The beginning of the Second Celestial Era,
Multiple villians' rise and downfall, Equestria had survived everything that had been thrown at her.
We all know the spirit, "Friendship is Magic."
But what if there were no harmony, no friendship,
when power is the only thing that matter, it all became clear.
"Equestria does not have eternal friends, or eternal enemies. She only has eternal interests."
The other races wanted to take over Equestria,
starting a civil war between races.
How will the ponies survive the invasion, and reach for peace?
Chapters (11)
Sounds interesting
7802244 Sounds like an unoriginal idea done to death more than HiE fics.
In war, the first casualty is truth
They say truth is the first causality of war. -Captain Price, Modern Warfare 3
7825355 I first heard that in the ending of Company of Heroes 2 but Captain Price is right
It's okay for a start. The formatting could use a bit more work and such. Overall, I'd read this I suppose.
Arrested for treason and they shoot on sight, makes sense. I could never imagine that Equestria has a death penality
The way you described the Griffins
reminds me of the Imperial Japanese Army for some reason
Oh yes, the griffons in this universe have thoughts on extreme nationalism.
Divines smile on you, friend.
Looks professional to me, I'd say it's a nice try for a novice writer.
Keep up the good work :)
Pretty good story, nice to see other people agree
This Deal will generate billions for our cause. Money can buy a lot of things, even Power.
Cod mw3 reference. Nice
Saying this to those who read it, do you think Granite should die?
Yes/No comment it.
Guns! guns! Guns!
Cod mw2 reference? And I Hope eclipse and lighting bolt survive the war and live a happy life together
>>Bronycommander Not exactly a reference. According to my knowledge guns guns guns is actually used in the military for opening fire. Mostly I would confirm my writing by a friend from the US Marine Corp, so that it could be as accurate as possible.
Thanks for supporting me, anyways :)
And I thought that they could enjoy the calm and peaceful night. Wait, can nightmare moon actually exist without luna?
Nightmare Moon is actually transformed from Luna, as she "disappeared" she was transformed. But everything else, they will be explained in further chapters.
7932058 Ah, okay.
Coudn't help but laught when Eclipse changed into a mare. Must been Awkward for both of them
Good Story :)
Loved it! Hope to see more stuff like this!
My condulences that she didn’t made it but at least they're reunited and at a better place
Sweet Victory!
That calls for a celebration! Pinkie PIe style!
NIce ending. Eclipse can live a happy life with his wife
Nice wedding