Hayden swayed a little after the teleport, struggling not to fall over. She felt little chunks of ice flake off away from her face, and her breath still clouded the air in front of her for a few seconds. “Damn,” she whispered, shaking her head. “That was awful.”
Star Swirl looked far more intact than she did, standing on the edge of a bluff. The air around them had transformed—no longer trying to rip the heat from her chest, but instead pressing down on them, heavy with moisture. The smells and sounds had changed too—she could hear exotic birds calling in regular rhythm, and the rich perfumes of tropical flowers. “If you think that was difficult, cross the continent with Celestia sometime.”
Hayden cleared away the ice from around her eyes, looking out over the bluff. Her heart practically stopped in her chest as she saw what was happening below.
It was as though Star Swirl had taken her back to Earth. Someone had clear-cut the jungle foliage, with rows and rows of stumps. Not burned, as poor farmers might’ve done to clear more ranchland in the third world. This was systemic, clearing space for the gigantic pit mine that was below them.
This was like nothing she had seen in Equestria, not when talking to the army engineers, or even the civilian miners in Icefalls. This was industrial mining, cutting an inverted pyramid into the planet to extract the mineral wealth it contained. It looked like it went down at least a mile.
And the crew working it—Star Swirl hadn’t been lying when he said they were strange. A pony would think they were strange. To Hayden, though… they were robots. Obviously taller than ponies, even at a distance. They came in different forms. Some had wheels, others had tank-like treads. Most of them had unmistakable plastic bodies. Some material a thousand years more advanced than anything ponies had the ability to manufacture.
“I warned you,” Star Swirl said into her ear, sounding smug. “I once thought Avalon might make a great addition to Equestria’s Pillars. But the more I have seen of him, the more I realize his kind of invention isn’t one we want to encourage. I would not want to see this come to the rest of Equestria. Better to keep it here, contained.
“Where is he?” Hayden spread her wings. “I assume he doesn’t live in this mine.”
“He will find us,” Star Swirl said, walking right to the edge of the ridge and waving down with one leg. At once, one of the drones with tank-like treads started rumbling up the mine towards them, ignoring the tiered levels and cutting a straight line. “Before we speak with him, we will need to address one of his servants. The gatekeepers may not even permit us further.”
“They will.” Hayden spoke without doubt now, staring at the drone as it got closer. It wasn’t unlike something she’d seen demonstrated at a tech show only a few months before arriving in Equestria. A distant prototype of something that might one day be used to build Musk’s dreamed Martian colony. It had no torso really, no head. But it did have two “arms” at about the human level, and a single screen where a head might be. All the hardware was located around the treads.
It rolled up over the ridge, stopping in front of them. Hayden could even recognize the familiar logo printed into the body. It was holding something made of plastic in both of its hands, something that looked a great deal like a gun. “Avalon landfall is restricted to primitive native species,” came the voice from speakers near the base. “I must ask you to depart at this time.” Its accent was thick, and Hayden found herself having to struggle to understand it. The software was obviously not made for the Equestrian language.
“We require an audience with Avalon,” Star Swirl said, turning respectfully towards it as though it were a person. “I am not a pony who will waste his time. He knows me.”
Pause. “Contingency is in place for your visit NATIVE_PRIMITIVE_ELDERLY_MALE_UNICORN_WHITE. Avalon regrets being unable to complete the agreement he made with you. Please do not return to AVALON again.” The robot turned to go, leaving Star Swirl stunned.
“Wait!” Hayden commanded, in English. “I don’t belong to primitive native species. Your commands don’t apply to me.”
It stopped, turning to face her again. The camera where its head would’ve been scanned up and down her body. She spread her wings a little, trying to accentuate the defense as much as she could.
“What are you saying to it?” Star Swirl whispered. “What language is that?”
“Your species is not registered,” the drone said, driving right up to her. “Please explain.” It was no longer using Poneish, but English. It sounded quite fluent, even though it had been ages since Hayden had heard it spoken. If it wasn’t for the music she had brought, she might’ve forgot how to make herself use this language completely.
“I am a traveler from Earth,” she said as clearly as she could. “I am human. My name is Hayden Powell.”
The drone froze in place, no longer moving at all. Star Swirl walked slowly around it, then back to her. “Strange incantation you cast. I’ve never seen them do this.”
