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This is a twist that I have not experience in months! I don't even..... error 404
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Yeah, it's like Fall of Equestria all over again except it's chrysalis
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And also i was watching The book of eli and it conflicted me soo much too
https://youtu.be/zSMHmtaoXtI
Who owns chrysalis, I mean in the pic she is wearing a collar, and in BDSM relationships the sub wears a collar and it's usually technically a mark of ownership to show that that person is in a BDSM relationship and that they are 'off the market' so to speak.
Interesting way of putting it.
Fair enough.
Oh please, she's not that smart.
Eh?
This got dark real fast.
You.
I do not believe you.
Pardon?
You are.
You know he's not a killer. Although all jokes aside, I kinda want him to kill her if only to see her sheer surprise.
Eh? Are, you getting OFF on this?
Oh my god she is.
Be easier to list what isn't.
It's hard to tell when you're lying.
So how long before the REAL Ember shows up and this all goes to hell?
Pardon?
So it would appear.
OK, NOW I'M PISSED! Really?! REALLY?! Chryalis comes along in this first story with this feminist style KILL ALL MEN! mentality. And she has the proverbial (and literal) balls to pass off verbally and physically beating Spike as punishment for "demonizing" her despite the fact she wanted to wage war on the dragons?
This would be like the bitch from Rising Of The Shield Hero making the main character's life a living Hell like she does so because he wasn't grateful that she robbed him of everything he had then accused him of sexual assault making the poor guy an outcast. This line of logic is dumber than her usual mentality.
But since this is your story I'll stomach it.
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I've read the beginning of your story, though I didn't manage to get to any Chrysalis parts. With how much you demonise everyone except the former Bad Guys, I'm not sure that victory will mean much.
Now, as for this story: I agree with you for the most part. Chrysalis's outrage makes sense only with how delusionally arrogant and selfish she is. Spike should know better than to trust anything she says, she's proven to change her mind on a dime whenever it's convenient for her ego, but Spike is... a little dumb.
Or perhaps it would be more fair to say he's in an unsolvable situation: he wants to do the right thing, but half of his friends (and the world itself) is telling him what is right is doing something he considers bad (yet it is also fun for him), the other half (Ember, pretty much) tells him nothing and uses him when convenient, and on top of that, Chrysalis talks out both sides of her mouth at any given time.
Spike has grown up assisting powerful females all his life. He's still trying, in a way. That's why Spike is my favourite character in the story so far, he's relatable. Blueblood is the second, because he got to call the Changelings out on their bullsh*t and actually gave them a challenge.
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Well, which Fall of Equestria are we talking about here since there's quite a few them.
The easiest thing I can think that as a resemblance of the twist that probably anyone can follow is "Sasuke chasing Itachi", "Sasuke finding the truth" and "Sasuke help to make the world a better place" (I skip a few). Somehow I know I am going to get downvoted and quoted.
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There is a difference between the Bitch from Tate no Yuusha and Chrissy. Bitch deserves what's coming to her while Chrissy needs to a bit more to really know what she is getting. I do agree that in the first story she does act like that but once you move to the second story maybe she softens her outlook on most males, and it was probably thanks to Spike or some other males. Yeah, I know how much abuse he got, but was it really abusive? Like she broke bones, rip scales, tortures him enough would leave him in such a critical state? Through most of the story, she either kick him to the side, used magic on him? She mostly just threaten him or gave him the evil stare. Would that make her a much worse character?
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Well, you can say that Chrissy still follows the characteristics of the "Egotistical Villainess" in which she tries to influence naive minds like Spike, he is not dumb but he does not think that far ahead. It is not an unsolvable situation, is that he does not have enough info to make the right call. For example:
When Ember told him that she chose Him to be her consort, not knowing until it was too late that it was an empty title. That she only need to use him as a way to take care of her problem which will happen again in the next 6 years. Spike thought that he would be a bit more respected, happy and safe in the Dragon lands but as it turns out he is not, and it would be worst as he would be miserable, and even more when he has to wait for 6 years until Ember's heat comes back.
In truth, I do have to agree with Chrissy when she tells Spike that he would have been a virgin without her help.
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Well of course that victory wouldn't mean much. After all this isn't my story it's more about personal satisfaction. And as far as demonizing I didn't go that far with anyone execpt for Celestia and some of Rainbow Dash. Everyone else is still sympathetic.
In a round about way of saying it Chryalis's intentions were always sinister. So I understand that he wouldn't trust her and he's mot trying to fall for her world to give her the satisfaction. After all a leopard can't change it's spots.
Edit: On top of that Spike has nightmares of the same thing Sunset Shimmer had. That can't be a coincidence. Either Chryalis is going to try Somthing or she's being played. If she cared she'd try to find out what upsets him rather that solidify his prejudice by being a bitch around him. Incan understand a little tough love to get him to grow a spine but remember that having him be an ambassador wasn't even her Idea.
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The deer kingdom
Oh and I apologize for promoting my story. In a mix of waking up and getting to work I didn't realize the impact of what I was writing. Still legitimately pissed at Chryalis but I don't stop reading because I'm angry with a character.
Naughty spike.
YAAAAAAASSSSSSSS
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Shining Armor officially owns Chrysalis as of now. But he likes to let her do her own thing now rather than keep her chained up in his personal dungeon because he cares how she feels.