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Where did you come up with the name Sally Gailor?
6973955 Sally was made up. Gailor is a French derived, profession-based last-name. It was, of course, given to families who were in the profession of being prison guards. It is the maiden name of my mother :)
I'm not even gonna be a smart-ass. That was fucking awesome. Three chapters in one day? You are a word machine! I like the way you played the queen. It showed a real sense of evil and malice, and yet still she was a fair and competent ruler. An excellent contrast to Queen Crysalis.
6974099 I think my contempt of Chrysalis' methods is well documented now. She is a weak queen, her motives are petty, her plans small-minded. Just be thankful it wasn't Queen Fangs who decided to take the pony empire in her jaws, I doubt we would have had such a happy season following that event.
There was two instincts - There were two instincts
slathering - did you mean 'imbuing' here?
herself horse - herself hoarse
Sweet couldn't be - Sharp couldn't be
Fangs hard returned - Fangs had returned
she love had - she loved had
*****
I feel awful for Queen Fangs' sacrifice. Although she is demonstrably not a 'good' pony, she has aspects of her character that are admirable, and she redeemed herself at the very end.
Queen Sharp's rule should be markedly different, I look forward to reading as you explore it... and I'm sorry you had to suffer so much anguish to share this chapter with us. Thank you.
6974248 The typos now weep as well, they were always on Fangs' side. Suffering? It wasn't suffering. I cried because she was, right to the bitter end, fighting with every ounce of her being, she had one last battle in her and though it cost her her life, Fangs won.
wow I did not see this coming Queen Fangs giving her self like this.
super good story, I am still behind a few chapters but I am getting there slowly.
Yeah, Fang was no Alicorn. It all ties together.
You're right she lost, Fangs won, but the cost was too high.