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This chapter was inspired by a recent whitekitten picture I saw on Derpibooru, which you can assume was likewise pretty dark. 1590833
Seems like where I'm at now. Got to be inspired by an appealing idea, then you got to write the chapter fast before I lose interest and stop working on it entirely.
I feel like you don't like him.
Of course.
No, it's a real world.
Ass.
Well, a sharpened katana can slice between 2 to 3 pig carcasses at once. Which is equivalent to 2 to 3 humans. IN ONE SLICE.
ChangelinGs.
Ah. An aphrodisiac.
Uh...
All this just makes me wonder, what the hell kind of life did Sombra live to end up with this kind of mindset?
GOOD. This is SO satisfying.
If there is one, I don't think he's going to be going to where he THINKS he's gonna go.
That's one way of putting it.
I love how despite her being half sex crazed, she's still snarky enough that it's funny.
Does Sunset even know what is REALLY going on back in Equestria, because I would like to see how she would react to it if she found out BEFORE she and the girls would go through the portal.
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Depends on what you think would shock her. The sex slave thing, she already knows.
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But what about if she finds out that is what they plan to do to HER and her human friends, also I'm glad that Human Sombra was taken care of, of course I still hope that the guy who's watching the girls through the hidden camera's gets found out, maybe the pets of the girls can attack the items and destroy the camera's in them.
I just experienced a point somewhere between being freaking aroused and freaking disgusted. The weird part of me would have loved a play session with this sombra, too bad he's dead... But on the other hand, that son of a mother deserved it.
All in all another great chapter, keep it up! ^^
Glad to see another human world chapter and hoping the next one is too. Far more invested in this one than the one with that poor Twilight clone that I...
Ok, I might of blacked out a bit. But I'm fine now.
Overall criticism is on Sombre. His plan to take only the girls to Japan would have raised more than a few eyebrows. The parents of the boys would have demanded to know why and the girls parents might think something perverted is going on. Also, if he had planned to do that to Celestia from the start, the trip would have been canceled anyways since teachers would be worried that a principal went missing. Even if he had a cover story, Luna would have questioned it. And if the police visited his house one look around would have alerted them something was wrong.
In short, he's a dumb villain.
Might have been smarter to target girls who look like they were from troubled families or were planning on dropping out anyway
Also, here's hoping Chryssie is reminded her place by her master when this is over
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Chrysalis told Sunset last chapter her friends would be enslaved too.
Poor Spike
I'm surprised more people aren't disputing the tidbit over Equestria Girls taking place in America. Seemed like there was a few people I talked to elsewhere who would disagree.
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Really? Their school system sounded fairly American to me.
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I know how you feel. That EKG crown thing was bad, but hearing what he was about to do to Chryssy? Dear god, that took a fucking turn. I'm so glad that Chryssy stabbed him, but at the same time, he deserved waaaaay worse. Also, I'm surprised that he didn't recognize Chryssy, or was he not the mysterious guy watching Twi? I hope Principal Celestia has fun in Equestria and meet her double.
Wow. But I like you can provide risk and danger in your story . It makes the story that much more engaging.
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Yeah, it's mostly how they speak, plus they are using green money to that give them away.
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I agree Sombra deserved worse. Chrysalis let him off easy just like she ended up letting off the stallions from Appleloosa easy. Maybe ponies should start calling her Chrysalis the Merciful.
Damn Chrysalis is hardcore. Kind of wish she would done more to Sombra though.
Anyway while I'm looking forward to the whole ambush/enslavement of the CHS girls, I'm hoping you would include the sirens too.
Also do you have any plans for pony Sombra? I wouldn't mind seeing him appear, reformed, with Radiant Hope and the previous Crystal Empire ruler as his slaves. And while similar to his human counterpart he is not as sick as him.