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Callos Sombra


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This fan fic is based on the end of the world Aka the Earth, after the worlds major volcano's go off,
first yellow stone then more across the planet. It is loosely tied to a fan fiction based on another writers story but from more or lest my point of view. The viewer is more or lest unsure about his reality and wonders if what he sees is real or not up till the end and describes what he seen in the past be it a dream or maybe he had traveled to equestria as a test to see what sort of people humans are. He becomes a bit more sure of himself when he sees her enter her world from theirs to take as many humans to save us as a species. Many think its the end of the world and don't trust her.

This is more or less a dream for him.

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Comments ( 6 )

Now, the trick is to keep writing and make improvements. :raritywink:

Taking that brave first step is always the hardest thing to do.

7136061 For sure xD lol, I just need to take my time when writing them out and hope for the best, I'm not sure how many I might put out yet but dreams happen each night so I might just go that route and thank my night Mistress for send me dreams. :twilightsmile:
Really happy you liked this even if it's a bit short.

7136147 Keep writing. You'll get better. Ask for help. They'll help you get better. Be passionate about your writing. It will help you get better. But, most importantly, have fun when you write!

That's the best part of putting words on paper or the screen. The joy you feel as your imagination comes to life and others can see what wonders you think of.

Good first attempt! Don't ever stop and just keep writing!

7136194 Yeah I heard that, lol I think this came out well due to the emotional connection I had to it, I know it's a bit short but most dreams are that way. To be honest I found it rather difficult to finish due to said emotions at the end..
It was just my wish to try and see if others felt what I did when I wrote this story. Just want to say thanks for you and kudz support and hope you both enjoy more of my writing in the future.

This is pretty good. Have a like.

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