Principal Celestia just can't keep her hands off her students, or her futa member out of them. In this ongoing story, Celestia sinks deep into her student body's student bodies.
Interesting chapter, thought I still don't get fetiches in general I must say that this is a good reading.
For a moment I though that there were gonna be jealousy from the other girls because the emotional bonds of Luna and Rainbow, and you manage to deliver it in a better way without conflict.
To that end Rarity had put in time, time spent studying with Sunset Shimmer, time trying on clothes for Rarity’s designs, time volunteering at the animal shelter with Fluttershy, and...well…
Point of editing, I believe Celestia should replace the first Rarity in this statement.
7507060 It'll still be a part of her. :) I firmly believe that you can be loving and super dominant at the same time, and that will come through in the next chapter.
I imagine Celestia does some sweet things for her girls from time to time, but is also of the mindset of "This is hard, take care of it" whenever she wants.
I should be happy for a new chapter but then I realize we're now gunna have to wait about a month for the next one. O well I can wait, keep up to good work bro
Does Pinkie have a slim feminine penis or something? Or equipped with both sets of junk? That would be an interesting dynamic to see, a friend of the group with both sets of equipment. You don't often get to see pregnant hermaphrodites. There's my suggestion for some future plot thread.
What exactly did I say in any of my posts that suggested I wasn't open to debate? I presented an argument contradicting something he said. He responded with "It's hilarious that you think I care" and nothing else. I pointed out that I don't typically assume that someone cares about the issue when I decide to present an argument, and that if they aren't interested in discussing it I won't push them to do so. He said okay. I said okay. We both dropped the issue, just as I said I would if he didn't want to debate it.
So I admit, I'm curious (and a little confused) where you're getting the idea that I'm not open to debate when I made a statement that could initiate a debate, he indicated that he didn't want to debate it, and I opted to drop it rather than continue attempting to argue with him when he didn't want to do so.
7528829 Thanks! :) I thought Derpy would be a fun addition just 'cause I never see her in a hard domme role. Thought it would be a nice change of pace. I figured her and Harshy make for an unusual pair, and I like sort of flirting with things outside the norm.
7510229 I've done a fair bit of NTR stories, and I can definitely see how opinions on them are mixed. Going into this one, I definitely wanted to avoided the more "hostile" aspects of it. I love the sisters working together and learning from each other, because that's what sisters should do anyway. There's plenty of girls to go around for them both to enjoy!
7562958 I've flirted with the idea of Celestia with prime Twilight, perhaps even in her pony version. I'm unsure how people would respond to human/pony sex, though.
I eagerly wait for your next chapter. The grading scale that I would like want to read from your 4 options is 2, 3, 4, and 1. Although, I do have a few ideas: One, for the pet exchange, the Mistress is either Miss Cake or Maud. I can see nothing happening to Pinkie or being done to her without Maud's approval. Also, as this fic is between the first Equestria Girls and Rainbow Rocks the video "Music to my ears" could be a way for Celestia to get Vinyl Scratch and then Octavia. The next, after Rainbow Rocks Celestia could punish both the Dazzlings and Trixie, as Trixie did forcefully imprisoned the Rainbooms. Second, Celestia could have a 'talk' to both Lyra and Bonbon, Sweety Drops, for the weird performance for the tryouts for the Friendship Games. Lastly, getting the Crystal Prep Twilight the same way she got Sunset Shimmer.
7680601 I think that's accurate. There's a loving bond there, but they're also going to be detailed as pragmatic when it comes to sex. You can be in love with someone and have sex with others while still keeping that bond, so long as everyone's on the same page. I don't ever have any plans to pit the sisters against each other as far as Dash goes; I'd very much like it to be a happy little story in that regard.
7726143 The end goal is to eventually have Sci-Twi join the harem, while Princess Twilight is more of a one-shot. (People seemed to really like the idea of including pony Twilight in a chapter, and I'll admit I'm curious to write it because it's new territory for me.)
Ultimately the series will follow along the movies, and there'll be more chapters of girls that Celestia enjoys that don't join the harem. The Dazzlings, Crystal Prep girls, Gloriosa...they're more like one-shots with Celestia getting her big futa dong wet. The Princess Twilight chapter will be similar to that.
7724178 The main reason was just that I didn't want to write yet another seduction chapter. That's the same reason Pinkie hasn't made the scene yet. And Applejack also served as a good character to showcase the slight softening of Celestia, with her being more romantic and loving with her harem.
7847300 When I started writing erotica, I discovered there was a large fanbase for what I could best describe as harem breeding stories. Stories where the protagonist (or antagonist) rolls their way through the entire cast, breeding everyone they can. I discovered this through being commissioned to write one set in Legend of Korra, and like a year after it ended I decided to apply the same style to EQG.