“I never thought I’d see one of these in person,” Hayden answered him. “They were supposed to build space colonies. Why is there a human space colony in Equestria?”
“I have absolutely no idea what you’re talking about,” Star Swirl said. “Avalon is a diamond dog. His creations are… wonderous, yes. But they don’t need to be explained with supernatural cause. They’re merely good craftsmanship.”
The screen in front of them flashed, filling with what Hayden could tell at once was a video feed. She could see a dark room, and a furred figure hunched over something. It turned to face her, and her chest immediately went cold.
Hayden had never seen a diamond dog before. Still, she doubted they very much looked so convincingly like a human wearing a fursuit. The only difference was the eyes, which lacked any plastic or inserts, but were awkwardly missing, an opening through to his actual face beneath, and pale wrinkled skin. “You.” The voice was English, though as badly accented in its way as the robots spoke in Poneish. “You who claim to be human!” The drone came to life at once, whirring towards her, gesticulating wildly with the rifle it carried. “You do not look human to me!”
Star Swirl retreated a step. His horn started to glow. “You’ve angered him, I can tell. I will get us out before he—”
“No!” Hayden turned her head, hissing sidelong at the unicorn. “Not yet!” She looked back at the camera. “You do not look like a dog,” Hayden said back, in much better English than the speaker had used. “You are wearing a mask. I am too, mine is just better than yours.” Hayden reached into her saddlebags with her mouth. She lifted her wallet from where it was tucked away and opened it towards the camera.
The figure slumped forward onto a chair, looking away from the camera on his end. He reached up with one hand, pulling at something behind his head. The gray fabric of his “head” came right off onto the workbench.
Beside her, Star Swirl’s horn stopped glowing, and he stared on in shock. “Stars and stones. He’s taken off his face!”
Yet when Avalon turned back to the camera, there were no exposed muscles, not the terrible horror she might’ve expected if his face had been removed. She was considering the eyes of an old man. The skin was pale, as though he had never seen the sun. Wrinkles bagged up around his brow, and on his hands. Tears streamed down his face. “After all this time… all these years. I thought I was the last.” The drone lowered its weapon. “I am sending a car.”
Their ride arrived only minutes later—dropping right out of the sky with a roar that Star Swirl warned her to expect but still shook her to her chest. Dirt and debris scattered all around them as the craft settled down.
It was like a helicopter, if a helicopter had forgotten its blades and decided to come in to work anyway. Glass windows polarized, and a dozen different logos were printed on the side. The largest were the block letters spelling “AVALON LUNAR COLONY”. Well, at least I don’t have to wonder where they came from. With one minor detail—there hadn’t been Lunar colonies in the world Hayden left behind. There hadn’t even been a manned mission there since Apollo.
The doors opened, but no one got out. The drone spoke from behind them, live camera feed gone. “Proceed inside,” it said, pointing with the gun. “Avalon is waiting.”
“Seems like everything here is named Avalon,” Hayden said, as they hurried down the ramp into the craft. It was air-conditioned inside, and obviously not built to pony size. The ceiling felt like it was way too high, and the seats had straight backs that made sitting difficult. There was no pilot, no controls either. Only a pleasant voice, speaking in English and suggesting for them to be seated.
“Why do you say that?” Star Swirl asked. “Only the inventor.”
“You didn’t read… right. You can’t read this.” She pointed to the safety labels printed on the ceiling above their seats. The ground began to shake, and they lifted into the air. It was smooth, like the quadcopter drones popular in the world Hayden left behind.
“You can read the inventor’s code? And speak his secret language too…”
“No.” Hayden rolled her eyes. “The inventor is human, Star Swirl. He’s from my world. I can speak his language because it’s my language.” She stopped short of pointing out the more uncomfortable bit—that she didn’t recognize most of the technology. The brands were the same, though. The company logos were recognizable, if slightly changed.
Star Swirl looked like he might protest, but then he pointed at the far end of the craft, where a large display was currently filled with text. “What does that say?”
“Please remain seated while airbus is in motion,” Hayden read, without skipping a beat. “Time to destination, eight minutes. No delays or turbulence expected.”
“Well.” Star Swirl nodded. “I see only one flaw with this interpretation. Avalon was raised by ponies. I met his parents, I know the whole story of his discovery, his weaning in the village of Cahuayo. He built all we see before us.”
