Shining Armor is afraid Cadence might be upset that he unknowingly had sex with Chrysalis for several weeks. Instead, she wants to hear all about it. She even has a few other ideas, or mares, she'd like to see him pursue. A lot of impregnation ensues
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Chryssi's one to talk!
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Methinks you need to upload that somewhere!
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She is insane in a completely acceptable-to-changelings way though!
Hah, everyone wins~ sexily.
Oooooh, now that's a fun fact, that they can mix genes from three individuals at a time.
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That would make it funny if she found out a lot of ponies ship her with Twilight becuase they think their relationship is deeper then it actually is. Only the ponies that know both mares know the truth.
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You know we can't just look into your C drive, right?
Wait a minute, that was chapter 4! Maybe change this line to say "more insane then I thought." to signify the difference between the Ch 4 title and this line, which happens in the "near" future?
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Entirely because of your view on canon-Chryssie, showing that you aren't the sort who brainwashes themselves into believing villains are canonically just misunderstood good guys who need slavish fan-worship for their depictions, I can and will completely agree with you. Bothers me how people can't separate the two, and after all my years here no one's ever tried to say they have done just that. Bravo, good on you.
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yeah found that out the hard way xD
I've gotta hard disk D drive though ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
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Unf
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I'm going to disagree with that particular opinion, and offer a different take. Yes, that would probably be more in line with a cuckolding fetish. That being said, I don't think that would be in line with how Cadance and Signings relationship and personalities have been written at all, and changing it would be detrimental to the story. Cadence and Shining don't come off as a couple that subsists on humiliation and degradation. Shit-talking, yes. Light cuckolding with cheesy dialogue, also yes. Power dynamics? Sure. But they don't come off as sadistic or masochistic, nor the type to get off on emotional virtualization. They come off as a fun, recently married couple who are in no way afraid to get down and dirty with their (and new) kinks, damn anyone who gets in the way. Going in hardcore on the cuckolding would feel immensely jarring and out of character in this story.
And on a personal note, I'll admit it would make the story a near-instant drop for me, which I would be intensely sad about. This story hits all the right notes for me, but emotional disparagement, ACTUAL emotional disparagement and belittlement , is something I cannot enjoy.
Just to throw in my two cents.
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Also good points! And your icon is very convincing.
Though regardless of good points made, I'll not likely change a chapter after it's already out just because I won't have time beneath all the other things I'm working on.
Again, if you'd like to help via input pre-publication, feel free to private message me to offer editing.
Dude, put some spaces in the description, everything is bunched up together.
Or is there a character limit that you've hit? Because honestly?
Damn.
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Oh there's no character limit. Believe me, I tried. Don't read that story if you value your sanity. I'm just pointing out how long the description is.
You make a good point though, I added some space.
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is that a challenge?Thx bby
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Oh hell, thanks for finding those. Nice catches BTW
Oh this story is so freaking hot, and just all the hotter and kinkier by the chapter, can't wait to see what new levels of depravity everypony sinks to after this.