Shining Armor is afraid Cadence might be upset that he unknowingly had sex with Chrysalis for several weeks. Instead, she wants to hear all about it. She even has a few other ideas, or mares, she'd like to see him pursue. A lot of impregnation ensues
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And now the crystal couple have a lead to find 'Chryssie'!
Whoo boy y'all are in for a treat (or four).
Also, help out this poor, poor editor by giving him a moment, if you would.
Thorax waved and shook his head. So awkward. He felt like he was forgetting something though. Hmm, wonder what it was.
Did everyone understand this paragraph well enough/was it clear enough (but not too much, at the time) what was happening? When I preread this chapter, I got stuck here for a moment. Would this need changing, or was that just a dumb dumb moment on my end?
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It's an internal monologue that's not in some form of quotes. That would work well in first person, but the surrounding writing is in third person.
I didn't notice it myself, but now that you point it out it bothers me slightly.
I spy a reference.
Wait a minute! Doomie from that one fic?!
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Which one fic? Doomie is the fan name for the changeling that Pinkie yelled “Do me! Do me!” at during the Canterlot wedding episode.
Huh, Methinks the season six finale will be quite different in this verse.
Poor Thorax. XD
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Well in the canon he gets to be king, but in this he gets to fuck Luna. I think this version of him makes out better!