Hayden shook her head. “You can’t just build OLED screens and… whatever kind of airplane this is. It doesn’t matter how smart someone is.” She raised a hoof preemptively. “No, you don’t understand. I know how this stuff works. It requires a huge infrastructure. Billions of humans, all working together. No one could do it alone.” She lowered her voice to a frustrated mutter. “I should know. I’ve been trying to do it alone for months now. And it hasn’t been enough.” Not that it was her fault. Hayden had accomplished tons in her month out in the field! If it hadn’t been for the invasion, if it hadn’t been for stupid ponies spreading her curse, or for Celestia trying to leave them to the griffons…
They were already starting to go down again, apparently at the other end of the parabolic arc. It was amazing just how smooth the flight had been. Hayden had barely even realized they were moving part of the time.
“You claim as much, yet the facts do not stand with you. Avalon is a native to Equestria. There are the testimonies of a whole village to say as much.”
He could barely speak English, Hayden found herself thinking. His English had been thick, but his Poneish had not. “Maybe he found something then,” Hayden said. “A ruin, perhaps.” She sat back against the seat as they rumbled down through the jungle. “Oh god, I hope this isn’t planet of the apes. If this is the future and all my friends are dead, I’m gonna scream.”
“I have no idea what you are speaking of. Avalon’s true face did not seem very much like an ape. More like an aging vulture.”
Hayden groaned. A few seconds later, the ground thumped beneath them, and they stopped moving. The side door opened and the ramp descended again. “Please exit to your right. Thank you for riding.”
Hayden climbed out of the strange aircraft and into an active hanger. There were half a dozen airships parked here, none of them familiar. Some vaguely resembled the most modern stealth-fighters she’d seen pictures of the air force testing, though more were stranger still. None looked like the magical ‘airships’ that ponies used, which were really just sailing ships with magic to lift them. These craft were aerodynamic, with obvious openings.
Then she saw him, standing at the bottom of the ramp. He looked much as he had on the screen, an old man weighed down by many years. His face was covered with wrinkles, his shoulders slumped with the burdens he had carried. There was a haunted look in his eyes, but as he saw her, it seemed to lift. The clouds parted, and he smiled. “You are the visitor,” he said, resting his weight on the metal walking stick in front of him. “From home.”
She stopped in front of him, ignoring Star Swirl’s stares. It was obvious he had never seen a human figure before—but Hayden didn’t stare. “Yes,” she said, extending a hoof towards him. He towered over her—she felt like a child in his presence. “My name is Hayden. Hayden Powell.”
“Avalon,” he responded, taking the offered hoof. “Please, Hayden, you must help me save Equestria—we don’t have much time.” Just like that he turned, making his way to a distant doorway with surprising spring in his step.
“Time for what?” she called after him, hurrying to match his pace. She had to trot to do it, despite his age. Avalon’s longer legs were clearly to his advantage.
“I wasn’t aware you were interested in Equestria’s problems anymore, old friend,” Star Swirl muttered, falling into step behind them.
“The princess forbad me to interfere,” Avalon said, his voice rueful. “I couldn’t tell you without her eventually learning about it. But now you’re here… and the hour is late anyway. If I know about this, I’m sure your princess does as well.”
Singular, Hayden noted, though she didn’t say anything. Even you don’t consider Luna a part of the government?
They passed through a set of automatic doors, which looked like the kind of sturdy steel that could’ve stopped bullets. They parted in front of them, opening into a brightly lit hallway. It looked like something Hayden might’ve imagined finding in a NASA base somewhere, with conduits running along the wall and lots of little markings and panels.
“I will do what I can,” Hayden said. “But I’m already trying to save Equestria from one threat, that’s why I’m here. I can’t fight more than one at once.”
Avalon stopped, turning around and looking at her again. He seemed to see her for the first time then, eyes lingering on her wings, her eyes, her ears. “I don’t mean you personally, Hayden. The ones who sent you, though… surely the UEF can send experts. Not the Tower… this problem is too rooted in biology. I have not lived long enough, have not had the resources to teach myself what I would need.”