Basically, if you're not into the breeding kink, this is basically the worst kind of story for you since it's central to the plot/fetish. :) There's not going to be many chapters where it doesn't take a limelight/gets mentioned in some way. The girls don't object primarily because it would slow down the fun if they did.
7847486 I don't know about "worst;" if I hadn't learned to selectively enjoy stories that have fetishes I don't share, the Internet would be a much lonelier place (and I would have fled your page at best speed instead of what I actually did). But I guess that's one major reason the first couple chapters are my favorite.
Meh. The romance seems pretty shoe-horned in. If Luna was right and Celestia has been greedy and whatnot her entire life, then I doubt that Celestia would ever start seeing her girls as anything other than breathing fuckdolls anytime soon. If she went her entire life without changing, then just seeing her sister being happy with Rainbow Dash will likely not topple a major pillar of her personality and self.
Applejack was a pro when it came to camping and Principal Celestia wasn’t all that far behind; a result of long summer weeks in Everfree forest at the camping lodge of her youth.
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The girls had given her everything. Their pussies. Their pregnancy. Their love. And Celestia…? She had given them nothing but hard, sweaty lust. It wasn’t the failing of the girls; it was a failure on her end. And once she had realized it, she had gone about correcting it.
About time ... but that was something she should have done chapters ago. As is, I'm still rather off put by her. And hope that more of Luna rubs off on her. After all, thinking of her girls as nothing more than property is reprehensible. _________________
Luna was right. This...this meant just as much to her as what she had taught to her sister. Together, they made a wonderful team, whether it was running a school or breeding their favorite students.
And Luna could stand to rub off a bit more on Tia. At least in the 'how to treat your lover's' way. At least Tia's finally to a point where she's starting to see them as more than property. Which Luna needs to truly break her from. Then it'd start feeling right to see her (and possibly Luna) bring in a bit more to the herd (after all Pinks and Twilight are left out atm (well until Twilight comes back to face the Dazzlings)). And seeing Trixie joining would be nice too. ___________________
So yeah ... this side of Tia we need to see more of. And more of Luna rubbing off possitively on Tia.
But as for who's next.
Well if AJ and them want all their friends to be in there. Then Pinks would be next, when the Dazzling's arrive (in this fic or a different one) Twilight. Possibly Trixie (as stated above) if only because in the Twilight fic. We see Trixie after she's already Tia's lover. We never see how she gets there.
Although I am sad that after they get rutted. We never really saw their growth and transition of the characters. Only (other than AJ) their first moments, next we know they're pregnant and cock hungry. A little bit of character development for them lost. But hopefully now that Tia's attending to their emotional needs rather than simply her own desires we can get that . Especially now that Tia is starting to see them as more than property (Still want to see her get her comeuppance for not getting their sooner ... and sad that Luna's not dominating Celestia like Celestia needs / deserves).
Over all though. I'm following this fic. If only to see what happens next.
8266885 Celestia's attitude seems pretty reprehensible, but...once Sunset Shimmer is done with her token protests, the girls pretty much only act like property anyway.
I mean, we start with Sunset being coerced. Then Fluttershy, who technically was coerced, but it's hard to believe Celestia had all that much leverage to punish her compared to Sunset. Then Rarity, who didn't need to be coerced. Oh, and then Rainbow Dash with Luna, who really, really wants to get pregnant despite having the most obvious reason (athletics) among the girls why she wouldn't.
When I think about it...once you get past the first two chapters, this story seems less "dark" and more "wow, everyone in this story (except Derpy I guess) has a fetish for either causing or experiencing pregnancy, and just needed their helpful Principal to show them the way."
(And yeah, the Rarity chapter in particular always makes me go "are you sure this isn't mind-control?" I mean, it's definitely my third favorite chapter after the first two, and I know Drace likes to hurry up and get to the porn, but the actual "seduction" was almost comically short and seemingly effortless for Celestia, and it reads like she somehow knew it would be that simple.)
Like the new chapter. Though I must say I'm going to miss the old super dominant Celestia going forward.
Interesting chapter, thought I still don't get fetiches in general I must say that this is a good reading.
For a moment I though that there were gonna be jealousy from the other girls because the emotional bonds of Luna and Rainbow, and you manage to deliver it in a better way without conflict.
Waiting for the next chapter.
I hope twilight is next.
Great chapter.
NOPE! NO..No...no... It's been a long 3 months, just let me be surprised.
And I can happily say... It was good.
That was adorable, hot, and inventive. And funny! Well done!
Point of editing, I believe Celestia should replace the first Rarity in this statement.
