Luna knelt in front of the grave, her face devoid of any emotion.
She glanced at the three tombstones behind her. Applejack, Fluttershy, and Rarity. The princess smiled sadly. She had managed to become good friends with all of them, even Fluttershy.
She turned back to the grave before her. In swirled letters, it showed off one word.
Shiver.
"You're taking this surprisingly well," a voice said from behind her. Luna didn't need to look to see who it was.
She replied, "It was her time." Luna sensed Celestia kneel beside her.
"It was the others' time too, when they passed away, but you took their deaths horribly. What's different?" Celestia pryed.
"You have no right to talk to me about them or Shiver," Luna replied coldly.
Celestia raised her eyebrow. "Of course I have the right. I'm your sister."
Luna whirled on her. "You liar! You don't care about me." Luna turned her back on Celestia. "Not like Shiver did... I could talk to her about anything, you know. We were sisters in a way you and I never were. You couldn't care about me in the way a sister could then, and you haven't changed."
Celestia looked at her sister, on the verge of tears, but hiding them well. "Well," Celestia said slowly. "I think we can change that."
Needs to be longer. Celestia needs to show more emotion to Luna. Then she can be the sister that Luna desperately needs. Good story anyway.
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Thanks for the input. I'm not so good at writing sentimental stories, and I don't have a lot of time nowadays, so...
Anyway, thanks for reading!
I'm not sure where I was going with the epilogue, I just felt like I needed to write it.
Thanks for your info, it helps a lot! I'll do better next time.
7651966 I tried to edit it after i posted it to add: it's just my opinion though.