3000 years ago, the Tree of Harmony was destroyed, the Elements were lost, and almost all of the Alicorns were converted into either Earth Ponies, Unicorns, or Pegasi. Now, Alicorns are the masters, normal ponies the slaves. Can freedom be achieved?
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Yes yes yes yes I need more information love stories like this with twilight as main character
More will be coming soon
O.O my now this seems interesting
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8202445 Soon, I promise.
YES!!! More bad*ss Twilight? Yes please.
As promised, here's chapter 2's errors:
'greeter' should be 'greeted'
'That' should be 'than'
'lay' should be 'laid'
'other' should be plural
Missing a 'she' after 'memories'
Spacing problems after this sentence.
Spacing problem before this sentence.
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Thank you once again.
Editor's archive:
Okay so, the comments aren't as much fun here because it's mostly me kinda growling a bit trying to figure out what Piemaster was referring to when he said 'incident. Literally, one of the comments is me kinda screaming "I AM SO CURIOUS" and "WHAT HAPPENED AT THE INCIDENT???"
Yes, he eventually told me, and we kinda figured out some other ways he could reference to event without sounding like he was trying too hard to cover up information.
Though this one kinda stood out to me:
"The gem was littered with cracks and pulsed weakly as it sat on the pedestal inside a glass anti-magic chamber."
Me: Why is the Element of Magic inside an anti-magic chamber?
I mean, seems a little counterintuitive at first glance (insert shrugging emoticon here because apparently my computer doesn't have it???)
Okay, too many problems. I'm out!
That is honestly terrifying
Ooooh boy. THIS isn't going to end well!
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No it will not