7507885 You are correct! Fixed. :) Thanks.
7507060 It'll still be a part of her. :) I firmly believe that you can be loving and super dominant at the same time, and that will come through in the next chapter.
I imagine Celestia does some sweet things for her girls from time to time, but is also of the mindset of "This is hard, take care of it" whenever she wants.
Enjoying how the relationships are going beyond just sex, wonder how that's going to play into when the families start noticing them being preggers.
awww yes. still waiting for the dazzlings though.
I should be happy for a new chapter but then I realize we're now gunna have to wait about a month for the next one. O well I can wait, keep up to good work bro
Does Pinkie have a slim feminine penis or something? Or equipped with both sets of junk? That would be an interesting dynamic to see, a friend of the group with both sets of equipment. You don't often get to see pregnant hermaphrodites. There's my suggestion for some future plot thread.
Magnificent, unbelievable, brilliant
Keep up the great work. This is just magnificent...outstanding work.
Never stop. Keep it up and take your time! :D
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What exactly did I say in any of my posts that suggested I wasn't open to debate? I presented an argument contradicting something he said. He responded with "It's hilarious that you think I care" and nothing else. I pointed out that I don't typically assume that someone cares about the issue when I decide to present an argument, and that if they aren't interested in discussing it I won't push them to do so. He said okay. I said okay. We both dropped the issue, just as I said I would if he didn't want to debate it.
So I admit, I'm curious (and a little confused) where you're getting the idea that I'm not open to debate when I made a statement that could initiate a debate, he indicated that he didn't want to debate it, and I opted to drop it rather than continue attempting to argue with him when he didn't want to do so.
7528829 Thanks! :) I thought Derpy would be a fun addition just 'cause I never see her in a hard domme role. Thought it would be a nice change of pace. I figured her and Harshy make for an unusual pair, and I like sort of flirting with things outside the norm.
7527612 Thanks! :D You're too kind.
7517108 I love dry humping. Could grind against it all day.
7510229 I've done a fair bit of NTR stories, and I can definitely see how opinions on them are mixed. Going into this one, I definitely wanted to avoided the more "hostile" aspects of it. I love the sisters working together and learning from each other, because that's what sisters should do anyway. There's plenty of girls to go around for them both to enjoy!
7542924 Just keep it up Dracie! Your doing great! :D
7542961 i'm loveing it so far
Celestia or Luna knocking up both Twilight's would be fun to see.
Can we maybe have Luna and Celestia get knocked up sometime as well, maybe even knocking up each other?
7574807 They don't have lady parts in this dimension! There's nothing to do the knocking up through!
7562958 I've flirted with the idea of Celestia with prime Twilight, perhaps even in her pony version. I'm unsure how people would respond to human/pony sex, though.
7556902 Thanks! :D
7575124 It'd be interesting to see if nothing else!
7575124 please do this.
been reading this off and on all week now that I have caught up all I can say is
DAMN SON
love me some Futalestia all in all ten out of ten would fap again
Waiting for the next chapter
I eagerly wait for your next chapter. The grading scale that I would like want to read from your 4 options is 2, 3, 4, and 1. Although, I do have a few ideas: One, for the pet exchange, the Mistress is either Miss Cake or Maud. I can see nothing happening to Pinkie or being done to her without Maud's approval. Also, as this fic is between the first Equestria Girls and Rainbow Rocks the video "Music to my ears" could be a way for Celestia to get Vinyl Scratch and then Octavia. The next, after Rainbow Rocks Celestia could punish both the Dazzlings and Trixie, as Trixie did forcefully imprisoned the Rainbooms. Second, Celestia could have a 'talk' to both Lyra and Bonbon, Sweety Drops, for the weird performance for the tryouts for the Friendship Games. Lastly, getting the Crystal Prep Twilight the same way she got Sunset Shimmer.
7680601 I think that's accurate. There's a loving bond there, but they're also going to be detailed as pragmatic when it comes to sex. You can be in love with someone and have sex with others while still keeping that bond, so long as everyone's on the same page. I don't ever have any plans to pit the sisters against each other as far as Dash goes; I'd very much like it to be a happy little story in that regard.
7717176 Sisters don't steal from sisters! They share and help each other!
when is the next chapter, still havent done pinkie pie or twilight
maybe involve the dazzlers too
I have heard rumors that you may plan to do pony princess twilight
please Dont , just dont.
It would ruin the story, maybe do two stories to please those who want it but please dont waste twilight by making her a pony
7726143 The end goal is to eventually have Sci-Twi join the harem, while Princess Twilight is more of a one-shot. (People seemed to really like the idea of including pony Twilight in a chapter, and I'll admit I'm curious to write it because it's new territory for me.)
