Potential Of No More Chapters
Now I feel as if I am spamming these non-chapter chapters...but I am here to say that due to me not being able to come up with anything, my parents injuring each other, me potentially having to move again and quite a few more things...I have just lost almost all interest on this story. I've got no inspiration and almost no reason. So this is basically here to say that this story will be cancelled unless I get some inspiration. Maybe I'll read MLD again...
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It's alright.
You also used "hear" instead of "here". I think I sort of ruined the comment so i'll just stop
Its actually ok.
You have written a lot of chapters for this, this was your first story here and you did a good job managing it. I would be bored as well if I was in your postion. Heck if I was writting this story I don't think I would have more than half of the content-filled chapters you made.
Basicly what I'm saying is: if you got no more ideas, then its done. Perhaps you could wrap it up in one more chapter, or add more of a proper ending to the previous content-filled chapter. Then perhaps rid of the unnecessary personal updates, And call it complete. You can't strain an idea into an endless story, no one can.
I'm not even gonna lie and spare feelings. The last few content-filled chapters have gotten tedious, predictable, and just... boring...
The idea has just gotten too stretched. You should wrap it up at least, add some paragraph saying stuff like "I know that whatever happends, daddie will always be there with me, because he loves me, and I love him to." And then just call it complete, open up a new window, and start with a brand new idea. If you REALLY want to do "Dashies P.O.V.". Then do that.
You seem to be writing for us... I get the hint you don't really want to write this anymore, or "Dashies POV". If you have an idea for a one-shot, or a completely new story, but you think that we (the readers) will hate it. THEN WHO FREAKIN' CARES. WRITE IT! Your not writing because we tell you to! Your not writing because we want a certain story! Your writing because YOU want to and because YOU want to see an idea play out.
I'm making this too complicated aren't I? I'm angry at you because of what your doing to yourself! Want a quick version: if you don't like what your writing, why the hell are you writing it? If you really like an idea and want to write it, why the hell are you NOT writing it? Write what YOU WANT, have an idea nagging in the back of your head but trying to continue this or the other story instead because of popular demand? Then your doing it wrong.
Not trying to be mean, not insulting you or anyone else, not saying this story or the other one sucks. (It most definitely does not.) Just trying to help, your in charge of your life, not the poeple around you.
So disregard everyone and everything else, and ask YOURSELF two questions:
1. Is this story done? Do I have anything else to write for this? Do I want to write this?
2. Do I have an idea that I want to write? Will I ever write it? Will I let anyone try to change my mind?
Think for yourself. Don't even let me force something on you. Who's life are you living?
1070767 Good to see I'm not the only one. Personally I just want to work on the My Little Dashie: Dashie's POV more. Not confusing at all actually. However, it is something about this story that makes me want to complete it. I don't know what the idea will be but I am aiming for it. Personally, I do wish I was living any one else's life though. I hate my own. My parents are drunks, my friends are in another state, and I'm bullied daily. Shame though. When I started this story I planned to fill out daily and other events. I planned to make this story filled to the brim with chapters. Hundreds honestly. For my first story I guess this isn't so bad. I just don't wanna see it die since I do have a couple more chapter ideas. I want it finished but not dead. I know that they have been boring recently. I think I'm going to fill in the chapters I want done.
1071210
I'm sorry to hear about what happened to you, I wish you luck in your life, and I hope you continue this story, I'm loving it greatly, I loved My Little Dashie, and your story gives me a bigger view into what happened between those time skips in the original MLD, and I do wish to see the My Little Dashie (Dashie's POV) version.
1077182 MLD: Dashie's POV is already up. Not done, but up. Glad you're sorry about what has happened with me, but don't be. Originally when I planned out this story I had the idea of one hundred chapters. Each would be creative. Shame that might not happen. I do plan to involve a couple more of things in this story before I let it die its death rather than go on without being interesting.
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well, you will be in my prayers, as I hope things go right for you for a change, and that everything gets better. I look forward to more, and to reading the My little Dashie Dashie's POV, thanks for telling me it's already up.
1071210 Such a sad story of life but maybe it's time you turned things around. make some new friends or move in with your old ones and stop hanging around your parents if you can't handle living with them but above all things else just don't give up and I do agree that maybe since you are running out of ideas it's time for you to wrap it up.