8222556 Well, at least my quota will be met, notice I only asked for one.

Here's chapter 4:

“Would we need to be more worried about the night?”

I think you mean 'wouldn't' here

“On second though, never wake up ANYPONY like that,

'though' is supposed to be 'thought' here

“Yea,” the rainbow-maned mare said.

I think you mean 'yeah' here

‘At least we know what were going to do next,’

The 'were' here should be 'we're'

And I’M on of the lucky ones.

The 'on' should be 'one' here.

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Thank you

Editor's archive:

"Just try not to think about it too much, ok?"
Me: "Just not to think about it too much” he says to the one who has worse anxiety and OCD than me.
THAT'S NOT HOW IT WORKS, FLASH. YOU'RE MAKING IT WORSE

Originally, the description of Rainbow's knives came up right when Twilight woke up and saw them, so the line read this:
"Two knives, one with a green hilt and the other with an orange hilt"
To which I replied:
"I don’t think she would instantly recognize or care about the colors of the hilts when there are KNIVES POINTED INCHES FROM HER FACE"
Needless to say, things are a weeeeeee bit different now.

“What the buck was that!?”
Me: This is wonderful.
Yeah, I know, it's weird. But for some reason, I thought that was hilarious.

"Her gaze narrowed. “And don’t you even THINK of lyin’ to me. I’ll know.”"
Me: Her gaze can’t keep narrowing. She’s going to be closed-eyed in a second or two.
Piemaster has that problem sometimes. Eventually, everyone is just squinting at each other.

"And then I freaked out and used my wings, no idea how"
Me: Um…by flapping them? I know you’re not used to having them, Twilight, but you felt the magic surge to your wings and you flapped, and everything fell over in a tumble of wind. That’s basically all there is to it.
I'm pretty amused that Piemaster DIDN'T change this, actually.

"“Oh, I have emergency party supplies stashed all over the woods in case of party emergencies.” Pinkie replied.
Me: LOL define ‘party emergency’
I mean...I'm just curious.

And now for Piemaster's favorite comment, possibly ever:
"“A butler, an alicorn, and a dragon walk into a village in the forest. This has all the elements of a horrible joke,” Flash muttered, earning a smirk from Spike and a groan from Twilight."
Me: Hey Sans, I didn’t know you were in Equestria.
Undertale FTW

See you next time!

ATENTION FELLOW READERS: DO NOT READ THE BLACKED OUT SECTION OF THIS POST AS IT CONTAINS INFORMATION PERTAINING TO EVENTS THAT HAVE, AS OF YET, NOT HAPPENED AT THIS POINT IN THE STORY
It's not much of a spoiler to say that Dashie will get her wings back since she clearly has them in the cover art.

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Actually, the cover art wasn't designed for this story specifically. I just found it and thought it fit the best. You're not wrong though

Aaaaah, so this is where we find the majority of the Mane 6. While I'm happy to see them, and even somewhat understand the likely reasoning behind their hardships, i truly do feel sorry for Rainbow Dash! No doubt it was her Sonic Rainboom (which happened so soon after Twilight Sparkle's "assault and escape" of the bitch) that resulted in her crippling. Man, i truly hope that Twilight can help her somehow regain her wings. Rainbow Dash without her wings just ISN'T Rainbow Dash!!