• Member Since 13th Dec, 2011
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Fabulosity


Welcome! I enjoy writing fictions based upon the the human side of MLP, that both contain normal and erotic content. I hope you enjoy!

Comments ( 4 )

Imagine my delight when I come home from work to see a new story from you. Yay! :yay:

My... brother from this world and... from Crystal Prep Academy, aha!

Oh, hell.

and pushed his little sister up against the side of that stall that they were both within.

OH, HELL! :pinkiegasp:

By Cinchs' balls

:rainbowlaugh: Ohhh, the imagery.

Overall, this was a sweet incestuous bonding experience between a loving brother and sister. It was a pleasant, sexy read and made me feel a lot better after the rough few days I've had (hence my lack of energy in this comment. I'm sorry :fluttercry:).

If I had to gripe, however, I'd point out a few tiny grammar mistakes. Otherwise, great job :twilightsmile:

7418269 Lol. I knew someone would comment on the cinch's balls part, I snorted. I'm glad you enjoyed the read as usual my dear, thank you for the feedback also. Though i'm sorry you've been having a rough few days. Send me a mail, let me know what's been going on. *hugs* :heart:

My only issue with this story are a few sentances that start like this one "Shining would say, as he inspected his darling sisters" that veey first part makes it soukd that its not actually happening. Beyond a few of these it was pretty good.

7440141 Thanks for your feedback, I appreciate it. I'm still trying to find my happy medium. ;-;

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