3000 years ago, the Tree of Harmony was destroyed, the Elements were lost, and almost all of the Alicorns were converted into either Earth Ponies, Unicorns, or Pegasi. Now, Alicorns are the masters, normal ponies the slaves. Can freedom be achieved?
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Wow...that was dark. Thorn really is a evil *****! I mean, she's totally 100% evil!
Great chapter!
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Thank you. As for Thorn, just wait until you hear it from Rainbow and Fluttershy's perspectives. I will say though I am currently writing the end of act 1, and having thorn get whats coming to her is so very satisfying to write
Think you mean sea
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YES! I can't wait for that!
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But it's her eyes, so its a pun (that is a mistake. Thank you for catching that)
I reread this and noticed something. Granny Smith hasn't been referenced at all. Don't tell me that's why Applejack left...did she have to kill her to graduate?
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Applejack's story is one I will not be spoiling in the slightest. It will actually be relieved as the end of act 2, but there will be slight hints to it starting in the interlude of acts 1 and 2. Other than that, you'll just have to wait and see.
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Phooey...oh well. I hope to see more soon!
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You will
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Good...I'll do the errors stuff later. Sorry I haven't done the other chapters yet.
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It's fine. I'm on vacation anyway, so I doubt I would have much energy to do them anyway. Take your time
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Thanks. Hope you have a good vacation!
I don't usually comment on stories since I'm usually that 'silent reader' type of person, but I honestly really LOVE your story and how this is so far going that I had to totally leave a comment! It's great and I'm excited to see what you have in store for us, keep up the fantastic work!!
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Thank you