Utter perfection. It's a little creepy just how perfectly every last detail of this story plays to my interests. Ultra well-endowed, horsecock-equipped futa mares, futa on male, cumflation, futas dominating males, said males coming to enjoy and even embrace their submissive status to the futa, ponies dominating humans... And the descriptions of Futaquestrian society are actually really fun and fascinating, giving the story a lot more depth. It makes every encounter feel kinda, I dunno.... right, I guess. Like such is the way things should be, the way things are meant to be.
7549257 That's great to hear! I know the feeling of finding something (erotic or otherwise) that perfectly appeals to my tastes, and I'm really happy that I can provide that for other people.
And thanks for letting me know! It really makes my day to hear from people who like my writing... even though I'm really bad at letting other people know I'm a fan of their work.
7550398 That's a fair question. Let me make up an answer...
The protagonist's perspective is skewed towards futa-on-male stuff, because that's what the women of Futaquestria keep propositioning him with. Even though there hasn't been any focus on it yet, there's plenty of futa/male and futa/futa vaginal sex happening in the world. If the protagonist is going to be doing some penetrating in future chapters, maybe I can include it. And maybe retcon in some hyper-style pussy arousal for the futa, which has been notably absent in the first two chapters.
This is just me but some of the human's choice of words seemed a bit to crude. but like i said that is just me and i still very much enjoyed the chapter.
7550657 I just thought they were dickgirls instead of actually futa tbh. I feel like you may have mentioned it at some point though...being honest, if you did, I likely just ignored that detail. :x I have my biases >~>
Oh, also, some corrections: It's cushion. You wrote cusion. and in this sentence " You catch a good faceful of her musk, and you feel you cock stiffening." instead of your cock.
7551386 Thanks! As for the futa vs. dickgirl thing, I hadn't mentioned it before, and I honestly hadn't given it that much thought before someone asked about the logistics of reproduction. There's not going to be any kids in this story, but new ponies have to come from somewhere...
There's an appeal in making an internally consistent world, but I guess that doesn't have to be my first priority. So nothing's canon yet.
7551438 I mean, you can go with the G1 "They magically come out of nowhere" answer for where babies come from. If you don't feel like actually tackling the situation, you can just ignore it and let reader come up with whatever they want. xD
It's also not exactly the first concern the majority of readers will likely have.
I don't comment often, but this is so perfectly in line with my preferences it would be wrong not to say something. Its pretty rare to find a story that gets the tone, content and writing so right. Definitely can't wait for more, keep it up.
All that's needed is for our human to take the genderbender plunge to surprise bonbon... then all my fetishes would be covered...... I think I need professional help...
On a rational level, you know that sexual exclusivity is a foreign concept in Futaquestria; it would be almost unthinkable for Lyra to feel betrayed if you got your ass plowed by someone else
Then what's even the point of marriage. On earth, marriage has a function of providing a stable environment for children where man and wife are obligated to each other and the family. Here... what's even the point? Is it like declaring best friends over regular friends? Also, all this emphasis on dickmares makes me wonder where the stallions are. Even as a minority, they should still be present and reacting to stuff, especially with universal bisexuality.
"I'd like to fuck you," she says.
Absolutely hilarious, especially coming from Maud's monotone. Secret sex beast Maud is a trope I really enjoy. Also, given the open culture of this world, if Maud wants to flirt, doesn't it make sense to do something special, like offering her ass or pussy to HIS cock?
Utter perfection. It's a little creepy just how perfectly every last detail of this story plays to my interests. Ultra well-endowed, horsecock-equipped futa mares, futa on male, cumflation, futas dominating males, said males coming to enjoy and even embrace their submissive status to the futa, ponies dominating humans... And the descriptions of Futaquestrian society are actually really fun and fascinating, giving the story a lot more depth. It makes every encounter feel kinda, I dunno.... right, I guess. Like such is the way things should be, the way things are meant to be.
Thanks again for writing more!
7549257 That's great to hear! I know the feeling of finding something (erotic or otherwise) that perfectly appeals to my tastes, and I'm really happy that I can provide that for other people.
And thanks for letting me know! It really makes my day to hear from people who like my writing... even though I'm really bad at letting other people know I'm a fan of their work.
