we of Battalion 4009 take war trophies from our enemies as well.
And for Breana's sake, (soon to be respelled "Briana" once I fix the errors in the story) I'm glad that I found her, and not you. And yes, despite what it says at the bottom of the chapter, Breana is indeed the Sphinx from "Daring Done". After her defeat by Sonambula, she fled to the Undiscovered West, where she was found by the Tribe of the Marakeets, and they worshiped her as their Goddess. She lived in the Lunar Shrine of Romance, and was doomed to reside there until someone could solver her riddle. Once I did, then she was free to leave.
I'll explain more about this when I rewrite that part, but since it's canon, and not spoilers, I'll just tell you this now.
I came back to this one to recommend something you totally should have done. Life doesn't read old books like hitchhikers guide to the galaxy so you just reverse-riddle her. Ask her 'What is the answer to life, (herself in this context) the universe, and everything? The answer here would be 42 because Forty-two is the ASCII code for the symbol * also known as the asterisk. This symbol is often thought to translate to anything or everything. In this instance, 42 = everything, the meaning of life. (I copied this from google but still, my point stands.) Basically what is the answer to life herself... this would be super effective because your basically asking life to answer what she even is. You would have broke her. Completely.
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Hello Ninja_Master6545,
And I had no idea about this when I wrote this scene almost 4 years ago. At the time, I was struggling so much to come up with what Briana the Sphinx was. It had to be something extremely powerful, yet still believable, and could somehow tie into Leopard's own life experiences, and in the end, I decided to go with the idea that "Briana" was actually a physical manifestation of Life Itself. Granted, at the time I didn't really think that this idea would work, and it would receive a lot of hate, but to my surprise, not very many people really mentioned it, and those who did were surprised that I went this route, but I received very little, if any negative feedback about it. Plus, this whole scene was meant to center around clop/sex between Daring Do and Leopard, so Briana/Life took a bit of a backseat. Though looking back with what you said in your comment, I wish that I'd known about this at the time of writing, as it could have made it even funnier