Welcome! I enjoy writing fictions based upon the the human side of MLP, that both contain normal and erotic content. I hope you enjoy!
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Imagine my delight when I come home from work to see a new story from you. Yay!
Oh, hell.
OH, HELL!
Ohhh, the imagery.
Overall, this was a sweet incestuous bonding experience between a loving brother and sister. It was a pleasant, sexy read and made me feel a lot better after the rough few days I've had (hence my lack of energy in this comment. I'm sorry ).
If I had to gripe, however, I'd point out a few tiny grammar mistakes. Otherwise, great job
7418269 Lol. I knew someone would comment on the cinch's balls part, I snorted. I'm glad you enjoyed the read as usual my dear, thank you for the feedback also. Though i'm sorry you've been having a rough few days. Send me a mail, let me know what's been going on. *hugs*
My only issue with this story are a few sentances that start like this one "Shining would say, as he inspected his darling sisters" that veey first part makes it soukd that its not actually happening. Beyond a few of these it was pretty good.
7440141 Thanks for your feedback, I appreciate it. I'm still trying to find my happy medium. ;-;