When Fluttershy awoke the next morning, she could feel a source of warmth right up against her. Once she managed to focus and open her eyes, she was overjoyed to see none other than Rainbow Dash still in bed with her. The cyan mare was already awake, having been looking out the window, but looked over at her once she was awake. A grin crossed her face as she rolled onto her side to face Fluttershy.
“Good morning, sunshine!”
Fluttershy giggled, beaming at her, “Good morning, Rainbow....did you sleep well?”
“You bet I did! Now that I know last night wasn't a dream, it was great! How about you? Wait, don't tell me, you slept awesomely!”
Laughing, the creamy yellow pony snuggled into her love, filled with warmth and utmost happiness. “Of course. I...slept well knowing you were here with me.”
There really was something wonderful and heartwarming when you woke up next to somepony you loved, this was no exception. Even when it occurred a few months ago, it was still a wonderful feeling. It just dismayed Fluttershy to know that they wouldn't do this very much, considering they still lived in different homes. A part of her just wanted to spring out “Move in with me!” right then and there, just to be closer to Rainbow Dash. But she didn't want to intimidate her in any way. In time. In time they would work this out to their liking.
Until then, maybe they would simply settle to having some sleepovers.
Fluttershy cooed sweetly when she felt Rainbow snuggling her close and running a hoof through her mane. Many times, this was a moment she only ever dreamed of. An impossible dream she thought never to come true. But now, here they were, together and cuddling. With all the love in the world. She felt warm, safe, and very loved right now, it was a moment she never wanted to end.
A kiss was placed on her forehead, making her giggle, but then she was jolted when Rainbow Dash was slowly getting out of bed.
“W-Where are you going?” She asked, her voice a bit more panicked then she intended.
“Just going out to stretch my wings a bit!” Rainbow told her, flapping them a few times for good measure.
A pout formed at her lips.
“Hey, I'm not leaving you,” Rainbow assured, trotting back closer to her. She kissed her forehead again, smiling. “Just going out to get some air, stretch my wings a bit, that's all. I'll be right back.”
Encouraged, yet still disheartened, Fluttershy exhaled as she nodded. The window was opened and the cyan Pegasus was already outside in a flash. Did she really not enjoy quiet snuggling? Was she being too clingy? Was she afraid of what she had almost tried to do last night? Was she “snuggled out” from last night?
Fluttershy whimpered, curling up on her bed again. 'I'm so selfish, aren't I? We're together now, and I complain about THIS? What is wrong with me? Sure, she was gone for some time, but that's no excuse. I'm sure she wants to cuddle...just not every ten seconds. I can't help it...being close to her is just wonderful. But am I too clingy? Will I be too clingy? What can I do?'
Closing her eyes, the timid pony lay there for some time, none too sure how long. But eventually, she heard Rainbow Dash enter the room through the window again. For a moment she tensed, but relaxed as she waited for the said mare to speak up or go downstairs.
However, Fluttershy's eyes shot open when Rainbow got back into bed behind her, placing a foreleg around her body while she nuzzled the back of her neck and her mane. A soft, dreamy sigh escaped her as well, which made Fluttershy's troubles melt away.
“You didn't think I missed your 'Come back to bed' hint, did you?” Rainbow whispered in her ear. She nibbled it lightly, pulling her closer.
“...I'm sorry,” Fluttershy whispered, smiling none the less.
“No you're not,” Rainbow chuckled, still nibbling her ear. “I know you want me in bed with you, snuggling, Fluttershy. Don't apologize for that.”
“I just don't want you to think I'm clinging...or trying to cuddle with you when you don't want to.”
“We've been away from each other for over a month, you've spent who-knows-how-long pining for me, we're finally together and you're worrying about clinging? Please, Fluttershy, I think this counts more as making up for lost time. Besides, I know I have a lot of making up to do.”
“Oh, Rainbow my dear...you don't have to make up for anything. I could never hold waiting against you. After all, I was even trying to move on.”
