3000 years ago, the Tree of Harmony was destroyed, the Elements were lost, and almost all of the Alicorns were converted into either Earth Ponies, Unicorns, or Pegasi. Now, Alicorns are the masters, normal ponies the slaves. Can freedom be achieved?
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Let me guess, the escaped ponies are Rarity and Sweetie Belle
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Actually, Rarity and Sweetie Belle won't show up until Act 2, so we won't be seeing her for a while yet. Sorry to disappoint.
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Dang it
Is this the only maroon settlement in this story or are there others? In case you are wondering maroon is a term refers to a escaped slave that has escaped to the wild to live there.
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Yes, this is the only one that's in the wild. Later on they will find a smaller one, but it will still be on an Alicorn's land since they live in the desert and won't have the resources to cross in.
Here's chapter 5:
The 'that' should be 'than'
'wander' should be plural
Missing an 'is' after 'it'
Should be 'suspicious' not 'suspicions'
Should be 'sparred' not 'spared'
Missing a period before quotation marks
See previous error.
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Fixed
This is great.
Editor's archive:
After reading the section about Twilight's failures at controlling both her wings, when I saw this:
"Her wings flared out behind he. “Stop doing that!”"
My first thought was:
Both of them? Good job, Pinkie. I think you helped.
She'd be so happy!
"‘Is she…defending me?'"
Me: THAT IS SO ADORABLE!
I fangirl every now and then, pardon me.
"“In order to do so, focus your magic into your wings just like you would your horn, then try to see if you can move the air around your wings to create a small breeze. Understand so far?”"
Me: Ha, he sounds like me.
You guys have yet to hear me explain a story idea. I get so into the details that I need to break it up into massive paragraphs and make sure I don't lose people. I related to Flash soooo much in this moment.
"Surprisingly, finding a bit of magic related to her wings wasn’t too difficult."
Me: Do these magics have colors? I keep picturing pegasus magic as blue, and I don’t know why.
Unicorn is purple and earth is green too, fyi.
And he used that in the chapter where Magi depowered Thorn!
"He shot her a knowing smirk."
Me: I almost said “he FLASHED her.”
Ba dum*ching*
Yeah, I make really bad jokes too. I'm Toriel, guys.
"Use more magic when you want to go higher, then ease off to come to a hover.”
Me: Uh, does she know how to land?
Please don’t tell me that all she has to do is “stop flying.” That joke is WAY too obvious ☺
More RvB for you fellow fans, wherever you are.
I did a little restructuring of Fluffy's entrance and the whole:
"And then they noticed a bunny sitting calmly on top of its head like he was king of the world."
Had this attached to it:
I’m sorry, I couldn’t help it. I’ve seen Angel Bunny sitting on a high perch like a royal brat and that’s all I could picture here.
Every now and then, I crack myself up.
See you next time!