A tragic event leads to the near death of somepony Rainbow Dash holds dear. While a man finds himself in an entirely different world, and body. He must now adapt to his new surroundings, and try to fix the broken lives of those around him.
What would you do, if you found yourself with Aliens & Rainbows?
Yes, it is inspired by the song "Aliens & Rainbows", By Ferras.
This is my first serious story, first story I've ever written in fact!
Criticism is welcome, but please be gentle!
Picture by kawaiipiepied3
Chapters (5)
Blaze: Dammit, that was the third time in a row! *loses consciousness* Make that fourth...
Seriously, this guy gets knocked out so many times it's almost funny. Also, this is the third human X Dash fic I've read this week, they're growing to be almost as common as AppleDash fics.
Still, I do like how he goes into shock from all of the new crap going on around him, rather than adjusting quickly like a Gary-Stu.
COCAINE makes this story good.
DAAAWWWW!!!
The door was located in the middle of the room, not supported by anything, it gave an ominous glow that was dimly lighting the room. Not knowing what to do he walked up to observe the mysterious door. He inspected the door closely, noticing that indeed it was not propped against anything; nothing connected to its hinges, and he could clearly see around the door.
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Oh! My....
OH THE HORROR....ITS THE DOOR!!!!
HMM... I WONDER WHO APPLEJACK LOVED? IT OBVIOUSLY ISN'T HINTED AT GLARINGLY AND CLEARLY.
Lol, just kidding. I know who wanted us to pick that up, but i gotta say, RD is pretty dense if she didn't.
this is brilliant.. thanks for writing it. will be looking forward to the new chapters which are hopefully not too far off
60756 yeah it was about as subtle as a sledge hammer to the temple
61128
As an air horn to the ear
This story is... amazing. Certainly a clever idea. Can't wait to read more!
Dear Faithful Readers,
If you are reading this than you have probably already discovered that this story was discontinued...
It was a multitude of things but most of all I didn't like where it was going. But please don't worry, I will be doing a rewrite soon! And it will be better than this incoherent monstrosity! Never the less I would like to say Thank you... Thank you for the kind feed back, and thank you for sticking with it, when I obviously couldn't. You have all helped me in a great many ways, more than you would think. I love this community greatly, even though it is widely misunderstood, it has changed who I am, and who I'll become, for the better. Sorry to get sentimental on all of you but I have three things left to say...
I'm Sorry... (For ending this story)
Thank You...(For sharing your time)
and this might seem out of nowhere but,
I Love You...(For being the kind of people that I like to be around, A Brony. To me the word "Brony" has so much more meaning.)
Refer to this link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DPqsl3SDUr0 "A Long Way From Equestria" By MandoPony for more heart wrenching feelings.(Take note of the top comment
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Sincerely,
Skyro503
Dammit. I was really enjoying this one.
Love and tolerate, bro. Sorry to here this is being discontinued, I rather liked it.
Love and Tolerance man, never forget Love and Tolerance. oh and
CAN I USE YOUR OC BLAZE?
Well
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Damn
well it was a shame cause there was potentiall but still love and tolerance
84312 Don't worry, this version is being discontinued, but I will rewrite (at least for the most part) the story later on. Maybe sooner than you think!
84410 Yah! Sure go right on ahead! I'd actually appreciate it!
Oh and remember like I said earlier, when one door closes another one opens...
Expect some short stories soon, and continuation (or reimagination) of the pony world I've built here. Also expect some Fluttershy-OC shipping and some Pink(amena Diane) Pie/OC Shipping!
I'm sorry to hear that this has been discontinued, I was enjoying it immensely. It was the first story with a human in Equestria that I loved. I thought the idea behind the story was clever.
And, while it does make me sad to know this will not be finished (in its current state) I understand, I have seen it before, I have been there before.
I look forward to whatever rewrite you decide to give this.
Was he hit in the head by a rock? Hah!
CO-CA-INE
Well...bugger.
this annoyed the crap out of me, i must know when you restart this cause it was really well done!
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Sorry...I've been going through a rut lately...bunch of home problems, but recently I've been feeling much better and I have been thinking of reopening this in fact!
I don't want to make promises I can't keep but I will try to get the "remake" up soon!
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I have to agree with that, I'm actually getting tired of the "fainting 'cause of sensory overload" trope, seriously, it's like most fanfiction OC's suffer from narcolepsy.
Though, where are you running into the stories that the main character doesn't panic and go into shock when they wake up surrounded by ponies?
... And now I just realized I'm responding to a three year old comment...