Fluttershy felt Rainbow's grip on her tighten, and her muzzle gently nuzzling her neck again. She giggled, deciding to just bask in the feeling of her embrace and sweet gestures.
“I know I don't have to, but I want to, Fluttershy! After all this time, I just want you to feel loved,” Rainbow said softly. “Just as you made me feel loved.”
Rolling over to face her, Fluttershy beamed and kissed her gently, snuggling more into her beloved. “You have, Rainbow...you really have.”
A bright smile overcame Rainbow's face. “I love you, Fluttershy.”
“I love you too, Dashie...welcome home again,” Fluttershy whispered against her lips.
It was another hour before the two lovestruck Pegasi finally came downstairs to have breakfast together. Fluttershy's animal friends all of course clamoured for some food, not least of which being Angel. In doing so, the said bunny cast warning glances toward Rainbow Dash, as if to tell her certain things. Especially to take care of Fluttershy and to NOT hurt her.
Rainbow Dash retorted by rolling her eyes but stating that she would rather clip off her wings and never fly again before ever hurting Fluttershy. Satisfied, the bunny went back to happily eating his carrot.
They ate breakfast together, making small talk, but just simply enjoying each other's presences in the morning. Rainbow Dash could see yet again just how peaceful and sweet mornings with Fluttershy were, even to the point that she wished they could wake up and have breakfast together every morning! But that was silly, they couldn't possibly have been ready for that step just yet. They'd only been together for over a month, most of which had been spent away from each other. It wasn't even official until her return the day before, so that added the rushing factor.
However, the sentiment remained. She could get used to this, should they have chosen to have more sleepovers together. That alone was appealing, as it would certainly give them something of a closer idea of what it would be like to live together. It also wasn't to say the idea in principle wasn't appealing, either.
After breakfast, while Fluttershy went to go take a bath, this was when Rainbow took a chance to take care of a long-awaited task.
“Hey Twi, you mind getting Spike to mail this to the Princess?”
“Rainbow Dash!” Twilight grinned, giving her friend a hug, then let her go. “You're back! Wow! When did you get back?”
“...Yesterday,” the cyan Pegasus admitted sheepishly as she entered the library.
“Yesterday?” Twilight repeated, closing the door behind her. “But...why didn't you tell anypony?”
Rainbow hesitated, but placed her letter on the floor for a moment before she sat down, rubbing the back of her head with her hoof. “I wanted to spend time with Fluttershy. ...Alone. Without interruption. I was going to tell you guys! I just wanted to be selfish and have Fluttershy all to myself, okay? Is that a problem?!”
Laughing, the Unicorn shook her head. “Of course not, Rainbow. I'm sorry if it sounded like that. If you wanted to spend time with Fluttershy so much, that's okay,” a thought occurred to her and Twilight smiled. “So, you and Fluttershy are together, then?”
Blushing a bit, Rainbow nodded before grinning. “You bet! I know more than ever that I love Fluttershy and I want to be with her! I love her, Twilight! I love her!”
Twilight laughed, grinning. “A few months ago, you freaked out about the idea. Kind of interesting to see you so enthusiastic about it.”
“I know, but who cares! I know what I want and I'm taking it!” Rainbow declared, hovering in the air. “And I'm still the speed demon! I'm still the hopeful Wonderbolt! I'm still Rainbow Dash!”
“Well Rainbow, that's a good attitude to have. So, what have you learned?”
“It's all in here!” Rainbow held up the scroll. “But you know what? I learned a lot about love. Just because somepony might seem perfect for you because of how much they're just like you, that doesn't mean they are. Sometimes, the one you love was right in front of you all along. ....Wow, that's sappy,” she groaned.
Chuckling, Twilight took the letter in her magic and read it over briefly. “You got it down pretty well! I'll have Spike send it over right away.”
“Thanks, Twi,” Rainbow smiled a bit. “Hey, can you tell Pinkie I'm back? She can throw that party for later! I'm off!”
