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After many weeks of writer's block, I finally managed to trudge through and finish this chapter!
The next chapter will finally involve the humans, and it's actually already finished! It's good. At least... I think it is. Kind of having regrets of not using the idea and making it a stand alone fic.
Getting a bit meta in here.
Yeah, yeah...
You're a fool for it.
Hah, puns.
And she answered.
Thorax trying to do s something like that feels off. Mainly because this story has barely mentioned him. We talked about Saddle Arabia, other hives, too much Starlight for my tastes, and the human world. But never anything about Thorax. Also, it feels like this reason goes against the fear that another Chrysaliss might rise again. Plus, couldn't it be easier and safer for Shining Armor to fully tame her before sending her to take a threat? Or challenge him to a contest of sorts?
Nailed it.
Nice chapter. Wonder what mind trick Seta did... Or will do.
Wow...I'm sorry.
Chrysalis is so stupid in this story I can't take it seriously. There is no immersion-she is acting so outside reality that I'm laughing and can't take any of this seriously whatsoever. Not even clop, which is okay btw.
Looking at this, it seems like Chrysalis and the pony world are literally cartoon characters being exposed to the real human world, and they're just ignoring everything that entails.
I mean...she's blatantly ignored nearly every last damn thing about the human world. And she's shown almost no interest in learning about it, despite wanting to conquer it...
On second thought, this is pretty close to canon Chrysalis, who also made pretty big mistakes with no real forethought on her actions.
Still, I'm laughing at this.
It's...kinda beautiful, in a stupid way.
I have no idea what you're going for in this story at this point, but good on ya for continuing it this far.
Edit: I realize this comment may have seemed insulting, which, if so I apologize for, but this is more or less my feelings on the story. As odd as it is, I'm enjoying reading this, even if I'm taking humor in how nonsensical most of the characters act as far as I'm concerned.
You could just post the April Fools chapter on your blog. I saved it to my HDD when I started getting page errors.