Hayden didn’t know what he meant, and just now she didn’t care. She had Avalon’s attention. “I don’t know what that is, Avalon. I suspect… based on what I’ve seen here, I wonder if you and this equipment might be from…” It sounded so stupid when she thought it, but how else could she explain all the autonomous vehicles, and the crazy way they looked? “My future. I will give you any help I can, but I’m not a biologist either. I’m here because Celestia has abandoned the north to invasion. She is frightened of the new magic spreading through Equestria, and I think she wants the Stonebeaks to wipe us out. I need your help to prevent genocide.”
Avalon remained silent for a long time. He looked into her eyes, staring intensely. She didn’t look away. “I think… I think there are more urgent details than discovering your origin. Can’t help me… no time.” He turned down the hall, striding a few more steps until they were in front of another set of automatic doors. They slid open, revealing a massive workshop filled with advanced equipment. “We may be able to help each other, Hayden. Let us find out.”
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Dun Dun Duuun! I wonder if Swirl will finally accept Hayden is more than a conjured piece of Luna. And realize how great is the power of his technology.
Curious about Avalon, though. Just what is his story?
Is this fic connected to Harmony Defended timeline? Because these versions of Luna and Celestia are massively different from the ones the Tower's emissary met in the first war against the Dragon King.
Well that sure was unexpected. I really didn't think Hayden'd be meeting someone from her future.
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More or less my thoughts, although I also had to include no small amount of excited nerdgasming over the connection. Really did love the MLA series.
Crash crossover!
Well now. A larger problem looming; just what Hayden didn't need. Still, she has access to one heck of an industrial base. If only it weren't a quarter of the planet away...
For those that have not read all of Starscribe's stories, refer to the "My Little Apprentice" series.
That's a really good question.
Woah, so this is full-on in the MLA series? If we've just met the actual Avalon and all his gear, it feels like it must be.
Well, it answered some of my questions, but made new ones.
And I almost forgot all of the MLA, finished it maybe a year ago. Still - good story, intrigue after intrigue.
Upd, wow, I didn't read quite a few sequels. Maaan, I have to start at the beginning of the series. Still, it gives me quite long storyline to read.
Upd.2 Apparently I finished mla series and forgot to mark some as finished.
Still - I don't remember anything from it, so, it's still will be an exciting reread.
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could always be an AU timeline, so it is possible the events of MLA never happen on this branch
after all I don't remember Hayden Powell, Evening Star or the Thestrals ever being mentioned in MLA
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I think you mean shark jumped into a sports car and drove off with your girlfriend.
I really hoped I don't require to read the more later MLA series, because while I love MLA, the later series kind of lost me because like most of your stories, the series are very long that I can't keep up. I have developed a habit of skim reading, and while I can keep up with major plot points(to a certain degree), minor details is hard for me to keep up with so it becomes really hard to understand what is going on with gigantic 100k multiple fanfic series like yours. Especially when you're the more experienced author in FimFIc, which make your writing a bit less predictable to guess what is happening.
I hope this is easy on readers who haven't read MLA or lost on MLA like me, because if it isn't, well, guess you gonna see my comment becoming more oblivious and confused to the stories as I try to keep up. Which too be honest, probably will be very amusing to read to people who'll know what is going on.
Anyway, turned out this is an MLA crossover. That was very much unexpected. And even more unexpected, she meet someone from the future.
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The human characters in MLA are from far in the future from our perspective (moon colonies etc.) and Hayden seems to be from close to our own time period. So, if this is an MLA crossover, it makes perfect sense (for the readers) that she would meet someone "from the future".
ugh... ok.. changing this from Follow to Read it Later. too much to read.
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Why, because there's a second human?
The UEF (United Earth Federation) and the (Steel) Tower are the two main factions of the humans in the My Little Apprentice series (also authored by Starscribe). In MLA, Clover the Clever managed to cross over to Earth and met with the Tower before returning to Equestria. Sunset Shimmer also crossed over, and ultimately became an agent of the Tower. Both the UEF and the Tower have agents travel to Equestria either on accident or on purpose during the course of the MLA stories.
In fact, Avalon gets brought up in the context of the rebellion in one of the MLA stories:
Well, this will be interesting interaction. Wonder where the writer is taking this, personally was all primed for some low-tech area defence and grim realities of war but who knows this might work too!
