Principal Celestia just can't keep her hands off her students, or her futa member out of them. In this ongoing story, Celestia sinks deep into her student body's student bodies.
I get that this is just porn. I really do, and it's not the biggest on plot of any sort, but...
The young woman had always presented herself as so timid and quiet, and when Celestia had first approached her with an ultimatum regarding her crime of sneaking animals into school, she honestly wasn’t sure how the little thing would react
That's stupid. That's it. I have nothing else to say. If we were to be remotely realistic-and I mean remotely-then Celestia was arrested for pedophilia when Fluttershy screamed and ran from her office as she tried to coerce her for sex because she brought bunnies, puppies, and other small birds or mammals to school-not venomous snakes or really dangerous animals-just cute little animals.
Again, I get it's porn and I shouldn't be thinking about it this much. But sneaking non-dangerous animals into school=forcing student into having sex-that's not nearly serious enough to warrant blackmail of this level.
Sexually wise, it's a BJ. Not a lot to get wrong on there, I thought it was well done though, true test comes down to when sex will happen (I see it did just update, will read later). I think it was broken down well enough to Sunset giving a partial consent. The same way you consent to have sex with your boss to avoid being fired.
Um, no. There is no such thing as "partial consent." It isn't some kind of sliding scale. There's consensual and non-consensual. What you just described - being given the choice between committing sexual acts or being fired - isn't consensual. Calling it "partial consent" or other nonsense like that is just a cheap attempt to play it down and avoid calling it what it is. If you place someone under duress to coerce them into sexual acts - whether through physical force, intimidation, blackmail, or anything else of that nature - then it's rape. Plain and simple.
The closest thing to "partial consent" is the porn concept of "dubcon," and even that doesn't really apply in your scenario. "Dubcon" suggests that the consent is dubious - it's more ambiguous whether they were really consenting or not. There's nothing ambiguous about someone who doesn't want to have sex agreeing to have sex under the threat of punishment (in your example, being fired) if they refuse. Now, in the case of the story itself...I think there were enough cues here suggesting that Sunset was far more willing than the initial "You can give me what I want or say goodbye to school" conversation let on. I'd definitely say that this falls into dubcon more than noncon due to Sunset's thoughts and feelings throughout the story. But without those thoughts and feelings suggesting a willingness that pushed it out of noncon territory, then Celestia threatening punishment (expulsion) if Sunset wouldn't do her sexual favors would be straight up noncon.
If one was to stop reading at where she starts giving her the "If you want to stay in this school..." talk or if it had kept up with that tone (and only that tone), then I could see an argument that this was blatant noncon. That said, I feel like there were enough little clues here and there hinting at Sunset wanting it and being really into it to safely put it in dubcon territory instead. Not the physical arousal - that can happen even during flat out rape - but in a lot of her responses to Celestia's advances. It might toe the line between non and dub at times, especially near the beginning, but for the most part I think it stayed well within that more ambiguous area.
Good work on the story. I look forward to reading more of it.
I honestly find it rather bizarre that you think I believe you care. I don't generally assume that someone will or won't care when I comment, just as I don't expect others to assume that I will or won't care when they comment. I see someone make a false or uninformed statement, I'll address why that statement is inaccurate. If they're interested in discussing it, we can have a discussion. If they aren't, then we'll just go about our business. Beyond that, whether or not the person I'm addressing cares doesn't make any difference to me.
I was looking forward to this chapter and you did not disappoint. Did not disappoint at all. Every chapter's end makes me look forward to the next girl! I wonder who is going to get the kinkiest scene? Rarity? Rainbow Dash?
So, I'm going to be blunt and say that this is crazy hot. I'm pretty sure that my greatest kink is a futa making her ladyfriend(s) preggers, so the very premise of the story alone is drool-worthy. Celestia being a futa makes me wonder about something, though; what of her sister? Surely Celestia couldn't be the only futa in her family? It could also turn into something of a competition between Celestia and Luna to see who can knock up the most students, which has a lot of potential for fun. Alternately, Luna could be the "quality over quantity" sort, taking only one girl and putting them on her a pedestal, something about which the two of them debate.
Just so you know, I'm not trying to write this story for you; I'm really quite sure that you've already got most of it planned out, and to mess with that too much would wreck it. Considering how much I like the work so far, that's pretty much the last thing I want.
