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Rip in pieces Cheerilee

If this is based on Left 4 dead, does that mean we'll get Witches, and Tanks, and all that other good/gross stuff?

I didn't see any spelling errors or any kind of mistake.

The only thing that bothers me, is that Twilight doesn't even contact Celestia or another one of her friends after she is attacked or at least instructed Spike to do so. I understand she is worry for Sunset, but I expect her to be more methodical in her approach. With the others warn they could have examine the infected or prepared something for Twilight when she goes on the other side since she is vulnerable as a human.

Anyway nice start. Waiting for your next chapter.

Oh and R.I.P. Cheerilee

sounds like a very interesting plot will add this to my favorites then read it when I get home from work.

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Perhaps, my friend. You never know.

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Yeah. That would make much more sense. Now I regret not putting something like that in. But thank you for showing support in this first chapter.

No sure I will track and hope for the best.

Phoenix, huh? Gee, I wonder who that could be? But things seem interesting, so I'll continue.

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Yeah. I suppose she could've gotten a better nickname. Considering I use "Anon" for my stories, I'm not really that great when it comes to creating names for characters.

Thank you for the fave though. And for introducing me to Highschool of the Dead with that scene, even though the guy in it can't seem to hit the broadside of a barn.

Hmmm......

Awesome.

I literally just finished playing all the campaigns of Left 4 dead and Left 4 dead 2 today and this just made those memories better.

Hmm, similar starting point as Fallout : Equestria girls hope it doesn't mainly revolve around the the OC.

I think twilight would be more in disbelief about the zombies. It seems like zombies have happen before by the way she talks about it. But besides that, this story is very interesting and I can't wait for the next one

...I'm curious. Favoriting! Keep up the good work

It's funny I had an idea like this a while back... glad to see I wasn't the only one!
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Experienced in the game for 7 years, can't wait to see how this story goes!

Never played the games. I need to now. Great start.

Harmony damn it Spike Should have immediately sent word to Celestia. A legion of heavily armed and armored guards ponies is just what they need on the other side, even if it took them a bit to get used to bipedalism.

Cliffhangar is BLOWN!

So did Cheerliee turn into the witch

you have piqued my interest. on to chapter 2

Twilight dear, would you please pick up some kind of weapon to defend yourself before you go somewhere dangerous. The first chapter is full of retardation.

Ok, let’s get this out of the way. How many of y’all surviving this?

Harsh start... I wonder if infected ate gone for good or they can be saved...