Everypony knows that dragons eat gemstones. But orange crystals? When Spike brings home some new kind of gems, Twilight realizes they have an ancient magic unknown to ponykind. So, she warns everyone. Well, almost everyone.
My name is Khanstantine. I am the dragon that walks along nicely the shadows of every soul. I am the fear that eats through the heart of man. Note: I do not write on weekends and holidays.
Everypony knows that dragons eat gemstones. But orange crystals? When Spike brings home some new kind of gems, Twilight realizes they have an ancient magic unknown to ponykind. So, she warns everyone. Well, almost everyone.
your story is decent, but u need to add more detail. did twilight chase spike? did she stand in his room doing nothing?
Your right. I'll work on it. I was so focused on spelling errors that I kinda ignored that.