Warning: the following contains depravity unfit for mortal eyes. If you're incapable of being offended/ disgusted feel free to watch.
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Sorry but as you've probably guessed this is not an update. I'm actually having trouble coming up with the rest of the story, which considering I've just been winging it so far isn't that big of surprise. Apologies for this, it was just a test to see if I could embed youtube video's in stories (perhaps other people like Device heretic could put dramatic readings in the chapters of eternal).
I wasn't originally planning on posting these notes but after further thought I think it's a good form of advertisement. Dick move? Why yes, yes it is.
I'll try and get another chapter out eventually. Oh and one last thing, feel free to share this around.
Edit: I've decided to add a list of grossly under-appreciated stories that are all infinitely better then mine, yet somehow got nowhere near as much attention.
Marcus Fenix has known almost nothing but war his entire life. It has consumed every aspect of his existence, and it has torn his world apart. After years of fighting and sacrifice, the tides have finally started to turn in favor of humanity. But after their most recent mission goes horribly wrong, Marcus and Delta squad find themselves in a bright world so very unlike their own. Surrounded by a myriad of talking ponies, can the hardened soldiers come to grips with the innocent nature of the realm they now find themselves in? And what will they do when they discover that all is not well in this naive new world?
(A/N: This story takes place before the events of Gear of War 3, but after Season 2 of Friendship is Magic. I've never read most of the supplemental material for Gears, so forgive me if I get some of the background stuff wrong. I'll do my best to research it/correct myself.)
And while I'm at it here are a few more under-looked and under-appreciated stories that you should absolutely read.
She did not know how, she did not know why, but before her banishment on her moon, Nightmare Moon experienced every kind of pain. Pains of the mind, body, and spirit. But they healed in time, forgotten to memory.
But the greatest of pains was yet to come.
An epic reading has been uploaded here courtesy of SerAaron: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xGz9rt1yrds
Inspired by a short narrative from VelcroHeart. Image by CrappyUnicorn. Edited by NinjaFox
^ This one was epic, incredibly sad and emotional and certainty better then anything I could ever write. Yet it only got 27 likes and one dislike. That's kind of unfair in my opinion, anyway read for yourself if you haven't already.
Whisper Sun, Silent Moon
A snapshot of the millennial lives of a young Celestia and Luna, as they prepare to do battle with Discord and fight to keep the Harmony they have only so recently mastered, and learn lessons they will struggle with all their days. In a journey that has no end, what matters most is who walks beside you.
^ Again this one was amazing and ridiculously under-appreciated with only 16 likes, It easily deserves over 300 because it's on par with eternal in terms of quality and story-telling (if not quantity). I can honestly call this a beautiful story.
I regret nothing. Feel free to post "OP is a faggot" .gifs and images, you have my blessing (No really, it'll be funny, maybe it will turn into thread simulator 2.0).
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Wow. Those types of people exist. [who I'm referring to is up to your imagination. he he]
I love these simulator things. This is great.
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Who could write things like this?
Oh wait, it's us.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png
k if you say so
OP is a...
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WTF did I just listen to? That is some weird ass funny shit...
.... People. XD
HAI YOUTUBE. Oh wait...
Beautiful!
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It sounded political, And I think Celestia would be a socialist because of her hating upper class ect (according to my characterization).
This premise... it's so premising. MUST READ.
I approve.
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That is...quite literally...the BEST possible thing
And if I'm gonna read this blatent form of advertising, I shall spam fic advertisements in the comment section. MWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
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Why Humans Should Never be Allowed in Equestria
[human] [random] [adventure] [comedy]
A fic about two friends who enter Equestria and proceed to fuck everything the fuck up.
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Humans, Ponies and Chaos
[crossover] [adventure] [comedy] [human]
Possibly the greatest and most well done crossover of all time, Humans, Ponies and Chaos combines Gears of War, Team Fortress 2, Skyrim and My Little Pony. When Clayton Carmine, Ulfgar the fearless, red heavy are sent into Equestria by Discord, the trio must fight to the end to protect the ponies who they were sent to kill.
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The End of Ponies
[Tragedy] [adventure] [dark]
Easily the greatest fic on the website, EoP tells the story of the last pony after a apocalypse wipes out the entire pony species. When she finds an old friend who says she can go back in time, back to before the cataclysm and save the world, how far will she go knowing that regardless of her actions, she cannot save her species.
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I'll try and update this so your message is seen.
This ever going to update?
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Nope, I wrote a chapter 3 but was never happy with it. The fight scene was crappy, and I don't have the will to continue. Sorry bro.
I hope this story continues. I find it hilarious on so many levels. If you're wondering how to continue the fic, why not simply make a chapter focused on Token and maybe include where Fluttershy went with the other pony. Also, I just love how in the first chapter, Celestia has to pause and take in the situation of somepony asking her to smoke a joint XD.
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Well if you noticed token fucked off during the disarray and nopony actually noticed it happening. In other words I forgot he was there and only remembered at the end, I decided to work it into the story and have them stop suddenly and say "Wait... where the fuck is token". Unfortunately I don't think I'll be continuing this. But thanks for the praise all the same, makes me feel slightly less stupid.
Anyway, I was considering doing a fic where Celestia has her period during a political summit and must remain calm under pressure and blood-loss. But I can't be arsed.
Celestia's all like