HELLO, CYNE, JUST WANTED to say that there's nothing I can say here that I didn't scream to you in capslock already during the weeks you've been writing this and I've been waiting by the Gdocs like an overexcited puppy, but I still want to comment here to tell you this is sincerely one of the best RariTwi fics I've read (plus the best M-Rated RariTwi fic there is mostly because IT HAS AN ENTRANCING STORY AND IS TASTEFUL AND JUST????TASTEFUL????LIKE I SAID THAT TWICE BUT IT'S IMPORTANT OK) and I love it, and I also love you, and I'm very very glad you're posting it <3
7913222 There isn't anything wrong with sex, but I don't like to imagine these characters doing that. Then again, I could slap normal names on to try to disassociate it.
Cyne can we just agree that you writing lesbian vampire stories is quite possibly the best thing currently happening on the site. First your last update, now this. My cup runneth over.
(Also is is uncouth of me to say I found the sex indescribably hot? Probably. I will anyway.)
Kierkegaard and vampires. Sounds like one of those dumb "Pride and Prejudice and Zombies" kinds of things, and yet it's actually completely appropriate.
Did Celestia turn Twilight into a vampire to "resurrect" her student? On one hand kind of the opposite to the original source material, but similar enough given, well, vampires. Twilight Sparkle, saint of Vampirism. Also somewhat appropriate since St. Lazarus came to be associated with the care of lepers.
You know I'm not normally much for Anthro fics but so far this is good stuff. Also I'm not sure I've ever seen vamp Twi with Rarity, I think it's usually the other way around. You get bonus points for an approach I haven't seen before. I'll be waiting for updates :)
I have read far too many vampire romance novels in my life. None of them have ever even come close to having a sex scene as good as the one you've written here. This is an absolute masterclass in erotica writing, and I'm going to have to study this later in order to learn how to do it right.
I might read this, but I am hesitant because it is a mature with a sex tag.
Whats Carmilla?
7913127 It is 100% vampire story with clop. It's not as gratuitous as it could be, and it is very much relevant to the plot.
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Not ideal, but I might read. If I do, I'll have to tread carefully.
7913147 tl;dr Lesbian Vampires existed before Stoker's Dracula
7913173 What about Stokers Dracula? I was just asking about what Carmilla is.
7913184 I was joking. I linked you the Wiki page. Carmilla is a novella about a young woman who is a vampire who preys on other young women.
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What's wrong with sex?
7913222 Some people are uncomfortable reading about it for lots of reasons. It's quite alright.
*SLAMS DOOR DOWN*
HELLO, CYNE, JUST WANTED to say that there's nothing I can say here that I didn't scream to you in capslock already during the weeks you've been writing this and I've been waiting by the Gdocs like an overexcited puppy, but I still want to comment here to tell you this is sincerely one of the best RariTwi fics I've read (plus the best M-Rated RariTwi fic there is mostly because IT HAS AN ENTRANCING STORY AND IS TASTEFUL AND JUST????TASTEFUL????LIKE I SAID THAT TWICE BUT IT'S IMPORTANT OK) and I love it, and I also love you, and I'm very very glad you're posting it <3
I can't wait for you to post the rest ;u;
7913185 So does that mean Twi is gonna be a villain in this?
7913245 You decide.
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There isn't anything wrong with sex, but I don't like to imagine these characters doing that. Then again, I could slap normal names on to try to disassociate it.
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You don't ship RariTwi?
The best part of waking up is Folgers on your chest and eyelids.
Thank goodness for moist towelettes! A girl's best friend!
7913234 Tasteful M Rated fics are few and far between in my opinion so if this gets your seal of Approval I can not wait to have time to read this.
7913234 If this gets the Mono Seal of Approval this must be a must read.
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I don't mind shipping. The thing I have the most problem is tasteless and unnecessary oversexualization.
Cyne can we just agree that you writing lesbian vampire stories is quite possibly the best thing currently happening on the site. First your last update, now this. My cup runneth over.
(Also is is uncouth of me to say I found the sex indescribably hot? Probably. I will anyway.)
7913847 honestly I felt like it was game! And thanks : D
have to say i like this already, but i got feeeling twilight been away form the princess for longer then 7 months and the princess knew the turth.....
7914137 what
Kierkegaard and vampires. Sounds like one of those dumb "Pride and Prejudice and Zombies" kinds of things, and yet it's actually completely appropriate.
Did Celestia turn Twilight into a vampire to "resurrect" her student? On one hand kind of the opposite to the original source material, but similar enough given, well, vampires. Twilight Sparkle, saint of Vampirism. Also somewhat appropriate since St. Lazarus came to be associated with the care of lepers.
7914493 you actually inadvertently guessed what the last chapter is named
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Sweet! Can't wait to see which part!
You know I'm not normally much for Anthro fics but so far this is good stuff. Also I'm not sure I've ever seen vamp Twi with Rarity, I think it's usually the other way around. You get bonus points for an approach I haven't seen before. I'll be waiting for updates :)
7914941 this isn't Anthro, dood. It's humanised.
I have read far too many vampire romance novels in my life. None of them have ever even come close to having a sex scene as good as the one you've written here. This is an absolute masterclass in erotica writing, and I'm going to have to study this later in order to learn how to do it right.