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Fabulosity
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Revenge...
A second installment, I imagine?
6964851 Oh, it's a possibility!
6966261 That would be wonderful. I'm curious to see what Sunset's plan for revenge will be if such a sequel is made
Interesting A sequel would be cool!
6966948 Thank you, as I said to Voyager below; it could happen! ^-^
I'm into non-con quite a bit but seeing my favorite wifu getting this treatment... Yeah, not into it unfortunately :/
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You're not the only one.
Sunset gets non-con gangbanged thanks to Dazzling magic.
While the premise is promising, there’s one thing that really holds back my “Like” click: the grammatical structure.
Throughout the entire story, you have one massive paragraph with the group perspective, then follow it up with another huge paragraph of the exact same sequence of events from Sunset’s perspective.
It’s so prevalent in the piece that I must ask: why don’t you just choose one perspective and stick with it?
I regret to sound so rude, but I can’t think of any softer way to get my point across. It was that detracting from the experience, for me.
I certainly love this; unfortunately Sunset's will and spirit weren't irreparably shattered.
Since Sunset's now extremely late to the Battle of the Bands, I'm guessing the Sirens won? After all, in the actual movie, it was Sunset joining in which turned the tide, but in this she's not physically there, nor would she have enough energy, to do that. Hmm...Siren victory...