Long ago two alicorns ruled over a mystical land where friends were always together both alicorns became embodiments of two elements, used to forge legendary lands love and friendship. Both alicorns became bitter and lost the ability to wield such elements, one being sent away outcast to live in darkness the other angry and filled with regret and hatred for the ponies she vowed once to protect thus throwing the land into darkness.
This is: the Brocken Alicorn.
If the word Brocken is meant as the present tense of broke them you spelled it wrong
It's broken
8598795
Sorry I happen to be dyslexic so spelling reading writing all that jazz is real har but thanks I'll fix it right away
8599256
It's ok. I can understand that. Reading and writing always helps with that. It took me a while to get better at writing. I know that soon enough you'll be a really great writer
8599423
Thanks so much!! I actually got in to writing fan fiction because of my dyslexia
8599431
Well with enough practice and dedication you'll be a great writer. Even with dyslexia. I believe in you!
8599433
You have no idea what that!means to me! All my life people have called me stupid! It just means a lot.
8599473
I hope that if people are mean to you about it it doesn't get to you because I've met people with dyslexia
Reading this made my thumb turn red.
8599642
Sorry to hear that I now I'm not a very good writer... Any critic is excepted!