Cherry Blossom is a young unicorn living in a nameless town of earth ponies. Her life is quiet and nothing she usually tends to clash with a certain member of her class. One day she meets a strange can and her entire life changes. Can this filly who hasn't even earned her Cutie Mark survive the adventure of her lifetime?
Comet Blaze is a young unicorn who is a student to a very power Archmagi. He is studious, detailed and blindly loyal to his master. He also has a curiosity that his master deems to be a liability. On his first field assignment, young Comet Blaze plants himself a small seed of doubt for the future his master envisions. How will this colt grow and develop on his journey to discover what he wants to believe in?
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Edit: Added Sugar Belle due to her appearance and speaking roll in chapter 6.
Edit: Added the CMC and Nurse Redheart since they to now had speaking rolls as of chapter 8, as well as a new description for the story.
Edit: Changed up the Character tabs to account for how the story will revolve. Sugar Belle is still there, but added Starlight and took out the CMC to add Other. I'll be leaving this line up here, as this mostly accounts for any other pony that may enter the story as cameos.
Am I correct in assuming Twilight will be mentioned repeatedly in this story?
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Yes and no. The first part was referencing Flurry Heart, and that does put Twilight in the relative seat. The second one is all Twilight though... I'm really going to have to figure out how to use this comment system. Having a bunch of numbers show up when you're trying to reply just looks weird.
I like where this story's going. I look forward to seeing what happens next.
I prefer third person, myself.
If Cherry Blossom and Comet Blaze were voiced, what would they sound like?
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That's an interesting question. I guess that's up to you to be honest 😅. Me personally I love the clamp animes, so I read their lines with Sakura Kinomoto's and Syaoran Li's voices. I guess I should reverse the question. Who do you hear speaking when you read their lines?
The Potions seem like decent folks. Too bad they're keeping such lousy company...
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Unfortunately, it's not like they have too many options 😓
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I don't know for sure. I haven't read the story yet, so it depends on how I see their personalities. It's why I was asking you, honestly. Please respond to this comment.
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Here's the problem though. I can't tell you how to read the story. I can tell you what I hear and I see when I go back and read it, but those are my experiences. I can't force them onto you. A person's voice and personality don't really correspond with each other and me telling you 'Imagine -insert person's voice here- is saying these lines' can't help you distinguish that character's personality. You just have to make up your own voice when reading.