“Where are you going?” Twilight queried, and turned around to call Spike to come downstairs.
“Making up for lost time!” Rainbow said, before she flew out the door.
Dear Princess Celestia,
I've learned a pretty important lesson when it comes to love. Sometimes, you can meet somepony who is just like you, and can keep up with you. You think that it's too good to be true, that they're perfect for you. And on paper, they seem perfect for you.
But when you get down to it, you realize that it's more like dating yourself. Just because somepony might seem perfect for you, doesn't exactly mean that they truly are. Being with somepony like yourself is not only clashing, but it's boring! I learned that in my short-lived relationship with Blazing Comet.
Fluttershy is nothing like me in a lot of ways, anypony would think it's stupid for us to be together because we apparently have nothing in common. Well, I'm gonna prove to them that they're the ones who are stupid! Fluttershy is perfect for me, even though she's different from me in a lot of ways.
I'm just gonna say it. I love her so much. I can't think of anypony else I want to be with than her! She's perfect for me, by being imperfect for me. Sometimes, what seems perfect on paper and what doesn't can turn out to be what you didn't expect.
This was something of the same lesson I learned when I was trying to find a pet, wasn't it?
Your awesome and loyal subject
Rainbow Dash
Dear readers,
I know these chapters have been short. I do apologize, but it is the best I can do at this point. There isn't much else to do. However, the next chapter will have a brief interlude of the welcome back party and also Fluttershy and Rainbow's first date. Please be patient. I will have it out as soon as I can.
Then a brief epilogue will follow. Then this story will be finished.
It's over? Nooooooooo! Although there isn't much left you can do with the plot. The ending wrapped it up quite nicely, and it has a great feeling of closure. The beginning had some cute moments too that I enjoyed. And the letter to Princess Celestia was quite good as well. Not much else to say about this chapter other than that it was short and sweet. It's been a great fic and is easily one of my top 3 favorites of all time. Great job! I can't wait for your next fic and the epilogue! And some "Heated" updates will be cool to see as well.
And as always, FLUTTERDASH FTW
1028533 That's pretty much it! XD So it's not QUITE over yet...but it is close to that point. Thanks a lot!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! It can't be over! I pretty much agree with FlutterdashFTW. So much D'aaaaaaaaaaaaw moments in this chapter. You made my heart explode! I love the letter at the end. It was very sweet. Keep up the great work!
As always, remember to stay GREAT!
The end of an era approaches. Dare I say, the PoP era. But seriously, I dread the end just as much as I long for it. It's so beautifully written and relatable on so many levels. Easily on of my all time faves. Bravo again!
D'aaawwwww! It was great and sweet, as always! Love it!
That letter to Princess Celestia was wonderful!
This is one of my the most favorite stories!
It's sad, that it will be over soon. But we still have "Heated".
Keep up your amazing work!
Heated isn't it get it
Once again a lovely chapter. Short and sweet. Again, it's a shame it's all coming to a close, but it couldn't have lasted forever. But hey, at least we still have Heated to look forward to, as well as potentially that sequel you were talking about if you still feel like making it. I await seeing what their first date is going to be.
Fiveever
I can't believe it's almost over!
This fic was certainly one of my top favorites, and I really enjoyed it. I can't wait to see the end. I'm sure it will be great!
Thanks for writing, keep it up.
Your chapters are getting shorter.
But... you redeem that completly by how epic they still are. This is still one of my faveroute Flutterdash fics of all time.
' “You didn't think I missed your 'Come back to bed' hint, did you?” Rainbow whispered in her ear. She nibbled it lightly, pulling her closer.' This was great! my personal highlight of the chapter (well... that area is...) come back to bed hint... yes, Fluttershy wasn't exactly trying to hide that now was she. Next time Dashie should drag her out for a ride and they could stretch thier wings together
I look foward to the first date and an epic next chapter in heated.
FTW!
