hmmmmm kinky

Please have Celestia get revenge on the sirens later.

Whew, lad. I'm already a sucker for Luna (huehuehue), so I figured I would like this from the beginning, but I just... mmph. Her being the sensible one between the two siblings is a great feeling. and even if the fact that she's banging a student is irresponsible in and of itself, that Luna shows such restraint in comparison to Celestia and is more keen on the romance than the sex (though she certainly enjoys the latter) is genuinely heartwarming. The atmosphere alone of it, even the fucking, is just so sheerly comfy that it makes me melt. This chapter goes beyond Sexy Territory into full-blown Hot-and-Totally-Adorbs Land. Not saying this as an affront to your skills as an erotica writer, but I could honestly read this chapter, my heart aflutter, and enjoy every second of it without having to take the dirtiness into consideration, and it's a wonderful feeling. Thanks for this, and I really hope that we can get some similar situations with Luna later.

By the way, there was a song that had been looping in my head the entire time I was reading, and I figure I should share it; it's really quite pleasant.

Nujabes is love, Nujabes is life.

Does Celestia knows that her sister is kind of dating Rainbow Dash? If not and she do RD Luna will be so pissed.

This feels romantic.

7492930 For sure. :) Been something I've had planned for a while, but I'm kinda going along a timeline so it'll take a while to get there.

7492934 I'm glad you enjoyed it so much! Things definitely get a little more...complicated for them later on, but I think the romance remains in tact. One of my long term goals for the story is that the sisters might not see eye to eye, but I never wanted them openly against one another. So there's a little bit more of "learning from each other" than anything else, because they both have something to teach.

That's a sweet song, and I think it fits pretty well! RD and Luna might be a bit of an odd pairing, but I think they're cute together. Nice balance between patience and impatience. At any rate, thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts, I really appreciate it!

7493347 You'll seeeeee!

Yess, I can't wait to see those bellies grow more!

7492794 Okay...Sappy.

I'm pleased you liked their romantic interlude! Next chapter isn't romantic, but it does kind of twist some things on their head. (I'm honestly very curious to see how Fimfiction will respond for several reasons, not the least of which being that it has Celestia in a submissive state.)

Is Cadense and Human Twilight going to enter the fray, or at least have a side-chapter for them? Great chapter.

Why not have Candace do this to the Shadowbolts at Crystal Prep?

Here's hoping Twilight becomes a player rather than a follower.

I really hope Celestia doesn't do anything to Dash at this point, coz she's just too cute with Luna!

7493561 Big answer there is just time. :) I'd love to do stuff like that, but writing dirty stuff is how I make a living. Celestia's Stable is one of the few stories I write without being commissioned, so I only get a chance to put together one chapter a month usually.

As per usual, I think Luna is best pony. So will We read any future titles involving Luna :)

7492195 they better be fucking while riding a horse, like in Witcher 3.

Oooooooo. Now this was rather different. Lunash. :D.

I like where this story is going.

Eventually Celestia's gonna come for Dash, and the two sisters are going to have a giant confrontation, with Luna absolutely livid with Celestia, but Celestia (maybe surprised with Luna's love for Dash, maybe not. Can't tell yet.) is gonna be insistent on fucking Dash, and the two are gonna have quite a large fight in one of their offices in the middle of school, with some sexy actions later that decide who'll keep Dash to themselves. I'm calling it now, with 3.14% certainty.

this makes me love a ship id never even considered
you make lunadash work well

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I'd say in this story that Luna is very plain and simple in love with Rainbow Dash. They're treating other not merely as sex objects, but also as best friends.

Ok, Maybe I'll be the only one to mention the elephant in the room. Applejack would have been a MUCH more interesting chapter seeing as how she would (If her character were kept even slightly intact)have offered a bit more resistance to Celestias charms before succumbing to her Principal. My guess is either the inability to write a character that isn't automatically submissive, or couldn't think of a proper scenario. Either way, just glossing over a character diminishes this story greatly (and no, just because there is an applejack chapter later doesn't count because she is already part of the harem then)

Now Luna is what a good Dom should be. A good Dom looks after and cares about their Sub. It's a relationship built around pure trust (with the Sub paradoxically having all the power, even when giving the Dom the illusion of power), and with the Dom trusting the Sub to make sure that they aren't going to far and are keeping the games safe.

Tia? She cares for noone but herself, her own desires, and could care less about any of her property (I can't call them lovers, because Tia sees them as actual property to please herself).

Honestly I look forward to more of Dash and Luna, she truly cares for Dash and looks out for her best interest / well being. And when they do, do relatively light Fetishism, she makes sure that everything she does is with Dash in mind. As well as a way to heighten / accentuate their love for one another.

Which is just another reason that Luna needs to fuck sense into Tia. And take over Tia's harem. Since at the very least we can know that Luna would actually care for them beyond them squeezing out as many children as possible. And all of Tia's current property is going to need some serious therapy to get out of the mind fuck that they've been broken into.

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Agreed. AJ is a freaking brickwall that's also partially possessed by internet trolls. She has a rather strong and neigh impenetrable, force of will. I have no idea what it'd take to break AJ. Or get her to not spill the beans immediately. I mean I can't see AJ breaking easily. Pinks? Sure, if in this setting she's not hot to get Maud's lady rocks off (or Dashie's; FlutterButter's; Luna's; Rare's; or Twilight's).

But AJ? She's such a stubborn troll, that even her "friendship report" is her trolling the princess. And she's an Apple. They're so stubborn that when you look up the word stubborn, their family portrait is displayed beside it.

I love this chapter so much. I wish I could wrap it around me like a blanket and sleep in it.

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Your friendship is the real cozy blanket!

This is a good contrast to the previous chapters in terms of tone.