I DEMAND MORE OF THIS!

loved it

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This story must be a time-bending first person shooter, 'cause it was super hot!

You definitely earned your watch with this one! As soon as you post a second chapter, you'll get a favorite as well.

this is a good story please do continue

good job

Oh, this will be fun... :)

The whole story sounded good right up til the mention of gay content.

8167411 Yes one of the future chapters will have a few paragraphs of gay content. I'm so ashamed.

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AHHHHHH! *beats with nerf bat*
Wait.
Oh sorry; I'm not used to getting positive reinforcement.
But yes; Luna-chapter will be up within a week.

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(Yes, I know this may be taken as a bit rude, but I got inspired by these comments and couldn't not make this meme.)

I am intrigued by this.

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Thank you, ma'am! May I have another?

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I NEED THE GAY.

Also, you handled cucking in a way I hadn't seen in a long while, good job.

8167671 Sadly there are't many characters with dicks in the story, but the gay that is there so far is adequately adorable I hope.

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At least give me some pegging!

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Seconded!

8168049 I'll try to... fit some in

Chryssie’ wouldn’t respond; Shining was certain of that.

... Famous last words.

8168146 oh gods the pun whyyyy

Chrissy is versatile. I'm sure she can come up with a long, hard and throbbing solution

This looks like it's gonna be so good.

Holy moly.

8168971 I think I might have to add a whole nother chapter just on this concept.

8169029 And I'm sure Chryssie will have the same expression as she has in your avatar for at least part of it.

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Holy crap, I forgot I even had this profile picture...I wonder if I remember how I got it...

Heheheheh... "Pony pole"

8169064 glad I could help!

*sees mention of choking*
Excellent, a new choker. Will there be more?

fond memories

Jesus fuck man, that's a little too sick even for me.

I...hum.

I kind of want to read this.

But I do not want clop...

The plot sounds interesting.

How much of this will be sex?

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from what i have read.
all of it.

A bit too fucked-up for my taste; the stuff with talking about Chrysalis is one thing, but once they started scheming about Twilight, I was out.

A fun set up and interaction, though I gotta say how odd it is for the other Princesses to have taken vows of chastity. That just seems illogical on so many levels.

Nice, nice. All of the fetishes! Also, hot.

'Not even Cadence had never managed to get him to this much before.' - ever

You sir have disturbing tastes and questionable morals.

I love it! Keep up the good work. The cum eating from shiny is a bit gross but meh.

"Well it's just... how long were you trapped in that cave?"
"Around six weeks,"

HOW DID YOU NOT DIE FROM STARVATION OR DEHYDRATION? Or from being surrounded by your own bodily waste?

YOU CANNOT TELL ME YOU DID NOT POOP OR PEE AT ALL DURING THAT TIME! I DIDN'T SEE A SINGLE MORSEL OF EDIBLE MATTER DOWN THERE! NOR DID I SEE ANY DIHYDROGEN MONOXIDE!
THAT IS JUST NOT BIOLOGICALLY POSSIBLE!

8174693 its clop, stfu.

I'm not sure I like the extremely casual way Cadance is talking about breaking their centuries long chastity. It would seem like almost a betrayal.

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It becomes a bit more acceptable later on once it's implied that Cadance realizes that said chastity is making them unnecessarily miserable. Also the reason for said chastity isn't the traditional 'I think sex is impure' reason.

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Alicorns are basically demigods, we don't exactly know how their bodies function.

“I do,” groaned Cadance, “She taunted me with it. You should have seen the look on her face when she realized that I was masturbating to her 'taunts'.”

The idea of two pregnant Cadances made it beyond impossible to hold back. Cadance impaled herself with his pony pole as he came like a geyser inside her. He hosed her goddess-like love trench, juice forced deep and filling her womb. Thick ropes of spunk drained into her until her belly swelled with the load. It previewed how she’d look when the result of this grew inside her. She clenched vigorously around him, not wanting any of his fertile sperm to escape. Even after the flow stopped, she continued to rotate her hips and milk his sensitive staff.

Well that would definetly have surprised her.

Cadance was as close to a literal sex goddess as Equestria had.

Twilight Velvet.

Shining once wondered why Cadance never went into season, but now that he’d tried an alternative, he realized that Cadance was always in season

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Kanashiipanda.. reminds me on his comics.

Faved after 1/3... 20 chapter s to go !? Holy buck?

Now this is cucking done right.

I'm extremely disturbed by the casual way cadence is talking about using mind control to get other ponies to tick shining armour

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Well to be fair, she doesn't actually end up mind-controlling anyone, since I wanted to keep things non-rape-ish in this fic.

Being watched during your first time sleeping together actually was a real thing especially for royalty. It was to ensure they would try to produce an heir.