Ultimately the series will follow along the movies, and there'll be more chapters of girls that Celestia enjoys that don't join the harem. The Dazzlings, Crystal Prep girls, Gloriosa...they're more like one-shots with Celestia getting her big futa dong wet. The Princess Twilight chapter will be similar to that.
7724178 The main reason was just that I didn't want to write yet another seduction chapter. That's the same reason Pinkie hasn't made the scene yet. And Applejack also served as a good character to showcase the slight softening of Celestia, with her being more romantic and loving with her harem.
7726533 i imagine pinkie pie is next then?
7847300 When I started writing erotica, I discovered there was a large fanbase for what I could best describe as harem breeding stories. Stories where the protagonist (or antagonist) rolls their way through the entire cast, breeding everyone they can. I discovered this through being commissioned to write one set in Legend of Korra, and like a year after it ended I decided to apply the same style to EQG.
Basically, if you're not into the breeding kink, this is basically the worst kind of story for you since it's central to the plot/fetish. :) There's not going to be many chapters where it doesn't take a limelight/gets mentioned in some way. The girls don't object primarily because it would slow down the fun if they did.
7847486 any progress on future chapters?
when is the next chapter my man?!?
7847486 I don't know about "worst;" if I hadn't learned to selectively enjoy stories that have fetishes I don't share, the Internet would be a much lonelier place (and I would have fled your page at best speed instead of what I actually did). But I guess that's one major reason the first couple chapters are my favorite.
I would just love you hear ANY outside character's reaction to this. A student, a teacher, god, a parent.
"Howdy mother, my principal I'd fucking the shit out of us and we're all preggers."
Should I stop waiting for this?
Meh. The romance seems pretty shoe-horned in. If Luna was right and Celestia has been greedy and whatnot her entire life, then I doubt that Celestia would ever start seeing her girls as anything other than breathing fuckdolls anytime soon. If she went her entire life without changing, then just seeing her sister being happy with Rainbow Dash will likely not topple a major pillar of her personality and self.
I assume commissions and new projects are keeping you busy, but do you think you'll be returning to this and Harshly Handled someday?
Cap.
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About time ... but that was something she should have done chapters ago. As is, I'm still rather off put by her. And hope that more of Luna rubs off on her. After all, thinking of her girls as nothing more than property is reprehensible.
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And Luna could stand to rub off a bit more on Tia. At least in the 'how to treat your lover's' way. At least Tia's finally to a point where she's starting to see them as more than property. Which Luna needs to truly break her from. Then it'd start feeling right to see her (and possibly Luna) bring in a bit more to the herd (after all Pinks and Twilight are left out atm (well until Twilight comes back to face the Dazzlings)). And seeing Trixie joining would be nice too.
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So yeah ... this side of Tia we need to see more of. And more of Luna rubbing off possitively on Tia.
But as for who's next.
Well if AJ and them want all their friends to be in there. Then Pinks would be next, when the Dazzling's arrive (in this fic or a different one) Twilight. Possibly Trixie (as stated above) if only because in the Twilight fic. We see Trixie after she's already Tia's lover. We never see how she gets there.
Although I am sad that after they get rutted. We never really saw their growth and transition of the characters. Only (other than AJ) their first moments, next we know they're pregnant and cock hungry. A little bit of character development for them lost. But hopefully now that Tia's attending to their emotional needs rather than simply her own desires we can get that . Especially now that Tia is starting to see them as more than property (Still want to see her get her comeuppance for not getting their sooner ... and sad that Luna's not dominating Celestia like Celestia needs / deserves).
Over all though. I'm following this fic. If only to see what happens next.
8266885
Celestia's attitude seems pretty reprehensible, but...once Sunset Shimmer is done with her token protests, the girls pretty much only act like property anyway.
I mean, we start with Sunset being coerced. Then Fluttershy, who technically was coerced, but it's hard to believe Celestia had all that much leverage to punish her compared to Sunset. Then Rarity, who didn't need to be coerced. Oh, and then Rainbow Dash with Luna, who really, really wants to get pregnant despite having the most obvious reason (athletics) among the girls why she wouldn't.
When I think about it...once you get past the first two chapters, this story seems less "dark" and more "wow, everyone in this story (except Derpy I guess) has a fetish for either causing or experiencing pregnancy, and just needed their helpful Principal to show them the way."
(And yeah, the Rarity chapter in particular always makes me go "are you sure this isn't mind-control?" I mean, it's definitely my third favorite chapter after the first two, and I know Drace likes to hurry up and get to the porn, but the actual "seduction" was almost comically short and seemingly effortless for Celestia, and it reads like she somehow knew it would be that simple.)