9201825 Honestly, I wasn't happy with it. It felt bloated and it was stressing me out to the point where just thinking about it made me not want to write it.
fuck yea form what i can tell Tanya is a hybrid of vampire/ruby rose/Tanya the evil which is bad ass the bitch king, is i guess will be some kind of fire god of death and the end time fuck been looking forward to this,
9201829 Really? It didn't seam like that at all while it did seam to be missing a piece or 2, it still had a good plot to it. Plus my favorite part of the original is the fact that Celestia gets off on cold and snow, i almost died laughing at that scene.
9201829 I'm really glad you're redoing this. The previous one was bloated and really didn't give Tanya and her boyfriend enough development. It focused too much on "bitch king". Having them land separately was a clever touch and Tanya's now looking for the rest of the team. I am truly looking forward to this, I can just taste the potential.
Omg yay I love how it starts can't wait to see where it goes. Please don't do crossovers there is a few displaced that don't and they are my favorites. Well next to the ones that started the displaced story movement.
Does Anybody Have a Link to the Original "I Am Become Death... I Am Eternal" (EPUB Reader Preferably But if not that is okay,any link will be greatly appreciated)
The prologue was interesting and a bit log-winded but really established a baseline for the characters (at least that is what I got from it) overall I thought it was good but I really liked the first chapter with Tanya (I was expecting b...Litch king to be first) but the suprise was good and the pacing wasn't too fast. You have my attention and and a Fav, Track and follow. have a mustache
Been looking forward to this! And someone already has a murder boner!
HEHEHEHEHE! Yes, provoke TANYA to my eternal amusement. And the beginning of your eternal suffering
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I like better the original than this one but let's see where this goes I'll just hang around for a bit
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If the new direction isn't to you liking, that's fine. I know I can't please everyone.
This looks so badass. Please tell me you are going to rewrite Children of the Gods too.
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That one I'm debating on. Really depends on how the story goes.
Dude the is sweet.
Let the slaughter commence.
Give me more, been waiting ever so patiently.
Could be worse, could be Terminator Plate
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Everything in 40k is a glass cannon because everything can virtually one shot something else. (With a few exceptions.)
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Eg. BANEBLADE!!!
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In all seriousness I'm going to be getting a Baneblade soon, any recommendations for what variant I should make?
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I'm curious why did you take the other one down I thought the ice/necron version of this was awesome?
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Honestly, I wasn't happy with it. It felt bloated and it was stressing me out to the point where just thinking about it made me not want to write it.
fuck yea
form what i can tell Tanya is a hybrid of vampire/ruby rose/Tanya the evil which is bad ass
the bitch king, is i guess will be some kind of fire god of death and the end time
fuck been looking forward to this,
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You're missing someone. :P
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i figure he a dragon god of some kind like the last or snake like i should say lol
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Really? It didn't seam like that at all while it did seam to be missing a piece or 2, it still had a good plot to it. Plus my favorite part of the original is the fact that Celestia gets off on cold and snow, i almost died laughing at that scene.
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Things will be a little different this time around.
Wonderful
Tanya....
The amount of YES is astronomical
I'm betting the wayward members of the council already found the other two.
Well I wars sad to see the other one go down
But I have a feeling this one will be better!
And still love that it has Tanya in it!
Yes yes yes 100X10100 times yes you're back fuck yeah time to get bloody or crazy or better
BOTH!
i am not strong enough to send you to equestria
it should be written like that
So they got separated....hm are they still in the same equis? and i thought the story would be with the "bitch king"...
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1) Yes. 2) I wanted to show where the other two show up first.
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I'm really glad you're redoing this. The previous one was bloated and really didn't give Tanya and her boyfriend enough development. It focused too much on "bitch king". Having them land separately was a clever touch and Tanya's now looking for the rest of the team. I am truly looking forward to this, I can just taste the potential.
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oh okay
I could have sworn there were more chapters. Did you remove them in hope to do a rewrite of the story?
Omg yay I love how it starts can't wait to see where it goes. Please don't do crossovers there is a few displaced that don't and they are my favorites. Well next to the ones that started the displaced story movement.
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If you read the first chapter, you should know my stance on Crossovers. XD
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But of course and it makes me so very happy. But sadly I read a few that started out amazing 10 chapters in and bam nothing but crossovers.
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Burn the normie heathens?
:)
Better than the previous attempt!
Keep it up Sanguine!
ITS BAAAAACK! YESH!
So Tanya is a vampire now? I wonder what her boyfriend be; also is there any big changes in the prologue that I need to reread about?
Moar!
Does Anybody Have a Link to the Original "I Am Become Death... I Am Eternal"
(EPUB Reader Preferably But if not that is okay,any link will be greatly appreciated)
Blood of the Blood God
Feathers of my throw pillows
MURDER OF THE MURDER BONNER
The prologue was interesting and a bit log-winded but really established a baseline for the characters (at least that is what I got from it) overall I thought it was good but I really liked the first chapter with Tanya (I was expecting b...Litch king to be first) but the suprise was good and the pacing wasn't too fast. You have my attention and and a Fav, Track and follow. have a mustache
seems like it has a lot of potential, made me laugh quite a few time, so keep writing.
I feel this fits far to well my friend
https://m.me coming back to this story like (dude, where did you story go)
WHOOOHOOO!!!
Interesting... im loving this reboot!