Hot as fuck.

Just a question, are these futas Anthro?

holy shit

ok listen good and listen well I want you to turn this into a larger story with many chapters build this world
please I will sell you my first born just continue this story please

7443515 Yes, they're anthro! I forgot to mark that tag, but I've added that now.

7443608 Thanks! I'm definitely considering it...

7443608 Saw this story on my feed

My initial reaction since it has the human tag was: "Oh boy. What's most likely is a man is going to take a giant horse dick up the ass."

Read comments instead of reading story.

You just want to fap to more futanari don't you?

This...was actually not that bad.

Also:

she'd offered to let you ride on her cock - an offer that was earnest, and certainly achievable

This needs to happen.

Strangely heartwarming. Good work!

7443685
Well, you did say you were concerned about overdoing it on world building. It would be a shame to let that go to waste!

Besides, I want to know how our hero will deal with the whiplash of going from totally unwilling to explore, to totally cockhungry, to being in a committed relationship.

7443751
That too.

to be honest couldn't get into the story at all because of the ( don't know if it has a name for it ) stupidly over size body proportions thing. the world building seemed good but the body proportions thing just thrown it all out the window for me.

7444262 I guess the word would be "hyper." And yeah, it's not for everyone. I'm glad you liked parts of it, though!

7444575 Oh.,, didn't know that's what "hyper-sized sex" meant This was the first story I came across doing the hyper-sized and never knew it was a thing.

I feel like I just read something Bendy wrote.

7443903 Thanks! "Heartwarming," even preceded by "strangely," is a pleasantly surprising compliment to get on a story like this.

7445366 No, if bendy wrote it, there would be at least 90 lines about how the main character is "2 strait 4 dis"

I would have been arrested for murder.

"Would that that were true"

Umm.....what?

her dick lies flaccidly over her left thigh.

Would it not be retracted into her sheath if she's not aroused?

you and her it it off

I think you meant to say, hit it off.

7447017
#1: This is kind of an archaic way of saying "if only that were true."

#2: Yeah, you have a point. I'm not the biggest fan of sheaths, though.

#3: Now this one I can't argue with. That right there is a typo.

your independent steak

I have questions about how independent steak is.

7448812 A little independence in the center is what you want; if you cook all the independence out of it, it's just going to be dry and flavorless.

XD you should totally make an anthology in this universe. Starting after the main character joins in Lyra and bonbons herd and he opens up a slight bit more to the mares of futaquestria. This was an awesome story and can't wait to read more of your work.

P.s. I loved the universe you built and would love to know more about the specifics of its culture

7449426

Hear hear. This fic was pretty much perfect so far as I am concerned.

I legit have no criticisms here. And yeah, a world full of gorgeous futamares who are insatiably horny for humans.... I'm pretty sure that's actually the English translation for the definition of the Greek word 'Utopia.'

7449426 Thanks! It's great to see such a positive response to this story... I had fun writing it, and people seem to like the setting, so it would be a shame not to revisit it!

7452536 M.O.R.E. please

No. You did not go heavy on the world building. You went perfectly on the world building. I'd love to see more of this universe from you.

7496130 Agreed. MOAR PLZ.

Wouldn't mind a ongoing story featuring a human with Vinyl and Octavia

Human pops in, has problems adjusting, Vinyl and Octavia provide a place for him, lots of slice of life happens, spitroasting male human time.

I'm not sure how to feel about this...

I loved it, I wish I could find more stories about it

7529852 Thanks! I'm working on a follow-up chapter now, I should have it finished pretty soon.

I...okay.

In all seriousness, I really like the balance you've struck between the absurd and actually taking the exposition and world building seriously. It's not often I see stories that have outlandish premises that are actually written in a decent manner.

I'm interested to see where this goes.

Glad that you got the premise of the story out as quickly as possible, yet keeping the exposition sounding natural. I also liked the way you introduced the nudity aspect without outright saying it for quite a while, but still leaving enough hints to give the impression.

being the "third" in a relationship is a formal acknowledgment of closeness with the couple

That's a thing that never fails to bug me. In a world like this, with such a disparity between males and females, doesn't it stand to reason that polygamy would be the norm? Why not follow the trend of most fanfics and just call it a herd?

and masculine, hit your square in the nose

hit YOU square
The flashback thing was a neat bit of world building.

"That spell works by essentially making the subject only capable of thinking about their desire for the enchanted object. I was able to selectively invert several parts of the spell, so the new version should make Lyra, our subject, incapable of thinking about sex.

For some reason, I always get a kick out of magical techno-babble.
The sexual comedy is also well executed. The whole tone of the story is nice and relaxed, rightly ignoring all potential downer implications in favor of a "just don't think about it" fun read.

I came here for the futa pony, I gots a lot of the futa pony *Much applause*

I wonder if they have spells to let them impregnate males in the ass.

I wonder if any of them like peeing in butts and want to pee in his butt. I wonder if he will ever let them.

Is this dead?

Damn.. Lyras balls must have been positively throbbing with veins there

Fantastic clash of cultures, mate. World building is top notch. The only thing this story didn't do is hitting the right kinks, but it doesn't stop me from appreciating good writing when I see it. I came for clop and found an interesting setting to ponder on and explore. Good read.