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DAMN DREN! that was brutal!
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Hello ShadowShooter45,
And yeah , this WAS pretty brutal! This scene was a while in coming, and I’ve been planning on doing it ever since I read a similar scene from another story. I can’t remember which one, but I took the concept, altered it, and made it fit into the end of this chapter. I’m glad that you enjoyed it though!
I loved how you had Leopard show Dren his Office/Trophy Room, that was great and not to mention him meeting Breana was sweet too, though it's too bad you don't have her take an Anthro form, I bet then anyone would LOVE to get stuffed between her bust. Also I like how Leopard really lays into Dren when he bad mouths Leopards writing style, saying that Yearling could write better then him, that was great how Leopard got into his face like that. So his Mask and Axe are also on display there, nice touch with that, it makes it easy for Leopard to find them and take them with him when he needs them again. However there at the end I was shocked that you would use that KKK Suit as part of the story, I can't stand the KKK at all since I got several friends that are African American.
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Hey Dusk,
I'm glad that you liked this chapter. It took me a VERY long time to write, and I put so much thought into it as well.
Oh, and while Breana may be a regular Sphinx, (sort-of, as remember, she IS still a physical representation of Life!) she STILL likes to cuddle people close to her at times, especially Leopard! And since she can change size at will, it makes it VERY hard to get away from her!
And that scene where Leopard yells at Dren for making fun of his writing? I actually got the inspiration for that scene from the movie Goosebumps. To be specific, the scene where Zach is trying to get R.L. Stine to admit that he's R.L. Stine, and he talks about Steven King, causing R.L. Stine to give him a similar yelling to what Leopard gave Dren.
And that one scene with the KKK robe was NOT intended to be a joke. Like you, I too ABHOR the KKK, and all racism. However, before you do anything, let me explain myself. The truth is, the "Battleship Express" storyline that you read here is NOT the real "Battleship Express". There is a non-Pony version as well, as well as other books explaining WW3-5, though I'm still in the process of writing them. It too had this outfit in it, and the explanation was the same. And I've mentioned this before in both "Battleship Express", and the chapter of "Beyond the Express" that talks about Leopard's life, but that KKK outfit was in there, and it did serve a purpose, albeit a twisted one.
Here's the scoop. WW4 and WW5 were fought against the Black World Order, also known as the One Race Empire. This empire believed that ALL majority races MUST be exterminated, or put to work serving the minorities. Over the course of WW4, somehow, (exact records still remain unclear) all minority races were absorbed into the Black Race. The Good Guys lost WW4, and the BWO ruled the world for a time, but there was danger at every turn. Most Allied forces retreated out to sea, or underground, and continued to fight back viciously. One group that fought the BWO was called the Futa Kingdom. Ruled over by Queen Boudica, as well as her 2 daughters, Princess Demetria, and her sister, Princess Natasha,they helped the Allied Forces fight back, and WW5 began.
However, the BWO had a contingency plan in place that would wipe out not only all of Humanity, but also destroy ALL of Earth! The Allies could not let this happen, though how they went about stopping it, is one of the most horrendous actions in Human History. WW5 was the war that almost completely annihilated Humanity, but what happened to end it was an event so horrendous, that it's been erased from the history books. There was a manufacturing firm located in South Carolina called Spencer's Outfitters, named for it's "beloved" founder, Richard Spencer. This firm cranked out KKK uniforms at breakneck speed, and provided them for any Allied soldier who wanted one, and even those who DIDN'T want one! The soldiers wore these into battle, and while wearing them, laid waste to their enemies in what came to be known as "Operation Salvation". Every man, woman, child, and infant who were under the banner of the BWO was slaughtered without mercy. The justification used was that the Black Race itself had become so corrupted that it was truly irredeemable, but few have accepted this as an answer for killing almost 2 billion people. The man who oversaw the action, US General Micheal Sumner, later committed suicide because of his actions. (Later on, his son, Charles Sumner, would become general of all US forces during WW6 against the Futas.)
Leopard himself had his KKK uniform, but was appalled, and ashamed of it. He wore it only a few times, and like I said in the chapter above, hated it, and tried to bury it and forget about it, but it keeps coming back. Dren was the most recent one to find it, and Leopard just barely kept him from finding out the truth. Time and time again he considered destroying it, but yet, he refrained from doing so. The way he saw it, there would come a time when the world would claim that the events caused by those in the KKK outfits had never happened, so he held onto his as a testament, though at the same time, he saw it as the hellish nightmare he could never escape from. As I'll discuss in Chapter 27, Leopard has nightmares involving that outfit coming alive, grabbing him, and dragging him straight to Hell for his crimes during WW5. He wakes up screaming, and eventually decided to lay the past to rest. He, as well as the others on the Battleship Express who were involved with "Operation Salvation" meet to discuss what they did, and a few are found to have hung onto their KKK outfits as well. Some finally burn theirs, but through it all, Leopard still hangs onto his, though he locked it back into that trunk, along with the pictures of him wearing it, and had Breana throw away the key. He then labeled the crate "Forever Abandoned", and then leaves it in his Relics Archives to be lost to time once again.
