My name is Sarah. My sister and I worked for over a year on our cosplay outfits. We didn't win any awards, but part of that is due to snagging a couple souvenirs...and then no longer being in the same place. It's cold here...wherever here is.
8172636 Short answer: No. Long answer: Recall that one of the titles she listed in the chapter was 'Successor to the Overmind' and another was 'Eternal Will of the Swarm.'
bit heavy on the exposition, but thats alright. at least it gets that part out of the way. Besides, im a sucker for details like that. regarding the authors note. Yes, yes i know exactly how that feels. You're tossing and turning and grumbling, until you're like "Screw it!" and get up to type it down. even though you can barely see straight from exhaustion. the muse compels you, and she is cruel.
8172781 Exactly! For me it's more a "well, if I'm not going to be sleeping anyways I might as well do something productive," since I am prone to insomnia.
8172937 And what would be so bad about that? There's nothing wrong with going a little mad from an increase in power as long as reality comes around and slaps you in the face before you do anything truly regrettable.
"I am INVINCIBLE!" "Actually you just leveled up to 'Stanley H. Tweedle.' You've a long way to go before 'invincible' is within sight." "Did you just say UP to Tweedle? What was I before?" "Bug bomb...malfunction."
"I am INVINCIBLE!" "Actually you just leveled up to 'Stanley H. Tweedle.' You've a long way to go before 'invincible' is within sight." "Did you just say UP to Tweedle? What was I before?" "Bug bomb...malfunction."
After a bit of thinking after reading this, I can't seem to get this out of my head. Celestia asking why the sudden change, Liz asking Sarah what's wrong. Sarah goes: "...I just got a psionic message stating 'You are not the Overmind...'." Liz's eyes go wide, pull out her weapons, all while panicking with a "Shit-shit-shit-shitshitshit." Or something. XD
8172454 Doubt it. After all, she arrived in Kerrigan's 'after-Zerus' state, so she's a hell of a lot more powerful than even the Overmind could hope to be. ...buuuut, she'll still have a struggle, since she doesn't know how to wield that power yet or how to effectively tap into it. Won't be easy on her. And there's always Zerg numbers to be worried about.
8173145 Alarmingly close to what I wrote for the first paragraph, but wrong enough for me to know you haven't hacked my laptop.
I waste no time after my warning to Celestia. The miniature drone drops out of my hair and scurries away a short distance to begin mutating into a Hatchery. "Liz, find a vantage point to watch over the area, one where you will not likely be seen." My thoughts gather, only to be disrupted as the tip of a horn and the barrel of my rifle press against opposite temples.
Frankly, I could also have used THAT as the cliffhanger ending to this chapter, but I didn't want to give the impression that this was Yet Another Evil Celestia After All.
8173159 o_O Why would they do that to her at the end there? Doesn't make sense to me, though I hope you have good reasons for it. I have hopes that you do, since you've been writing so well so far.^^
8173138 "Unfortunately there is no habitable planet, asteroid, moon or space station within the range of this vessel. There is absolutely nowhere for us to go. Zev, darling?" "Yes 790?" "Our oxygen will be gone and you'll be dead in 11 hours and 7 minutes, but my power pack will keep me going for 309 years, so I will use that time to recite an epic poem about you. Shall I begin?"
oh yeah just teall an potencial enemy everything about you and your equipment and honestly a ruler should that so called pranks are in situations like that really uncalled for and why dont they care that they landed on an unknown world with taking horses and tbh this seems really rusged as its missing a real lot
8172720 So - mutch - fun 8172734 Don't you mean dead soon to be meat screaming? 8172809 Insomnia is a bitch... But Fimfiction helps 8173516 One is manageable. Only problem is if they can't dispse of him permanently... 8177310 Time to Butcher 8173666 You sure? The last I ask didn't complain 8185497 How about re-reading in 2022?
oooh~ so sarah is gonna be under the influence of the zerg hive mnd
8172454 Sorry, spoilers.
8172511 kek okay
8172636 Short answer: No.
Long answer: Recall that one of the titles she listed in the chapter was 'Successor to the Overmind' and another was 'Eternal Will of the Swarm.'
Well, well, well, a Cerebrate?
8172734 That one is a question I won't be answering directly in any manner until the narrative allows me to show it.
Consider the color of the text. Speculate on the possibilities.