Finishes reading all of heated
sees not much activity there
checks your other stories
clicks this one
21 chapters, over 90,000 words in total
WELL THAT EXPLAINS WHERE THE ACTIVITY HAS BEEN
reading now....
well, this story is just one of my favourites so far. It is a wonderfully written story and it deserves a sequel. And believe it or not, I kinda wanted to see it end, but just because I wanted to see how it all wraps up, and that it willl be completed for everybody to enjoy.
1033521 Awwww....
Don't even worry, it gets far better! Trust me.
1033865 I see your points, and I am sorry... But in the end the prank didn't turn out TOO badly in a way...But that's just me, I see why you would think not.
XD I'll be making revisions once I can, though.
1033940 XD That DID become the theme of it, in a way.
1038093 XD Let me try to defend it.
Okay, so she just broke up with somepony, yes? Now, even though they know where they stand and they broke up calmly as possible (YES, they do happen, don't pretend they don't), but at the same time, don't you think it's taking things WAY too fast by suddenly jumping into the next relationship you're seeking? Part of it was indeed so that Rainbow Dash could take her time before moving on. She wants to be on her own, away from everything so she can really get her thoughts straight. And she's adventurous, so, it does fit somewhat.
So I won't try to convince you, I just want you to try to understand.
XP And I shall use whatever word I please! I'll try to tone it down, but I'm not stopping, so pbtttt!
"Chuckling, Twilight took the letter in her magic and read it over briefly." And I was so ready to believe that this could be perfect... Oh well.
I'm going to preface this comment by saying that i left comments on all the other chapters (from about 3 or so onward) about my thoughts at those times, this is a bit of a summary but not a very comprehensive one, so if you want to know what i thought about the chapters, look there. (they are all recent i read this in the past 3 days)
AAAAAAAAnyways, Having finally caught up with this 90k plus word fic, i feel like i could write you an essay of my thoughts on it. I, for one, am all for you just ending it right here! it would make for a sweet ending, it is nice and lovely, it doesn't need to be all extended. I mean: 90k plus words? Isn't that enough? xD Of course, this is coming from the reader who figures it should have ended a couple of times before it did. I think you could have pulled off a great ending at about a chapter 5, if you changed the story a bit, kept Flutters' feelings hidden, leaving rainbow to figure out, and causing her and Comet to drift apart ( yes, this would mean giving Comet some actual character flaws :P), then returning to Fluttershy to restore her broken dreams. That would have been a lovely fic. Then a second time it could have ended, right after the breakup, had the breakup been done differently, a fight (yes, this would also mean making Comet a character with some depth that wasn't perfect :P) that leads RD to 'Shy to talk about it, only to realize that he had always loved shy, and always would, and that was what mattered, Then later meet up with Comet (at a party or something) and catch up, and end their relationship s friends. Now, however much i love this adorable fluff now, i REALLY didn't like the journey Dash went on, I felt it didn't really have a purpose, and when you gave up your consistency to make it seem like it had a purpose i felt almost betrayed. Now, overall this was a great fic, and I'm only being so critical because i think this fic is worth some serious attention (and maybe clean ups?). You are a great writer, no matter how many times you use some form of "Chuckle", or how many times you leave a sentence ambiguous with too many third person pronouns, something like "She wondered if her friend would understand her, especially with her more than suspicious situation" (If there are more than 2 girls in that scene, that leaves too many hers and i dont know who you are talking about!). I have enjoyed a lot of you other work. Anyways, I aread through this because i had nothing better to do waiting for Heated to update , but I enjoyed this fic. I guess it earned a Favorite.
1038168
Alright safe to say i was too busy reading through this gargantuan mound of awesome to notice that you had been responding to my comments in the comments section of another chapter.
