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And there we have it! Chrysalis has a new target in sight, Canterlot Highschool... Who knows what's going to happen with them.
Also, next chapter the story will be going back to its original format being half a chapter dedicated to events in the human world and the other have being another story line back in Equestria, where stuff is still happening in Chrysalis's absence.
Also, don't forget to comment on what you thought about the chapter!
Well good start but lets see how long Chrysalis lasts without her magic, of course I wonder what will happen if Sunset finds out anything about what happened to Equestria, maybe she will destroy the portal so that Earth is safe then from the mind control ponies and changelings then, of course if she does that while Chrysalis is still on her side of the portal things could go bad but she might be able to stop Chrysalis if she and the Human Mane 6 pony up and blast her with their version of the Elements.
I get the feeling that that's her way of saying "Fuck you, asshole."
Heh.
You'd be surprised. If memory serves, Lanipator, one of the founding fathers of TeamFourStar dropped out of college, and now he's a big time Youtuber, he's happy, married and his JOB to make people happy.
Did it ever occur to you, Watermelody, that while fantasies may not be as real as photographs, they're a good deal safer, as the other students can't know what's going on inside your head, while if you take a picture, they can guess.
Doubt it.
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Sorry to disappoint you but it’s not this kind of story. The Changelings won't lose because they are the "good guys" and are right about everything. Every female in every dimension secretly wants to be dominated and impregnate by a strong male master. So of course Sunset and the Human Seven will sooner or later realizes this and help all the other females of the human dimension to see the errors of their ways.
Afterall, we can’t let our “heroes” met a species where women don’t want to be owned be the males. That actually would mean that their world view isn’t perfect and we can’t have that, can we? ;)
8149040 You forget that the world that Sunset is in is a human world with MANY different nations, and without mind control magic being able to work in that world since only Friendship magic works then the Changelings are up a creek without a paddle and I would think that the moment that Chrysalis went through the portal that the collar around her neck would have no longer made her a slave, she would have been free then, I just hope that Sunset finds out in time about what happened to Equestria and blows up the portal so they don't try to take over her new home.
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We don’t know much of the Equestria Girls World. It could be our Earth, it could be a human version of Equestria or it could consists of nothing but one city, a few towns and the Everfree Forest. Besides, the Changeling takeover didn't involve any Mind Control magic. At least not on Chrysali's and Twilight's part. All the females in this stories have the natural desire to be owned by a master –even if they don’t know it yet. Don’t ask me why, but that’s how it works in this story.
In the end, however, it doesn’t really matter how many nations are on this world and what kind of magic works and which doesn’t. The author is the one who decides what happens in the story and based on everything I’ve read so far any outcome that doesn’t result in the humans eagerly accepting the “truth” of the Changelings is extremely unlikely.
8149547 I see, well I still think that Earth won't fall, also in the first story it was set After they met Starlight but before her return, so that means that Starlight Glimmer is still out there with her chance to use her Cutie Mark Removal spell on ponies, both Mares and Stallions, of course she might be able to effect Changelings too with her magic so they would have to watch out for her, if she does show up I hope she escapes to the Human world to warn them about what has happened in Equestria, this way she and Sunset could do something to stop them from coming through to take over.
8149609 Starlight Glimmer is still reformed and training as a slave as Twilight's pupil. I just haven't written her into the story yet.
Hey, didn't Chrysalis use magic to manipulate the minds of the women of Ponyville in the first story to get them all hot and bothered and willing to get some changeling dick? The hypocrisy is staggering. I think Chrysalis just doesn't want to share and just always hated her siblings.
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Something I would rather talk about is if Chrysalis is doing a good thing with her plan to expand and conquer. On one hand it can be considered a act of war and "forcing" people into slavery but then the changeling ideology say that you are going to be happier when you have been shown the "right" way.
As for your concerns Perky. Chrysalis is currently in a weaker position. No magic and no army. Taking on the world is going to be a challenge considering that she also has to deal with the male population that she dislikes. She is going to have to use subterfuge and that is going to take some time. As for back in Equestria, Things are going to be heating up. "world tensions is rising" so to speak. There are still independent nations around the world that are most likely going to resist the changeling's. Yes they are powerful but not invincible as we have seen. Artifact, relics and If things get desperate they might use the power of hate against them. Of course who wins in the end might be a given but there will be no lack of drama, struggles... clop and the philosophical comments about right and wrong that I enjoy so much .
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As for you Sleepy. Truly you did a great job when you managed to mix philosophy with clop. I have never before read a story that had such an interesting comment section.
But I will admit however: Starlight Glimmer could have been a interesting character. But you do what you want and focus on what you think is important... And kinky. Yes very, very kinky
(My favorite kind of kinky is the thoughts of the submissive's. How they see themselves, what they think and feel about the situation and of what they are doing.)
8152253 Thanks for the comment. I'm glad you enjoyed the story so much. Especially nice to see after this 2nd disappointing chapter where all interest seemed to have died off, judging from the number of comments.
But yeah, I was planning on throwing some more controversial stuff back in Equestria. Changelings wanting ponies to do what they say because they are changelings and the ponies are not kind of stuff. Just doesn't seem like much of a point if no one comments on stuff in the story.
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I would like to add: As long as Starlight hasn't been used yet, the option's still open to introduce her in a different role later on. She makes for a wonderful wild card!
Wait.
If ponies turn human by going through, but humans don't change, does that mean the pony turned human will remain human when they return?
8153939 It's meant to keep anyone from that originates from the human universe the same form when they go through the portal. But it still transforms anyone that originates from the pony world like normal.
8123567 that's the one that completely ruined the last one, I doubt, or sincerely hope very sleepy would avoid that train wreck again.
Yeah
I dropped the ball with my side story, but was gonna end with Sunset back in the human world after the fall of Appleoosa anyway so there is that.
Good work as always so far, exited to see more
I really enjoyed the first story, can't wait to see what you'll be cooking up. Also, it's nice to see you finally going to the human world after that tease from the first story.