This is one of my favorite types of feedback! I'd love to hear what makes your reaction to the story so complex. In any case, I hope you keep on enjoying it.
You strike this unique balance between extremely corny and damn hot. Fleur's dirty talk leading up to their coupling in the spa being a testament to that. Fleur also had this intriguing balance of ego and submissiveness that was nice to read.
Yeah, it's kind of just how my mind works. It's fine when someone writes porn for porn's sake (actually, it's more than fine). But if I'm writing it, I'm going to write it my way. And I'm really glad there are people who appreciate it!
I'm really happy with it too. The basic idea is, since Maud can't (or won't) change her expression or tone of voice, she doesn't have access to a lot of the usual social cues. So she compensates by being very clear and upfront about what she wants. But in a lot of ways she's a normal person - she has a sense of humor, she gets happy and sad - she just doesn't express it in the usual way.
although your cock doesn't compare to those of Futaquestria's mares
Or stallions? Again, I'd really like there to be more perspective on the stallions and how they get by in this world. Maybe our human could have some one on one time with Big Mac or Spike? Also, yeah. Being a paid escort does seem a logical choice after his sexual awakening, especially if he can charge whatever he wants. Nice to see a mare showing attention to something other than his butt, even if it was just a little. Thus far, mares seem pretty selfish in how they focus only on their pleasure and not that of the stallions.
Well, if I'm being perfectly honest, the purpose marriage serves is to provide an inciting incident that moves the protagonist from his initial state of seclusion towards the goal of integrating himself with Futaquestrian society. Making him part of an impending marriage means that his and Lyra's sexual problems need to get solved. There were other ways to create that inciting incident, I suppose, but this was how the story formed in my head.
As for an in-fiction explanation... I suppose the best explanation is that marriage formed around the goal of raising children. But that is unlikely to be explored in this story.
I'm glad you liked sex beast Maud. She was a lot of fun to write.
As far as the absence of stallions... This is a situation where the fetish and the worldbuilding fight it out and the fetish wins. For me, the presence of other men in this fetish scenario isn't unbearable, but I tend to think of it as a distraction.
The fetish that drove the creation of this fic wasn't just "futa on male," but also "protagonist is made uncomfortable by the overwhelming sexual interest of intimidating women" And if there's other guys around, then he's not getting ALL of the interest, which dilutes the scenario.
But... as the protagonist adjusts, the story is less and less about him being made uncomfortable. So maybe now there's room for some other men to have speaking roles.
Anyway, thanks for giving me a lot to think about, and I'm glad you enjoyed the story (and Goddess of Pleasure). I'm midway through Horse People Go Naked and I'm really enjoying it.
7781905 Except you've already said this is a world of universal bisexuality, so the guys would be just as horny for him as the gals. Glad you're liking it.
Not necessarily. His sex appeal is an unexplained phenomenon; maybe it applies solely to women.
I'm not opposed to guy-on-guy flirting or sex - I might write some eventually - but this story was intended as a venue for futa-on-male scenes, and that's what I'm trying to deliver on.
Then again, I suppose I'm already inserting other stuff as the whim strikes me - like hyper and cumflation and body part expansion - so I shouldn't limit myself too much. I guess I'm accustomed to environments where people insist that their porn be very strictly geared towards their specific fetishes, which isn't so much the case here.
8182586 Yes! I've taken a break from my ongoing stories because I fell really far behind on my commissions and I wanted to fulfill those obligations. I'm getting better at getting through commissions now, so I plan on returning to this story before too long.
I'm absolutely LOVING this!
Now you just killed Lyra with pleasure with that kiss...
Please never stop.
This story continues to be the most confusing thing ever for my dick, but it's hilariously well done.
Moar!
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Thanks for letting me know you liked it! Feedback like this really helps me to stay motivated.
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Oh, she'll be fine. It might take her a little longer than usual to calm down, though...
7773474 Its awesome, I really enjoy this, even though the theme is not really what I normally go for... Keep it up I want to read more!
why aren't we allowed to leave extra thumbs up each time a new chapter is released?
Nice Chapter. I glad that you keep workin on it. I wounder with whom his next date/spa time will be.
Lol still a fun and interesting read.
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This is one of my favorite types of feedback! I'd love to hear what makes your reaction to the story so complex. In any case, I hope you keep on enjoying it.
