nice ^^

Very good, author

This is very good so far. Looking forward to see more of this

Pretty good. As a veteran Displaced author, this is the first time I've seen a Starcraft/Transformers Displaced, and I hope the it continues.

Well you don't see a queen of blades displaced to often well from what I could find anyways plus great strat so far

love this story so far.. i hope you will update frequently

Okay, now the Merchant went way to far. I'm behind Sarah on ripping him a new one when they get back.

I quite like this one so far. Interesting twist on the usual formula, and I really like what you did with the Merchant.

I don't recall any significant editing issues in the chapter, either. Overall, I'm impressed. +like +track

Better than most displaced authors for a start, so that's promising.^^

Hmmm. Every single comment has been down-voted once.

Yay! I attracted my first anti-displaced-hate-boner troll!

What do I win? What do I win? Is it inspiration for a new chapter?

No, wait, THAT came while I was driving to work.

Wish I knew more about Starcraft because this seems like an interesting story so far.

Hmm... wonder where the matrix and vector sigma she bought are. And guess the Blackarachnia she was dressed as is the original, eh? So, she won't be as strong as she could be, though the matrix may change that.

Since this is your first Displaced fic, how much do you know about Displaced fics?

Also, as a bit of suggestion, be careful how you do Crossovers. Some people did them too often and killed the fic, but including them is part of being a displaced. The key is making sure the crossovers actually play important parts to the story, like the displaced they summon being to help with an important part, like say either in battle or helping cope over an emotional issue, etc. And going to other realities can be the same, likely often with getting something in return for the help. Many others do so like by providing tools or teaching things like spells or techniques, in return for their aid or something. Not saying they have to ASK for something in return, but it could be something gained from it. Heck, maybe even acquiring items from enemies your characters helped them fight or something.

Well well, Blackarachnia, one of my favorite beast wars characters. That got my attention right quick. I'll give this a read. see where it goes. I like your much creepier take on the merchant. Felt rather refreshing. I've read my fair share of displaced fics and none seem to really last long or go anywhere, lets see if you can do better.

8168557 I've been reading a few select ones that caught my attention one way or another.

Also, as far as Blackarachnia being hampered and unable to do anything about it without using the Matrix...

Ask yourself exactly what possible item a classic Blackarachnia cosplayer might be able to use to not break the illusion entirely while carrying a SPHERICAL purse. Perhaps one with a hard shell?

Perhaps...this?tfwiki.net/mediawiki/images2/f/f5/Transmetaldriver.jpg

8168999 Ah. I remember the looks of that item, but it's been so dang long that I forgot what it does. And I never said that she'd be unable to do things. Just that that was her weakest form is all.*shrug*

8169003 To quote a certain hybrid being...

Spoilers.

8169058 lol ^^

8169058 did you just quote river song

8169350 Yes. Yes I did.

This is definitely something I'm keeping an eye on!

Hope to see more!

MORE!!!!!

Your author picture brings up feelings of nostalgia and also anger.
NCSoft stupid company for destroying not just a great game, but also a great team of developers and a community of players.

Something seems familiar about this...

8171471 Cute, but no.

8170707 *hugs*

This merchant is a asshole ...

Interessting mix of natural and synthetic high evolved hero races.

Celestia isn't wrong. Hope she is a nice character.

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The characters or the story composition?
Any idea if the Suthor is still activ?
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Wonder what base ability they have. The merchant sure was a asshole...
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Indeed! I wonder how a tech high end and a biological high end race work together.
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There are a few really amazing Starcraft Storys by now on Fimfiction
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Back where? Isn't Displaced = Forever bound to the MLP Multiverse?
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Silver lining and all
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The Saga is now complete and the SC2 campaigns are a mod heaven. Play the Zerg campaigns as Terrans or the Protoss as Zerg. 3 player co-op campain? It is glorious ♡
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There are many awesome displaced storys around