I consider your filing choice for this story a high compliment, by the way. Thank you.
bit heavy on the exposition, but thats alright. at least it gets that part out of the way. Besides, im a sucker for details like that. regarding the authors note. Yes, yes i know exactly how that feels. You're tossing and turning and grumbling, until you're like "Screw it!" and get up to type it down. even though you can barely see straight from exhaustion. the muse compels you, and she is cruel.
8172781 Exactly! For me it's more a "well, if I'm not going to be sleeping anyways I might as well do something productive," since I am prone to insomnia.
8172720 oh... so she is going to take control of, all the zerg... and possibly go mad
8172937 And what would be so bad about that? There's nothing wrong with going a little mad from an increase in power as long as reality comes around and slaps you in the face before you do anything truly regrettable.
"I am INVINCIBLE!"
"Actually you just leveled up to 'Stanley H. Tweedle.' You've a long way to go before 'invincible' is within sight."
"Did you just say UP to Tweedle? What was I before?"
"Bug bomb...malfunction."
Evil cliffhanger. Good chapter.^^
8172982
Bwhahaha. that's hilarious.
8170707 I know right D: I miss my mastermind.
8173109 Oh good, someone else who knows Lexx!
Also: 8173111 My first 50 was a Mastermind.
After a bit of thinking after reading this, I can't seem to get this out of my head. Celestia asking why the sudden change, Liz asking Sarah what's wrong. Sarah goes: "...I just got a psionic message stating 'You are not the Overmind...'." Liz's eyes go wide, pull out her weapons, all while panicking with a "Shit-shit-shit-shitshitshit." Or something. XD
8172454 Doubt it. After all, she arrived in Kerrigan's 'after-Zerus' state, so she's a hell of a lot more powerful than even the Overmind could hope to be. ...buuuut, she'll still have a struggle, since she doesn't know how to wield that power yet or how to effectively tap into it. Won't be easy on her. And there's always Zerg numbers to be worried about.
8172809
I know exactly how you feel. That's how most of my crud goes online.
8173145 Alarmingly close to what I wrote for the first paragraph, but wrong enough for me to know you haven't hacked my laptop.
I waste no time after my warning to Celestia. The miniature drone drops out of my hair and scurries away a short distance to begin mutating into a Hatchery. "Liz, find a vantage point to watch over the area, one where you will not likely be seen." My thoughts gather, only to be disrupted as the tip of a horn and the barrel of my rifle press against opposite temples.
Frankly, I could also have used THAT as the cliffhanger ending to this chapter, but I didn't want to give the impression that this was Yet Another Evil Celestia After All.
8173159 o_O Why would they do that to her at the end there? Doesn't make sense to me, though I hope you have good reasons for it. I have hopes that you do, since you've been writing so well so far.^^
8173172 Show, not tell. You will understand when it is done.
That reaction right there is exactly why I didn't use it to end this chapter. I want people enticed, not confused.
8173202 Good choice.^^
Oh, and like those gdocs I linked ya to, by the way?
8173244 Haven't read them in whole just yet, but they are downloaded.
8173138 "Unfortunately there is no habitable planet, asteroid, moon or space station within the range of this vessel. There is absolutely nowhere for us to go. Zev, darling?"
"Yes 790?"
"Our oxygen will be gone and you'll be dead in 11 hours and 7 minutes, but my power pack will keep me going for 309 years, so I will use that time to recite an epic poem about you. Shall I begin?"
8173276 Alright.^^ Well, just to forewarn, I try to at the least add another paragraph's worth on the second one each day, just to forewarn.
Well... shite....
8173282 The dead do not...enjoy poetry.
ok, this is good...
I await your displaced...
8172982 XD
Uh oh... that ending seems ominous...
oh yeah just teall an potencial enemy everything about you and your equipment and honestly a ruler should that so called pranks are in situations like that really uncalled for and why dont they care that they landed on an unknown world with taking horses and tbh this seems really rusged as its missing a real lot
I finally have enough free time to read this now.
Made friends with Sunbutt
Zerg on the world? O damn...
Isn't Space a pretty hold place? I am surprised a bizzard tundra zone is so cold to threaten a Transformer...
Great character building overall.
8172720
So - mutch - fun
8172734
Don't you mean dead soon to be meat screaming?
8172809
Insomnia is a bitch... But Fimfiction helps
8173516
One is manageable. Only problem is if they can't dispse of him permanently...
8177310
Time to Butcher
8173666
You sure? The last I ask didn't complain
8185497
How about re-reading in 2022?