You strike this unique balance between extremely corny and damn hot. Fleur's dirty talk leading up to their coupling in the spa being a testament to that. Fleur also had this intriguing balance of ego and submissiveness that was nice to read.
Good work.
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Yeah, it's kind of just how my mind works. It's fine when someone writes porn for porn's sake (actually, it's more than fine). But if I'm writing it, I'm going to write it my way. And I'm really glad there are people who appreciate it!
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I'm really happy with it too. The basic idea is, since Maud can't (or won't) change her expression or tone of voice, she doesn't have access to a lot of the usual social cues. So she compensates by being very clear and upfront about what she wants. But in a lot of ways she's a normal person - she has a sense of humor, she gets happy and sad - she just doesn't express it in the usual way.
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Fleur was kind of a challenge to write, but that sort of "haughty, demanding submissive" was exactly what I was going for.
This last chapter was delicious. More?
Or stallions? Again, I'd really like there to be more perspective on the stallions and how they get by in this world. Maybe our human could have some one on one time with Big Mac or Spike?
Also, yeah. Being a paid escort does seem a logical choice after his sexual awakening, especially if he can charge whatever he wants.
Nice to see a mare showing attention to something other than his butt, even if it was just a little. Thus far, mares seem pretty selfish in how they focus only on their pleasure and not that of the stallions.
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Well, if I'm being perfectly honest, the purpose marriage serves is to provide an inciting incident that moves the protagonist from his initial state of seclusion towards the goal of integrating himself with Futaquestrian society. Making him part of an impending marriage means that his and Lyra's sexual problems need to get solved. There were other ways to create that inciting incident, I suppose, but this was how the story formed in my head.
As for an in-fiction explanation... I suppose the best explanation is that marriage formed around the goal of raising children. But that is unlikely to be explored in this story.
I'm glad you liked sex beast Maud. She was a lot of fun to write.
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As far as the absence of stallions... This is a situation where the fetish and the worldbuilding fight it out and the fetish wins. For me, the presence of other men in this fetish scenario isn't unbearable, but I tend to think of it as a distraction.
The fetish that drove the creation of this fic wasn't just "futa on male," but also "protagonist is made uncomfortable by the overwhelming sexual interest of intimidating women" And if there's other guys around, then he's not getting ALL of the interest, which dilutes the scenario.
But... as the protagonist adjusts, the story is less and less about him being made uncomfortable. So maybe now there's room for some other men to have speaking roles.
Anyway, thanks for giving me a lot to think about, and I'm glad you enjoyed the story (and Goddess of Pleasure). I'm midway through Horse People Go Naked and I'm really enjoying it.
7781905 Except you've already said this is a world of universal bisexuality, so the guys would be just as horny for him as the gals.
Glad you're liking it.
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Not necessarily. His sex appeal is an unexplained phenomenon; maybe it applies solely to women.
I'm not opposed to guy-on-guy flirting or sex - I might write some eventually - but this story was intended as a venue for futa-on-male scenes, and that's what I'm trying to deliver on.
Then again, I suppose I'm already inserting other stuff as the whim strikes me - like hyper and cumflation and body part expansion - so I shouldn't limit myself too much. I guess I'm accustomed to environments where people insist that their porn be very strictly geared towards their specific fetishes, which isn't so much the case here.
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I hear ya, friend. I hear ya.
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Honestly who would write a story about larger anthro mares having sex with humans.
I hope this story keeps going. Definitely my favorite right now!
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I know right. Its stupid
So how's it coming?
7944266 I've been working on commissions for a while, but I'm making better progress lately. I swear, I'll get back to these stories when I can!
This story...
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Can't wait for more!
Will there be more?
8182586 Yes! I've taken a break from my ongoing stories because I fell really far behind on my commissions and I wanted to fulfill those obligations. I'm getting better at getting through commissions now, so I plan on returning to this story before too long.
8191456 Yay! This story hits like, 95% of my Fetishes.
Same here, only thing missing is some Vore
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Hell, I'm tempted to commission more of this story in particular!
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I'd be up for that.
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My financial situation took a massive downturn within the last few hours, so it may take a bit longer to finance such amazing work.
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Yikes! Sorry to hear that, best of luck with that situation.