I'm afriad to ask but she said a breeder if i remember what the heck does that mean she breeding childrent o sell, or she meant getting a large family?
This story is great, but please, please, please get an editor and proofreader. The repetitions and simple errors kill the mood faster than unsexy thoughts. And I don't want that for a story idea as good as this.
I actually have this fav'd on HF as well. Love it and can't wait for a new chapter on HF or here if you finish uploading the other chapters from HF soon. Love your other works as well. Keep up the awesome writing.
4while I like the ideas of this story I hope Luna gets a harem of her own containing Trixy, Twilight and the other villains of the school like the sirens and queen chrysalis.
7487306 If you aren't going to be open to some kind of debate then don't make comments like you did. Otherwise you are just a SJW piece of shit that is being annoying just to be annoying.
7486164 However, what you're not considering is that school is meant to be for everyone. What about the people with pet allergies? The reason why pets aren't allowed in school is for that very reason. Because by bringing a pet to school would cause a person with the allergy to become sick and suffer and that isn't fair to them. Plus there is the introduction of animals to an actively changing and strange environment. A pet that normally is well behaved can become agressive and defensive in a strange environment and when stressed. This is yet another factor as to why pets aren't allowed on the premises of a public school. And Fluttershy, being the animal enthusiast that she is, is obviously a repeat offender for the 'no pets at school' rule.
I agree that you make a valid point with regards to the blackmail and sex. Perhaps if this was a porn shoot, the author's disclaimer that all character's are 18 or over might be more believable, but in an actual school setting, that would significantly narrow the students of consenting age and even further as not all of the students of consenting age would be her 'best students.'
So, this is more meant to provide possible motivations regarding Celestia's issue/problem(s) with Fluttershy and not a dismissal of the legal implications of a public government official engaging in coitus with one of her wards, even if they were of legal age.
I get that this is just porn. I really do, and it's not the biggest on plot of any sort, but...
That's stupid. That's it. I have nothing else to say. If we were to be remotely realistic-and I mean remotely-then Celestia was arrested for pedophilia when Fluttershy screamed and ran from her office as she tried to coerce her for sex because she brought bunnies, puppies, and other small birds or mammals to school-not venomous snakes or really dangerous animals-just cute little animals.
Again, I get it's porn and I shouldn't be thinking about it this much. But sneaking non-dangerous animals into school=forcing student into having sex-that's not nearly serious enough to warrant blackmail of this level.
It's dumb. That's it.
So is Twilight going get some.
7486339 She's not gonna show up for a while, but I'd recommend checking my other stories. :) She gets some in ALL of those.
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Um, no. There is no such thing as "partial consent." It isn't some kind of sliding scale. There's consensual and non-consensual. What you just described - being given the choice between committing sexual acts or being fired - isn't consensual. Calling it "partial consent" or other nonsense like that is just a cheap attempt to play it down and avoid calling it what it is. If you place someone under duress to coerce them into sexual acts - whether through physical force, intimidation, blackmail, or anything else of that nature - then it's rape. Plain and simple.
The closest thing to "partial consent" is the porn concept of "dubcon," and even that doesn't really apply in your scenario. "Dubcon" suggests that the consent is dubious - it's more ambiguous whether they were really consenting or not. There's nothing ambiguous about someone who doesn't want to have sex agreeing to have sex under the threat of punishment (in your example, being fired) if they refuse. Now, in the case of the story itself...I think there were enough cues here suggesting that Sunset was far more willing than the initial "You can give me what I want or say goodbye to school" conversation let on. I'd definitely say that this falls into dubcon more than noncon due to Sunset's thoughts and feelings throughout the story. But without those thoughts and feelings suggesting a willingness that pushed it out of noncon territory, then Celestia threatening punishment (expulsion) if Sunset wouldn't do her sexual favors would be straight up noncon.
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If one was to stop reading at where she starts giving her the "If you want to stay in this school..." talk or if it had kept up with that tone (and only that tone), then I could see an argument that this was blatant noncon. That said, I feel like there were enough little clues here and there hinting at Sunset wanting it and being really into it to safely put it in dubcon territory instead. Not the physical arousal - that can happen even during flat out rape - but in a lot of her responses to Celestia's advances. It might toe the line between non and dub at times, especially near the beginning, but for the most part I think it stayed well within that more ambiguous area.