Ooh, another chapter of this! Time to read! :3
It's not bad so far, but does he ever get a turn on giving or gets to give while receiving?
7549626 That's a great compliment too! But there's nothing to be ashamed of. Unless the shame makes it hotter, in which case - don't change a thing.
7549644 Thanks for keeping up with my work! I love your coloring work, and it's great to know you like my stuff too.
7549680 That's a good point... I think he's going to keep receiving, but maybe I'll give him a chance to do some penetrating of his own.
Very awesome addition to your story, I enjoyed reading this chapter. It's good to see this story is being continued.
How do they have kids in this version of equestria if it always seems futa on males?
7550398 That's a fair question. Let me make up an answer...
The protagonist's perspective is skewed towards futa-on-male stuff, because that's what the women of Futaquestria keep propositioning him with. Even though there hasn't been any focus on it yet, there's plenty of futa/male and futa/futa vaginal sex happening in the world. If the protagonist is going to be doing some penetrating in future chapters, maybe I can include it. And maybe retcon in some hyper-style pussy arousal for the futa, which has been notably absent in the first two chapters.
This is just me but some of the human's choice of words seemed a bit to crude. but like i said that is just me and i still very much enjoyed the chapter.
7550657 I just thought they were dickgirls instead of actually futa tbh. I feel like you may have mentioned it at some point though...being honest, if you did, I likely just ignored that detail. :x I have my biases >~>
Oh, also, some corrections: It's cushion. You wrote cusion.
and in this sentence " You catch a good faceful of her musk, and you feel you cock stiffening." instead of your cock.
I liked it a lot though :D
7551386 Thanks! As for the futa vs. dickgirl thing, I hadn't mentioned it before, and I honestly hadn't given it that much thought before someone asked about the logistics of reproduction. There's not going to be any kids in this story, but new ponies have to come from somewhere...
There's an appeal in making an internally consistent world, but I guess that doesn't have to be my first priority. So nothing's canon yet.
"You invented a form of meditation, huh?" says Maud. You can hear the grin in her voice. "Do you call it 'Maud-itation?'"
I think thats suppose to be Lyra...
Other then that I love the story thus far... keep it up!
7550657 Yay that would be awesome! Thank you for answering!
7551438 I mean, you can go with the G1 "They magically come out of nowhere" answer for where babies come from. If you don't feel like actually tackling the situation, you can just ignore it and let reader come up with whatever they want. xD
It's also not exactly the first concern the majority of readers will likely have.
Hey, awesome! Glad to see you're keeping this going!
Damn, wish I could write as well as this
I don't comment often, but this is so perfectly in line with my preferences it would be wrong not to say something.
Its pretty rare to find a story that gets the tone, content and writing so right.
Definitely can't wait for more, keep it up.
All that's needed is for our human to take the genderbender plunge to surprise bonbon... then all my fetishes would be covered...... I think I need professional help...
MOAR!!
7576861 More!!! Dont make me start doing fluttershy smilies.....
sheesh Maud, control your excitement, this isn't a porn movie
This version of Maud is the perfect version of her. I can't get over how hot it was reading this chapter. o-o
Good read. Hope to read more of it.
Personality wise, this is my favorite portrayal of Maud to date.
Then what's even the point of marriage. On earth, marriage has a function of providing a stable environment for children where man and wife are obligated to each other and the family. Here... what's even the point? Is it like declaring best friends over regular friends?
Also, all this emphasis on dickmares makes me wonder where the stallions are. Even as a minority, they should still be present and reacting to stuff, especially with universal bisexuality.
Absolutely hilarious, especially coming from Maud's monotone. Secret sex beast Maud is a trope I really enjoy.
Also, given the open culture of this world, if Maud wants to flirt, doesn't it make sense to do something special, like offering her ass or pussy to HIS cock?
Cut one "your"
places HER hand
I hope 1 Maud joins there or she gets her own boy because the end of this chapter i was so sad for her .
I can't decide if I want to be angry at that or find it immensely funny
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I'm starting to wonder how muscular princess twilight is now. No doubt she would.show off for him.
I've gotta keep it real here, I would 100% have left Ponyville with Maud