This story intrigues me.

Needs an editor but I'm curious to see where it goes. I'll keep this on track for now.

This is already peeking my interests. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Nice work!

Not bad! Was this perhaps inspired by BloodBorne or something else?

I can't say it was, I wrote this story to take the place of a story i wrote which got revoked because it didn't relate enough to MLP, I kinda used ideas from that story and incorporated it into this one.

Can't wait to see to see which girl will do Spike first. ^w^

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It was Spike the witch hunter, wasn't it?

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Yeah it was, it seemed pretty ridiculous to me but those are the rules and I can't repost it unless I make some substantial changes.

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Exactly, how was it not MLP-related?

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They ( wanderer D) said it all I did was add in some mlp names and put it in equestria along with mention things like pegasai and other than that it is not at all mlp related.

Just a quick question, why did you use kamina from gurren lagann for the picture?

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He portrays spike look wise the most, so I'll use him until I find a better one.

that description tho

I'm going to enjoy this story.

Before I read this, what is the Gore tag for ?
And how bad does it get ?

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Agreed. And love the back and forth flirting, between, Starlight and Spike.

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The gore tag is for the scenes where spike fights the monsters, as for how bad it gets I'm not sure just yet.

I'm liking the story so far

As much as Spike wants to hide his night job of monster hunter from Twilight and his other friends, other than Luna (who already knows, she's his boss BTW), I think it would be easier for him if he actually did tell at least one of them the truth. Not Twilight, obviously--she would give him the third degree for starters. Pinkie's too obvious--even though she will hold Spike secret as just that, even she has a limit, and the beans will be spilled at some point. Rarity, RD, and Applejack are obvious 'hell no's!', and in a way Celestia's a no-go as well. Honestly, I would say that Fluttershy and Starlight could be the only others of Spike's secret occupation. I really think Starlight is able to keep the suspicions in check, plus it's a bit there showing that there is something there between Starlight and Spike, and as for Fluttershy, her knowledge of animals to help Spike out, not to mention knowing Zecora really well , seem as a valuable ally to his work. (I realize that as I'm writing this, I see that Spike already knows of Zecora since she's the one that provides him with aid to heal him when needed.

Just my opinion. Enjoyed the chapter and waiting for more!!

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That does seem to be gaining speed as a ship huh? Now its a tugboat instead of a dinghy.

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Yup! And I'm all for it. She better looking than Rarity, magic that rivals Twilight and has one very interesting personality.

8233919 It's Rated M !?

I'm not happy about Luna making Spike hide this, with him looking lazy, he be forced to work when he already exhausted and hurt.
Even with that healing potion helping him, he be pushed to the limit.

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Well rock on you crazy lovebirds. Spike will have quite the life.

Spike showing no fear of making lewd comments on any mare.

Spike better watch out for a pouncing Winona.

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Oh there is a third party who is aware of Spikes nightly activities, this person acts as back up whenever spike needs it, although he rarely ever needs it.

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Are there gonna be clues as to who Spike's 'anonymous' partner is, or would there be a point where all of a sudden he/she appears to Spike?

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They will show up at some point, but like I said Spike only calls this person whenever he's in serious need of help, and when it comes to his night Job Spike has almost as much Pride as rainbow dash so it may be a while.

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Cool, sounds interesting. I can't wait to see how Spike skirts the other girls when they inevitably ask about his issues like more tears, wounds, or sleeping in a lot. Especially Applejack--we all know she's like a living lie detector, so Spike's got to be on his toes around her.

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Spike has something special for dealing with Applejack, you'll see in the next chapter.

Ha love that twilight gets jealous when spike and starlight flirt with each other

“That’s why you never get laid,” Spike chuckled only to receive a glare from Twilight.

HURRY! RUSH HER TO THE BURN UNIT!!!!

Interested

Jack and Jill went up the hill so jack could lick Jill’s candy, but Jack got shocked with a mouth full of cock cause Jill’s real name was Randy,

best thing

“Jack and Jill went up the hill so jack could lick Jill’s candy, but Jack got shocked with a mouth full of cock cause Jill’s real name was Randy,” she heard him sing as she walked into the kitchen to see him just starting to prepare her breakfast.

Oh god why

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Oh the twist. "They had us in the first part not gonna lie"