I can't help but wonder how Starscribe plans on reconciling the real-world plans for Mars colonization by Musk and others (which were explicitly called out in this chapter, hence my curiosity) with the decisive lack of any mention of Mars colonization in MLA, at least as far as I remember. It seems quite unlikely to me that a Mars colony/community would be completely uninvested in the events that happened on and around Earth leading up to MLA, so if the colonization attempts didn't simply fail for one reason or another, their complete lack of mention in MLA is nothing short of surprising.
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Mars was not unvisited in MLA. It was the center of power for the Federation, since the moon lacked the resources to be entirely self-sufficient. One of the major military units that played a prominent role in Harmony Defended, the one that Applejack and others joined, was the Sons of Barsoom, an elite fighting force recruited entirely from Martian citizens.
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Okay, I haven't read Harmony Defended yet, IIRC because you said somewhere that there was at least one other fic still to be written to bridge the events of stories set earlier to the events in it, so if that's chronologically where the first (significant) mentions of Mars colonization are, it would explain why I don't remember any such mentions.
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While I will continue reading (I’ve read My Little Apprentice and its sequels, and always wanted to see more of Avalon) I don’t blame him in the slightest for dropping this. There was no indication whatsoever that Evening Star Also Rises had any sci‐fi elements, let alone it being a crossover with My Little Apprentice. Wasting your time reading 60,000+ words of a crossover you’re simply not interested in because the author hid the fact it was a crossover has to be infuriating. I’m slightly annoyed myself; up until I spotted Avalon the “diamond dog” being mentioned last chapter I thought that this story was a standalone. I’m now itching for this to continue as‐is as well as a continuation sans anything My Little Apprentice related and there’s no chance in hell I’ll see both.
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This story takes place first chronologically. For that reason, I've written it entirely independent of any requirement to have read anything MLA, since I see a great likelihood that people either haven't read it or would read this story first. You should have no problem reading only this one and none of the other ones, if that's what you want. Avalon will only be a minor character in this story anyway--it's primarily a story of the fall of Luna, the other factors involved are really just setting the stage.
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Just because it is independent of any requirement to read My Little Apprentice doesn’t mean that you should have omitted the fact that it is part of the continuity from the description.
So Suncunt will successfully banish Luna — with the elements help, no less! — even though it was her failings, overreactions, and outright betrayal of a significant portion of her military and outlying provinces that inevitably led to Luna wanting to secede? And here I was, thinking I was embarking on reading a [Slice of Life] HiE set before the show when it was secretly a [Sci‐fi] [Tragedy] prequel.
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And he is Human. Wonder what the other threat is?
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RE: crossover
I have not read MLA. The sci-fi elements in this story took me somewhat by surprise, but I am by no means deterred.
I'm kind of disappointed that this will no longer be "Low tech VS slightly higher tech" in a pitched battle that they are extremely likely to lose, or just "Win" a Pyrrhic victory. However this does bring up new and interesting questions. It is a shame that the threat from the stone beaks has more or less been nullified entirely by this reveal however. I was looking forward to Evening star trying to figure out how to win against a better trained and stronger opponent, and what she attempted to do with her limited infrastructure. The story has just lost a lot of the charm that I felt it had in this regard, and just become another Sci-fi humans versus primitive ponies curb stomp. Granted you do write sci-fi extraordinarily well. So I am still interested to see where this goes.
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Agreed... though at least I now know that the "shift in tone quite a ways into the story arc" pattern I observed in Message in a Bottle isn't a one-time flaw.
(That said, before this reveal, I was planning to put this story on my recommended stories list once I finished reading it. With this shift, I'm not sure there's anything the chapters I've yet to read can do to regain its eligibility.)
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That "minor" threat worked as catalyst for main conflict here. It worked as an intermediate step in "Message" story. To all extent this might be happening on up-stream level of same niven ring :P
Sorry what now?
I mean, I love your stories but this just... went from one genre to another with a slap in the face
I guess it's not a deal breaker, but nothing leading up to this chapter suggested anything of the sort, and it's kinda a let down since it just seems to invalidate what had already developed
I guess the sci-fi tag should've clued me in, however forgotten in the midst of mideaval industrialism and sudden societal shifts were developing.
Maybe an odd way to make celestia the bad guy before springing the big world ending trap, or something, there seems to be no tracks to follow anymore, not even derailed, just run to ground.
This has left me lost to confusion, I guess I'll read on and find out?