Shining Armor is afraid Cadence might be upset that he unknowingly had sex with Chrysalis for several weeks. Instead, she wants to hear all about it. She even has a few other ideas, or mares, she'd like to see him pursue. A lot of impregnation ensues
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Once again bad Cadance! I bet she is secretly another form of a Changeling.
Hawt.
Ooooh, ridged, shielded cocks and external testicles? Me likes.
Cadence is planning to feed off Chrysalis, isn’t she?
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Like one of those ‘bad dragon’ toys. I sure wish real people had dicks like that, or at least something that was available to fuck me had them.
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Yes, they will feed off each other in a loop until the world explodes.
I feel as though this is a play on words.
Opinion incoming.
Up to this point the story was pretty good, but the cuckolding part was kinda meh. Specifically, it felt like IKEA erotica version of the fetish. A lot of cuckolding tropes are touched but not explored at all. This fetish is very D/s, but that dynamic is not felt here: Shining clearly has no feelings of submission or inadequacy, he's just letting his wife have her fun, and Cadance's speech is sometimes downright hentaish. It's quite clear she is enjoying this for variety, not better quality.
Some of these problems are probably because this is an "accidental cuckolding", not planned beforehand. Still, I think it would be much hotter (from the perspective of this particular fetish) to make it like this. Cadance has that accidental sex with the changelings (while maybe complimenting them, but not that much), they leave, then Shining tries to initiate sex with her, she looks at his dick, thinks a bit, mutters some excuse and leaves, only to masturbate thinking about the changelings. Then it turns out Shining has followed her, sees this and realizes what is happening. And, of course, faps.
Also, to my understanding, there was a point where there were two changelings supporting themselves on Shining and Cadance sitting on top of him. And all this weight (with Shining's own) put into stretching Shining's legs. Ouch.
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That is a better idea, probably. I'll try to think of a way to change that efficiently.
Future chapters probably won't have as much of that fetish, but if you think you might have additional decent ideas like that, private message me and ask to pre-edit.
Why is the p bold?
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Probably weirdness from pasting from a Word doc. Thanks for pointing that out.
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ur welcum