Again, despite all the hard criticism i gave you, i think you are a great writer and have enjoyed and will continue to enjoy your work. Its kind of my nature to find flaws in things i like, I have always been a bit of a planner, specifically a social and military planner. In my spare time i would plan out battles, find an old record of how some famous battle went down and see what i might have done, or I would think about how different economic or governing policies could work, how i would organize a small nation, etc. Since no one else that i know really shares this interest, i just count on myself to find holes in my theories and to improve them, i battle myself in a fight, i am the hard to please citizens in my own nation. So yeah, it is just kinda of me to go in and find errors... I can understand if this is annoying, but i TRY to be lighthearted about it
1038887 XD It's okay. I understand that others function differently. Unless there are glaring flaws in what I see, I don't tend to nitpick nor seek out flaws. I just sit back, give it a fair chance, and try to enjoy it. But I understand not everyone thinks this way and I know you were only doing what you do and trying to help. For that I do appreciate it. I'm also glad you were still able to enjoy my work despite it all, which does mean a lot.
1039967 XD I keep insulin and all kinds of medicine on hand for any diabetes, cavities or tummy aches I give to my readers. X'D
Ok, just for the record, I downloaded this entire document and put it into Word, and searched for chuckl (so that all forms of the word would be included in the search). Grand total for number of times you used some form of the word "chuckle" in this story....... 67!
But hey, at least it gives people a way to recognize your stories, I dunno
1040132
Honestly...
There are 93,317 words in this story. And only 67 of them are "chuckle".
I have no idea why it is bothering you so much...
1040391
Well mostly i was just curious, and the number IS low, for the story size, its true. However, When i can find at least one example of the word in almost every chapter, it sticks out. In certain areas of dialogue it is just very noticeable. Also, keep in mind that i read through this story in about a day, and after reading some of NintendoGal55's other stories, and chuckle is just used a lot in them. I noticed that it was used a lot, and once i was thinking about the word, every time it came up i just noticed it all the more. I mean to be perfectly fair, it is a good word to describe the kind of laugh one might imagine rainbow having in some of the written situations, and writers will always tell you to use a word like "chuckle" instead of "laughed lightly" because of not wanting to use adverbs. I just noticed it. Chuckle for RD, giggle for Flutters, and cajoling for pinky (I'm not sure that was used in this story, but in others, admittedly few, but more than once, and cajoling is the type of word you will notice every time you read). And its not like i couldn't say that other authors use certain words a lot. I tend to use "although" a lot when i write, for instance.
I just like to point these things out.
1041162
This is not the problem of the story.
It's like when some people can't get rid of some songs stuck in their heads.
This could be any other word.
I'm sure that most of the people that read this story just didn't notice the fact you are pointing out.
And I know what I am talking about.
There were some moments in my life when some words were just stuck in my head,
and I just kept noticing those words everywhere.
As I said, it's like when a song is stuck in you head, except it is with a word.
It can happen with anything.
Well....
I really enjoyed this! It was a little short, but it didn't make it any less enjoyable. Overall, I have enjoyed this story very much and I can't wait for the epilogue.
Hey NintendoGal55! I just checked out your youtube channel again today. I love the videos, you do a good job. You deserve your subscribers, 100%! Part of the reason I checked it out if because I saw that there hasn't been any updates here in a few days so I checked to see where activity went, I went to youtube to see a bunch of recent videos on your channel. Awesome videos however when are you going to update here? I don't want to be rude. I would just love you to update here....... I mean, only if you don't mind...............
As always, remember to stay GREAT!
1119378 Thanks! X3 Don't worry, I'll be updating soon!
I have news. My family and I are taking care of an abandoned kitten. It is so cute! It loves me. I say it because we don't know the gender.
However it makes me wonder...... who would abandon something as pure, innocent, and lovable as a kitten? It makes me sad.
That's all! Keep up great work! Also, sorry if I am posting too many comments.
As always, remember to stay GREAT!
1132737 Awww, that's sweet! Good for you! Take good care of that kitty!
1132737
That is so sweet! Kittens are so cute!
I wish you good luck with taking care of the kitten!
1119429
That's very good news!
I was waiting for updates. But I didn't write about it, because I didn't want to make you feel under pressure.
Take all the time you need to write!