I hope that this was a sufficient explanation for the KKK outfit.
And on a happier note, what did you think about the chapter's ending where Dren brutally roasted Blueblood?
As much as I like your story I am black American so why would you think playing the KKK in your story will be a good idea and seriously I hope you come up with a better chapter than this story is good just leave out some of the black racial stuff okay
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Hello marcus12,
And please, before you get angry with me, please let me explain myself.
When I added this bit, I already knew that I was playing with dynamite. It was a bad idea to keep it in, but I NEVER intended to insult anyone. I HATE racism, Race Supremacy, and the KKK. With this bit however, it’s something that exists in the original storyline of a book that is the prequel to the REAL “Battleship Express”, and not the Pony version. Like I said before in the actual chapter, Leopard HATED himself for still having that KKK outfit, and kept trying to make the past die. I said that he NEVER was a part of the actual KKK, but that he only had the outfit due to them being distributed during WW5 to the Allied Forces. Leopard tried to forget the past, but it keeps coming back to haunt him.
Don’t worry though. I’ve sunk myself into this hole, and have a plan to save myself from it, all while also redeeming Leopard. In Chapter 27, Leopard will be plagued by terrifying nightmares of him being condemned to Hell for his racist actions, and he always wakes up screaming. Eventually, he, along with others who also still had their KKK outfits, meet in private to discuss what they had to do. ALL of them want to destroy the past, and seek forgiveness for past sins. All but 2 of the KKK uniforms are destroyed by fire, with one being locked away in the Battleship Express’s archives to never see the light of day again, and Leopard lays his outfit to rest forever as well.
After Chapter 27, neither these outfits, nor the KKK will EVER be mentioned again. It was just these few scenes, and I regret having some of my characters be a part of this. Chapter 27 marks the final departure from this sensitive topic, and the Author’s Notes will also include a sincere apology, and a promise to never again talk about things like this, unless it was intended to be a joke, but even then, I just won’t.
Again, I SINCERELY apologize if I offended you, and I will fix my mistakes.
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Hey is not really much of a big deal I just get kind of a little bit tight stuff on every time somebody meant something about you know races and stuff like that anyway can't wait till next chapter and when will he meet his son from the futas and maybe you can save the other futas before Sombra ends up getting to them the saying and it will be kind of interesting.
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Hello marcus12,
And I'm glad that you understand.
And the Futas will return in Chapter 28. Chapter 26 is in the works right now, and believe me, it will be AMAZING!
And Leopard will only catch a glimpse of his son at the very end of this story. It'll take him a while to put all of the pieces together, and when he does, he flips! He realizes that one of the Futas that he saw in Ponyville was Carla, his long-believed dead fiance, and the kid that he just saw with her was their son! However, nothing further is done about this in "Beyond the Express". The story will end on a bit of a cliff-hanger, and won't really be addressed again until 4 stories later! Don't worry though, 2 of the stories are short stories, but the one in the middle is a HUGE collab story! I won't spoil too much yet, but the sequel to "Beyond the Express", "Tracks Backwards", will turn EVERYTHING that you THOUGHT that you knew about the whole "Battleship Express Universe" on its head!
Then, in the next story, "Battleship Express: Back in Action!" The Futas all come back for one final showdown against the Americans, and the War Train that destroyed them the last time. Leopard gets back together with Carla, and for the first time, his son, Leo, has his mother, AND his father in the same room! It only took 7 years, but it's gonna happen!
It's going to be SO AWESOME, but stay tuned, because when the Futas come back to "Beyond the Express", they ain't gonna be leaving until the FINAL finale, and believe me, that's REALLY gonna be a fight to the finish line!
I was literally paused with Codsworth in front of me while I read the part About General Atomics
Leopard, i'm going to tell you a little secret...not every black person was killed. Many fled to Europe, specifically Germany and the IGS. Hell, I have blacks UNDER MY COMMAND as of now. They are some of the finest fighters i've ever had the pleasure of fighting next to.
Though many have already forgiven those responsible for the crimes (yes, killing an entire race, regardless of reason, is against the Geneva Convention and the International Rules of War), some have not. Take my First lieutenant, Abraham Izen. He is a good friend and an even better fighter, but he has not forgiven those responsible for the near extinction of his race. He lost his father and mother, despite being innocent. But instead of being cold and ruthless, he takes his emotions and turns it into an energy that gives him strength.
When we meet, try not to antagonize them. Abraham has a vicious temper at time, but he tries to harness it.
