Shining Armor is afraid Cadence might be upset that he unknowingly had sex with Chrysalis for several weeks. Instead, she wants to hear all about it. She even has a few other ideas, or mares, she'd like to see him pursue. A lot of impregnation ensues
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considering that Celestia and Luna used to revel in playing practical jokes and pranks on one another... said princess of the night may just love helping Shinny gain entrance into Celestia's ancient secret garden.
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![:trixieshiftleft:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/trixieshiftleft.png)
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grins.
sapient,
(sapient=thinking, sentient = anything with a brain)
Ow I kinda want to see Trixie's dreams. They sound fun!
Keep Going![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
8176392 I assumed they still do! We need an episode based around them pranking one another.![:rainbowwild:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowwild.png)
8176451 Fun fact: A good ham sandwich is better than an average cock.![:rainbowkiss:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowkiss.png)
8176556 You should offer to be my editor. I need one.![:derpytongue2:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/derpytongue2.png)
8176566 Trixie's dreams don't hold a candle to the horror that are Gummy's dreams![:rainbowderp:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowderp.png)
8176607 I'll try![:rainbowdetermined2:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowdetermined2.png)
8176620
![:facehoof:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/facehoof.png)
![:rainbowlaugh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowlaugh.png)
....like a hobo on a ham sandwich...
I just lost it there.
8176697 You should be more sensitive to the ham needs of hobos.
That was fantastic.
ANOTHER!
That was quite delicious. Please, do continue. :)
I've never before read something quite like this. It's a beautiful thing you've strung together.
That was great! Though it's a bit shame that all this choking is kind of a boner killer for me.
Yes! Shining Armor getting the best deal. Goodness and she is reserving her moon pie for Shining! Good to see this go on. Hope to see more lucky Shining and heck, lucky stallions given he go from Shining on Cadence.
I am sure Luna will be keeping the royal line...
This does beg the question, when does Prince Blueblood attempt to "inject" himself in this if he finds out? I can say he may be Cadence's Rear Lover only soon.
8176893 8176968![:trollestia:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/trollestia.png)
No!
... Oh all right.
8176977![:rainbowdetermined2:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowdetermined2.png)
Well she is the princess of the Moon. One would expect her to have the best ass!
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As long as she is liking it!
Though I did try to make it diverse, so choking won't be something that happens every time.
8177115![:moustache:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/moustache.png)
This entire chapter was having that idea
8177251![:rainbowwild:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowwild.png)
Well, Blueblood probably did something right, else he wouldn't be an honorary nephew, but I'll probably ignore his existence in this unless I have a compelling reason to do otherwise. Last time I depicted Blueblood in a positive light, people freaked!
8177009 I did not know that![:raritycry:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritycry.png)
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That is generally the explanation! It's hard to tell if it's a serious question though!
Though still not sure why it'd be a problem in this case. I mean we only saw the one room in the episode. Nothing says that she'd been kept in that room for the whole time. She might have just been brought there cause Chryssie wanted to trick Twilight into beating the snot out of her!
I really like the story, but it strikes me as a bit weird that Equestria would have the same cultural hang-ups about women who have a lot of sex as Earth does.
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I couldn't agree with you more. I don't think they would.
I don't remember writing anything about someone thinking that women having a lot of sex was bad, but if I did, point it out and I'll reword it for clarity.
Luna THINKS ponies will care because she is not up with the times. Even then, she thinks they'll care because she made a sacred vow and broke it, not because of what the vow was about. Once you learn the reason for her vow, you'll see that it has nothing to do with backwards human morality.
8177445 Ah okay, if its just Luna then that makes more sense. I was extrapolating from things Luna had to take it as a reflection of the culture as a whole, but that was my mistake.
This chapter was incredible. Luna is still best princess IMO. I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
Professional cucks. Nice.
I hope you do go into that though. It would be great to see.
Holy shit that's hot.
Insta-reverse nut. Holy cow.
Next chapter. Flashback. Now pls.
Dude, I love your Luna.
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*hung
*Here, it didn't matter. (comma)
The entire sentence here is just weirdly worded.
*and Twilight, assuming (comma)
*would need protection
OR
*would need to be protected from
Pretty sure that this semicolon can be a comma.
I dunno what that last word is supposed to be, but I'm guessing that it's not "audience"...
Either you forgot a word here, or you didn't. Either way, you should clarify as either (as I believe it may be)
*guards' bodies
OR
*guards' cocks/dicks/whatever
Move that quotation mark over to the left.
*released
Combine the sentences or capitalize the second.
*In a way, they (comma)
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I think if I do get into Luna's 'dream tortures', it will probably be in another story in the same universe. I'd have to actually think up what they'd be too, of course.
We don't need a flashback for that! We'll get into it in the present!
Luna is my second favorite character to write; Maud is my first.
That should be 'sincere'. How the hell did I even make that mistake? I have no idea.![:rainbowderp:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowderp.png)
Also that was a lot of help. If you're interested in editing prior to the chapter's release, drop me a message.
I lost it at the hobo analogue.
- Wernher von Braun, 1968
8173126 That's understandable, but everything that happens in the story will be 100% consenting.
8173374 It's more logical when you realize why they took the vows. Hint: It's not for ethical reasons.
Spoiler: They made the vow because they were tired of losing those they loved, so decided it was better to not love at all.
In fact, this idea is semi-canon in the eyes of some.
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So then what was all that nonsense with Mirror Sombra in the comics?
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Well, I said that it is semi-canon in the eyes of some, not that it was canon. Even then, the comics are a different canon from the show. I generally consider them canon unless they contradict, but I think the official word is that both the comics and Equestria Girls are separate canons.
Well done, and even a bit humorous at times. "Hobo on a ham sandwich" is my new favorite phrase.![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
Just a bit put off by the 1000% pregnancy rate in every single clopfic known to mankind.
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Yeah the pregnancy is a thing, but this is sort of an impregnation story! And it is sort of justified so far, Cadence knows magic to make sure she and Shining are fertile, and Luna was in heat.
That actually sounds like a request to increase the distance.
But they are stated to be bat ponies earlier.
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Huh.
Thanks; I changed it to 'decrease' and 'sleek wings'.
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I don't think changing "lessen" to "decrease" helps.
Proximity means nearness. If we are quantifying it, intuitively, the closer things are, the higher their proximity should be, since they are "nearer". But the obvious way to quantify it is to just use distance, which is smaller for closer things. So I would suggest not quantify it at all.
I understand that you are trying to make Luna speak extra fancy, but "lessen your distance" is already way fancier than "move closer" any ordinary English speaker would use.
8229879![:rainbowderp:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowderp.png)
Apparently I had no idea what the word 'proximity' means.
Okay, that's fixed then. Thanks for hammering that into my head
I lost it at this line. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Well that does make sense if ego made ponies powerful Trixie would make Discord look like a chump.
Luna. Warrior first. Princess second.