Good work on the story. I look forward to reading more of it.
Knowing Luna she's ignoring all of this and playing with her pet possum Tiberius.
I allready know a reason for apple jack i mean she did sneak cider into the school
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I honestly find it rather bizarre that you think I believe you care. I don't generally assume that someone will or won't care when I comment, just as I don't expect others to assume that I will or won't care when they comment. I see someone make a false or uninformed statement, I'll address why that statement is inaccurate. If they're interested in discussing it, we can have a discussion. If they aren't, then we'll just go about our business. Beyond that, whether or not the person I'm addressing cares doesn't make any difference to me.
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Awesome.
I was looking forward to this chapter and you did not disappoint. Did not disappoint at all. Every chapter's end makes me look forward to the next girl! I wonder who is going to get the kinkiest scene? Rarity? Rainbow Dash?
Luna?!
7487722 Those are all good guesses. :3 And there are definitely scenes with all three coming up!
So, I'm going to be blunt and say that this is crazy hot. I'm pretty sure that my greatest kink is a futa making her ladyfriend(s) preggers, so the very premise of the story alone is drool-worthy. Celestia being a futa makes me wonder about something, though; what of her sister? Surely Celestia couldn't be the only futa in her family? It could also turn into something of a competition between Celestia and Luna to see who can knock up the most students, which has a lot of potential for fun. Alternately, Luna could be the "quality over quantity" sort, taking only one girl and putting them on
hera pedestal, something about which the two of them debate.Just so you know, I'm not trying to write this story for you; I'm really quite sure that you've already got most of it planned out, and to mess with that too much would wreck it. Considering how much I like the work so far, that's pretty much the last thing I want.
7487804 Trust me, Luna is in this story.
She has her time to shine, with a student of her own.
7487863 Shh! Hush, you, with all your little spoilers.
7487788 I stand by my statement: I love you.
I'm afriad to ask but she said a breeder if i remember what the heck does that mean she breeding childrent o sell, or she meant getting a large family?
This story is great, but please, please, please get an editor and proofreader. The repetitions and simple errors kill the mood faster than unsexy thoughts. And I don't want that for a story idea as good as this.
Keep up the great work. Holy shit the slutty fluttershy is such a great thing.
I looovvveee this. The way of how principal celestia gives no fucks about impregnating women younger then her. it's so hawt.
I wonder...if she'll even fuck the 'younger' women?
I actually have this fav'd on HF as well. Love it and can't wait for a new chapter on HF or here if you finish uploading the other chapters from HF soon. Love your other works as well. Keep up the awesome writing.
4while I like the ideas of this story I hope Luna gets a harem of her own containing Trixy, Twilight and the other villains of the school like the sirens and queen chrysalis.
That chapter ending... written like somebody who's never tried to get road head in a stick shift car.
It presents certain geometrical problems.
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If you aren't going to be open to some kind of debate then don't make comments like you did. Otherwise you are just a SJW piece of shit that is being annoying just to be annoying.
7486164 However, what you're not considering is that school is meant to be for everyone. What about the people with pet allergies? The reason why pets aren't allowed in school is for that very reason. Because by bringing a pet to school would cause a person with the allergy to become sick and suffer and that isn't fair to them. Plus there is the introduction of animals to an actively changing and strange environment. A pet that normally is well behaved can become agressive and defensive in a strange environment and when stressed. This is yet another factor as to why pets aren't allowed on the premises of a public school. And Fluttershy, being the animal enthusiast that she is, is obviously a repeat offender for the 'no pets at school' rule.
I agree that you make a valid point with regards to the blackmail and sex. Perhaps if this was a porn shoot, the author's disclaimer that all character's are 18 or over might be more believable, but in an actual school setting, that would significantly narrow the students of consenting age and even further as not all of the students of consenting age would be her 'best students.'
So, this is more meant to provide possible motivations regarding Celestia's issue/problem(s) with Fluttershy and not a dismissal of the legal implications of a public government official engaging in coitus with one of her wards, even if they were of legal age.
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"Fluttershy, dear, could you move for a second? I'm trying to get into fourth."
"Oh, um, okay, Principal Celestia."
*shifts*
"There we are. You may continue."