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Hello KriegsTruppen,
And as unpopular as this may be among those in Battalion 4009, I say thank God. As you will later see in a future chapter of "Beyond the Express", (I think that it was Chapter 28) MASSIVE amounts of guilt were felt by those who committed those heinous acts against the Black Race.
However, we were all deceived, and Humanity was on the brink of extinction. To give a bit of context, WW4, WW5, and the spaces between them were the darkest chapters in Human History. World Population dropped from 7 billion, all the way down to just above 3.5 billion. The BWO had become so corrupted and evil that "corrupted", and "evil" didn't even describe them anymore. Yes, not ALL black people went along with the BWO, but a majority did. The BWO vowed to wipe the Earth clean of minority races, or destroy the world trying. During this time, near total anarchy reigned in the few remaining world governments, including the US, and some twisted individuals seized advantage of the opportunity, and decided to take matters into their own hands.
They informed US President Greg Peterson that the BWO HAD to be wiped out for the sake of all Humanity, and that WW5 MUST be finished as quickly as possible. However, this rouge group of army officers authorized the creation of white, hooded KKK robes for the Allied forces to wear, and wooed them to help wipe out the BWO by appealing to their sense of avenging those lost in WW4.
This is where the massive appeal for revenge came from Kriegs, WW4. I lost my ENTIRE family, save my brother Dren, my wife Ell, my 2 kids Max and Sierra, ALL of my friends and other relatives, and literally EVERYONE I loved and cared about! ALL GONE!!!!! Hell, I even watched my parents get SLAUGHTERED right in front of me! I wanted revenge for my loved ones, as did so many others. And we got it.
We wiped out the BWO, and according to the latest estimates, 95% of the Black Race as a whole. Of course, we had no idea of what we were really doing, as we were blinded by our lust for revenge. We never suspected that we'd been lied to until MUCH later, and when we did, we were HORRIFIED! However, it gets much worse than this. Due to the near total collapse of the world governments in WW4, and WW5, plus curbing out of control KKK gangs, and SO MANY other issues, no one noticed the Futas rising to power in what was left of Eastern Asia. Because of our horrific actions, we missed the rise of the Futas, and we could have stopped it right then and there, but alas, because of our sins, we did not. WW6 happened because of the mass genocide, and we would all pay an even higher price for it.
And don't worry, I WILL be EXTREMELY careful If and when I visit the IGS. I'll be EXTREMELY respectful of everyone, ESPECIALLY any black folks, and NEVER talk about my past!
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Although do you want to hear a secret from me? The truth is, I've already BEEN to Germany, and I NEVER want to go back!
Back during WW6, in April of 2028, the Battleship Express was temporarily knocked out of action due to a sabotage attempt. The Futa agent responsible, Sally Face, was later hunted down and killed, but the train was knocked out of action for 4 months while emergency repairs were undertaken.
During this time, the train's crew, and others in battalion 4009 wanted to keep fighting the Futas, myself included. There were flyers floating around requesting US Soldiers aide efforts to hold back the Futas in Europe, so with permission from Major Don, about 800 of the 1,200 men and women in Battalion 4009 boarded supply ships, and were sent off to Europe. We arrived first in England, and then we were sent to France. Once we were in France, we were sent off to wherever we wished to be assigned to fight.
I was a bit of a latecomer due to my hesitating a lot, and I just told them to place me where I was needed most. BIG MISTAKE! I was given a ticket, and put on a train to Germany, along with a few others. 2 days later, we found ourselves in the bowels of Hell itself, Berlin! Yes, we were in BERLIN, GERMANY, the city located less than 10 miles from the front lines! Our job was to help hold the Futas, and see what we could do about driving them back.
What I had to experience while in Berlin was PTSD from WW3-the first half of WW6 all over again. We were in trenches outside of the city defending it, and were under near CONSTANT attack! To my credit, I did kill at least 200 Futas, but my unstable mind soon collapsed. 2 months into my deployment in Germany, I was removed from the front lines, and sent back to the US for psychiatric evaluation. I spent the rest of the 2 months helping with the Battleship Express's repairs, and once the train was ready, Don ordered all Battalion 4009 members home again, and they all came back. 2 months of a 4 month deployment before being withdrawn because of a mental breakdown brought on by Shell Shock.
Following my return to the US, I NEVER spoke of my trip to Germany with ANYONE! I tried to forget everything that I had to see and experience, but I was unable to. Still to this day I'm haunted by what happened in Germany. I saw it during the war KriegsTruppen, and I NEVER want to go back again, at least, not for a LONG time! It's still too traumatic for me to even consider for the time being.
okey, yea that was a pretty good Roast, :P
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I'm glad that you liked it. I heard a similar roast against Blueblood in a different story, which inspired this scene, but alas, I cannot remember what it was anymore. It was a story that involved soldiers who came from Earth, but I can't remember what it was. This was also a very popular scene