• Member Since 19th Oct, 2017
  • offline last seen Sep 1st, 2020

RWBYDragon


You can also call me Roze Gunn. I like anime, games, and music, among other things. I wish to become a game designer as my career. If you want to contact me, you can follow me on Twitter @RWBYDragon.

Comments ( 14 )

Who will these ten main characters be?

8661939
Well, I want some of them to be a surprise... but let's just say it's a motley crew of characters you wouldn't expect.

8661764
Thank you! I'm sorry I haven't worked on the second episode much lately, but I'm trying. I have school stuff that's come up like a term paper, and I've been sick. I hope you will enjoy the episodes to come!

8662874
Thanks! I know the dead relative thing is a cliché, but It's actually a reference. I won't say what the reference is because of spoilers, but trust me, uncle wasn't a first pick.

8665235
Oh my god... You changed your avatar... Do you know deh way, bruddah?

I just wanted everyone to know, I have been editing the chapters released so far, but I've mainly just been fixing some phrasings and this problem with double spacing that I noticed. However, I did add one paragraph to episode 1 that I think is important.

Thus, Spitfire and Roze then made their way outside to the football field, which had the school track running around it. The track was about 400m long and was the standard brick red you would expect. As they walked towards the field, Roze took a moment to examine the school from the outside. He was a little rushed before and had not yet bothered to examine the prestigious school. The school was most definitely huge, having the two sections on either side of the entrance extend further forward than the wall of the lobby entrance, similar to the shape of a horseshoe. The yard surrounding the school, which was so well kept and crafted they could be considered works of art in their own right, were tactfully sprinkled with beds of flowers of all colours and carefully shaped with perfectly groomed bushes and hedges. A lone, impressive, marble statue of an ever-vigilant stallion stood guard in the middle of its fountain throne in front of the grand, aristocratic, lavender building. The building itself had so many windows that in the bright and intense sunny day it appeared to be made of crystal, and shone and sparkled like a holy beacon. The harsh, cloudless sun bathed the school in an almost blinding haze and added a distorting wave to the scenery, creating an almost ethereal veil over the school's beautiful radiance, and leaving Roze entirely unable to determine anything within the school's facile walls. The yard behind the school remained eternally Spring-locked in its verdant hills and hollow beauty. The yard also held the fields for the various sports that the school facilitated, such as football, baseball, track, and etc. As Roze stared, fixated, on the school, he now understood how the school earned its nickname and motto: 'The Royal Garden, where possibility comes to bloom.'

Comment posted by RWBYDragon deleted Apr 19th, 2018
Login or register to comment